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We're thrilled to see you back at it! Your storytelling has always captured us, and after two years, we can’t wait to dive back into the world you've created. Picking up the pen again is no small feat, and we’re all here cheering you on. Keep pushing forward—you've got a community ready to support every word. Welcome back, and here’s to the next chapter! 📖✨
Me pregunto si es correcto lo que dicen en los comentarios de que el prota es un anti héroe, por lo poco que he leído y se ha mostrado de las mentalidad del protagonista hasta el capítulo 5 puedo decir que es un villano No se había convertido en un bullyng o un asesino psicópata porque le faltaba poder Casan estos pasados trágicos qué le ponen a los protagonistas para que el autor justifique la proyección de sus oscuros y viles deseos, mientras se hace autofelación con la historia
Im not reading this book anymore I read up to chapter 22 and it’s always misunderstandings that can be easily resolved but aren’t, it’s more of a comidy book which isn’t my type.
Great Mc development ,very detailed and informative in setting up environment ,fights scenes make me want to see this as an anime. Definitely a must read.
I really enjoyed this book, something happened with the writer though, and he is no longer writing the book, which I feel is too bad. Despite the other reviews, it is a good book about a human mc steadily abandoning his humanity but still holding on with a single anchor, a girl.
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The book is nice womderful story it’s so sad that it’s a year now with no updates, the MC is wonderful but i think the choice of killing the hair zombie was really un like him am sure she would have been a more than valuable ally but what is done is done just please bring back the updates
Bro there’s no way you’re not back yet F the trolls an get backd at it your story is🔥
The writing quality for this book is amazing given the platform and the speed at which this book was written. But the reason I placed this book at five stars is because of the author's comments. Update notes, ect. he was very clearly trying to improve the book to the best of his ability. The story wasn't entirely original in its base and format. But it has set itself apart in more than enough ways to be considered original and well written.I have noticed several comments by the author pertaining to a group of trolls that have been posting false reviews and accusations. Yes FALSE reviews and accusations. I hope he decides to pick this story back up, but it may have been discontinued.
one of the best ones ive read. i really enjoyed the opening arc. i wish the author would continue with this story. ill keep checking back periodically and looking forward to more.
This was quickly growing to be my next favorite book, sadly realized it's no longer being updated.
overall this story so far is great, really disappointed that it hasn't been updated in 5 months tho
Love the story and character development. The only misgiving I have is the lack of updates in past few months I really hope the author continues working on this amazing book.
this is a top tier apocalypse novel. everything is just perfect but why the f. . author isn't updating new chapters? did he drop it or not, it's already been over 5 months and there's no news 😞😞
I find the story very addictive, seeing how a person on the edges of social society fall to being inhuman both mentally & physically, slowly being shifted into the eyes of those shaken by the very foundation of the world changing, making his active changing into a monster visible to all whos true personality is coming out in times of great peril, making the worst of the worst meet those who challenge their innermost demons, be that of pride, gluttony, greed, or envy. Yeah… I love the series, grammar mistakes do nothing to the actual story, although this story wil suck your FP’es dry as it almost is a constant 2 FP in the later chapters.
I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint
One of the best books I have read on this app. can't wait for more chapters to come out. this book isn't like others i have read on hear, but reading something different just makes it better. 😃
this is sooooo good!!! it is the best apocalypse LN i have read (their is also orv so yah) but really great i recommend people to definitely read this Also Author when are you gonna update the chapters i have waited for so long for other chapters
This has been a great story that I’m sure many can relate to. I hope it’s not over after ch 108. I’m curious about this God, and how the rest of the world is.
great story highly intriguing kept me waiting for every next chapter with great anticipation and also the character design isn't very bland.
I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.
Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one
Why are the good novels being dropped?😔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔😔. It was jus getting good too.
