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You are here to check out reviews, well I assure you, it's a beautiful story. The thrilling part of stories that are not the usual tropes is that you can't really tell where the story is heading the specifics of the story, and this book here has it all. Superb job author ❤️
Superb read. Enjoying the strength of the female character and her string will to defy the odds of the ruler of her realm. Awesome job author...
The story is great, even though the chapters are long, it will leave you wanting for more. Although there times that words or sentences are a bit confusing, using context clues, you can still understand it somehow. Good job🧡
Amazing story with fantastic world building. There are so many things in this fantasy world that it really made me stick to the novel continuously. The only thing which I found pointing out was that the author needs to increase the vocabulary. Whenever I read the sentences it cuts so abruptly that I need to re read again this disrupting my flow. On the other hand, everything has been described so precisely that you can see the effort author put in this novel. There was a minor issue, which I've already mentioned in the comment. I wish author best of luck for his work☺️
Okay so after reading the story I have come to this that the plot is very well adapted to. The characters are nicely written tho some of them are hard to understand as their emotions are not clear. All in all good work Author
The writing style is appeasing with the pace and paragraph. This story is so good you will love it while reading chapters all the characters are awesome and world building are super .Great work author
Nicely written, fast-paced story. I was invested in Adriana's life from the start. even the introduction of Anlai was good. Hope to read more of it. good going author.
This book is awesome. Love the way it's going and I can't wait to read more chapters. The fact that it has a lot of description makes the story much more east to read.
An intense story line with strong characters is ably assisted by the quality writing..a great read..looking forward for more and more...keep updating
The story can make anyone addictive Keep up the good work! The main characters have good development. Hope to see more from the chapters, waiting how they end up.
So far, it is an intriguing story but I had to stop because of those long paragraphs that can be divided into two. Grammar and punctuation symbols are often misplaced/lacking as well. Best of luck to you, Author.
Strong FLs are just my cup of tea and this one here is awesome. The story unfolds nicely and the plot is good as well. Good job on this author!
First of all let me tell you. The Mc is OP. I really love to read about strong FML that's why enjoyed each and every chapters. The action sequence is mind blowing. I would love to keep reading. Keep up the good work author. [img=update][img=update]
This is amazing, the action and tension feels more like a male lead novel though this has a female lead. I like strong characters and that's why I think that the MC is really awesome. The Story is intense, and keeps on getting better with each new chapter!
Heaven's Flame? I actually didn't think the book would go this far but I'm actually enjoying the book. Adriana with her string features and the maniacal Anlai giving a hot pursuit.❤️❤️❤️
I find this creation interesting to read, with a great scenarios for every chapters. You can love the FL's character, a fighter one which makes the story runs quite well. In the traditional world of publishing, narration always in the past tense and the dialogue in the present tense, plus you need some proofreading and add appropriate punctuation marks, though I could say that it never affect the interest of the story. A great read for everybody
I admired your story telling, it's unique and detailed, the world building is solid as the setting was described excellently. There's no pressure while reading, except the buildup ofc🤭 and good work [img=update][img=recommend]
Great world building. The story line is well written that it matures like fine wine as you read the next chapter lol. The author knows how to present her vision in words and that helps you see the world through their eyes. The characters are relatable. The grammar is quite good, the only issue I might have is that the paragraphs are bulky but the way the story is told it does not take anything away from it. A good read
Nice! Hope there's more to come. .............................................................................................................................
Character descriptions are really well done (probably the best aspect of the story), painting a clear image in the mind of the reader. Barring a few grammatical errors, the writing is pretty good. The pace of the story is also moving along at a fair pace.
Loved the synopsis ,the story is well written ,I haven't help but feel like shading a tear whenever I think about Adriana.I love how this novel was described love the updating stability but also can't wait to read the next chapter ,I promise to read this book whenever I get time to spare .I highly recommend this book ,great job author!!!
The quality of representing the emotional components and bringing a tension to a reader while read is great. Interesting first chapters about the prisoned MC. Hope it won't get worse and wish all the luck to a writer in developing this story!
The quality of writing and the exposition for the background and characters are lovely written and detailed. I look forward to reading more!
I have been struggling to find a new book under a new author that I can follow along as they write each chapter, especially one that I enjoy. This Book meets and exceeds my anticipations! The descriptions are eloquent and