I appreciated the start, then lovey dovey starts kicking in the story from absolutely nowhere. we move from a psycho MC to a simp. I am so disappointed by the char developpement. I don't know why the author chose this road for the MC... and that girl Reg is plotting almost in front of him, she is still alive. sight...
at first you see potentially evil mc.then failure.novel dropped................................................................................
love the book here's a review the book for me is extremely good so far the only issues I might have with it is that their is way to many skills and it's very hard to keep track of them. also I hope you feel better I mean that one non gender specific being was calling you homophobic and I got a good laugh out of that one lol
I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel. Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.
I don't understand why many people are complaining. Author, I think your novel is a breath of fresh air among all the harem/R18/Bang girls with my system trash that are coming out these days. I like the story, though a bit cliche, it is well done. The characters are good. I would suggest you speed up the progression time a bit, cuz the first 100 chapters talk about the events happening in the same day. This could also clear up the mobs showing up again with their similar dialogues. The grammar is good and the world background for now is simple, which is good because it has only been about 2 or 3 days since the story started, why do we want to know about situations in other parts of the world so soon. Keep writing. Good job.
Honestly no idea why there are so many negative reviews. From what I read, multiple reviews are comparing this to MTL when there's legit nothing wrong with the grammar. Like honestly the story is good, the grammar is good, characters are interesting but can get annoying since they keep coming back and begging the MC. Other than that I think the novel is great!
We're thrilled to see you back at it! Your storytelling has always captured us, and after two years, we can’t wait to dive back into the world you've created. Picking up the pen again is no small feat, and we’re all here cheering you on. Keep pushing forward—you've got a community ready to support every word. Welcome back, and here’s to the next chapter! 📖✨
Me pregunto si es correcto lo que dicen en los comentarios de que el prota es un anti héroe, por lo poco que he leído y se ha mostrado de las mentalidad del protagonista hasta el capítulo 5 puedo decir que es un villano No se había convertido en un bullyng o un asesino psicópata porque le faltaba poder Casan estos pasados trágicos qué le ponen a los protagonistas para que el autor justifique la proyección de sus oscuros y viles deseos, mientras se hace autofelación con la historia
Im not reading this book anymore I read up to chapter 22 and it’s always misunderstandings that can be easily resolved but aren’t, it’s more of a comidy book which isn’t my type.
Great Mc development ,very detailed and informative in setting up environment ,fights scenes make me want to see this as an anime. Definitely a must read.
I really enjoyed this book, something happened with the writer though, and he is no longer writing the book, which I feel is too bad. Despite the other reviews, it is a good book about a human mc steadily abandoning his humanity but still holding on with a single anchor, a girl.
Revelar Spoiler The book is nice womderful story it’s so sad that it’s a year now with no updates, the MC is wonderful but i think the choice of killing the hair zombie was really un like him am sure she would have been a more than valuable ally but what is done is done just please bring back the updates
Bro there’s no way you’re not back yet F the trolls an get backd at it your story is🔥
The writing quality for this book is amazing given the platform and the speed at which this book was written. But the reason I placed this book at five stars is because of the author's comments. Update notes, ect. he was very clearly trying to improve the book to the best of his ability. The story wasn't entirely original in its base and format. But it has set itself apart in more than enough ways to be considered original and well written.I have noticed several comments by the author pertaining to a group of trolls that have been posting false reviews and accusations. Yes FALSE reviews and accusations. I hope he decides to pick this story back up, but it may have been discontinued.
one of the best ones ive read. i really enjoyed the opening arc. i wish the author would continue with this story. ill keep checking back periodically and looking forward to more.
This was quickly growing to be my next favorite book, sadly realized it's no longer being updated.
overall this story so far is great, really disappointed that it hasn't been updated in 5 months tho
Love the story and character development. The only misgiving I have is the lack of updates in past few months I really hope the author continues working on this amazing book.
this is a top tier apocalypse novel. everything is just perfect but why the f. . author isn't updating new chapters? did he drop it or not, it's already been over 5 months and there's no news 😞😞
I find the story very addictive, seeing how a person on the edges of social society fall to being inhuman both mentally & physically, slowly being shifted into the eyes of those shaken by the very foundation of the world changing, making his active changing into a monster visible to all whos true personality is coming out in times of great peril, making the worst of the worst meet those who challenge their innermost demons, be that of pride, gluttony, greed, or envy. Yeah… I love the series, grammar mistakes do nothing to the actual story, although this story wil suck your FP’es dry as it almost is a constant 2 FP in the later chapters.
I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint
One of the best books I have read on this app. can't wait for more chapters to come out. this book isn't like others i have read on hear, but reading something different just makes it better. 😃
this is sooooo good!!! it is the best apocalypse LN i have read (their is also orv so yah) but really great i recommend people to definitely read this Also Author when are you gonna update the chapters i have waited for so long for other chapters
This has been a great story that I’m sure many can relate to. I hope it’s not over after ch 108. I’m curious about this God, and how the rest of the world is.
great story highly intriguing kept me waiting for every next chapter with great anticipation and also the character design isn't very bland.
I'm on around 100 chapters in and sad that i dont have any more fast passes, especially cause i have some genre passes that i feel should work on it, like, fantasy, but anyways: Love the story, the characters and the system. The fact that there is someone overlooking them and we do know he is making the system fair is interesting, the main character does act more like an outcast and monster but still goes by his morals. There is only one person he cares about and i like that cause it would be a shame that he has no one who knows him from before and is on his side, i like it when there is someone to be shocked. I like the fact that most people do see him as a monster but some just respect his strength (specifically one character that i like) but still get disgusted by some of his inhumane actions. The story so far is entertaining and i hope it stays that way. There are things to look forward to and characters you want to meet that you are just told about they exist and a bit more info for why they matter. Personally i feel the story is just right and don't really see anything bad with it. Now just wanna say this for those checking the comments before they go read it, I think it is worth giving a chance and yes, one of the monsters is gonna be with the MC. I don't mind it, in fact i like monsters and half monsters half humans but i do know some people complained in the comments so if you don't like those, you don't have to read it. I do gotta say that the relationships in this novel do not feel that forced, especially because quite a lot is fleshed out and/or explained. If something isn't, the Author will answer comments so you can ask him. This is another thing that i love about it, the Author does check the comments and, quite often, answer them. Highly recommend reading it and good job to the Author.
Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one
Why are the good novels being dropped?😔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔😔. It was jus getting good too.
I appreciated the start, then lovey dovey starts kicking in the story from absolutely nowhere. we move from a psycho MC to a simp. I am so disappointed by the char developpement. I don't know why the author chose this road for the MC... and that girl Reg is plotting almost in front of him, she is still alive. sight...
at first you see potentially evil mc.then failure.novel dropped................................................................................
love the book here's a review the book for me is extremely good so far the only issues I might have with it is that their is way to many skills and it's very hard to keep track of them. also I hope you feel better I mean that one non gender specific being was calling you homophobic and I got a good laugh out of that one lol
I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel. Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.
I don't understand why many people are complaining. Author, I think your novel is a breath of fresh air among all the harem/R18/Bang girls with my system trash that are coming out these days. I like the story, though a bit cliche, it is well done. The characters are good. I would suggest you speed up the progression time a bit, cuz the first 100 chapters talk about the events happening in the same day. This could also clear up the mobs showing up again with their similar dialogues. The grammar is good and the world background for now is simple, which is good because it has only been about 2 or 3 days since the story started, why do we want to know about situations in other parts of the world so soon. Keep writing. Good job.
Honestly no idea why there are so many negative reviews. From what I read, multiple reviews are comparing this to MTL when there's legit nothing wrong with the grammar. Like honestly the story is good, the grammar is good, characters are interesting but can get annoying since they keep coming back and begging the MC. Other than that I think the novel is great!
Need character pictures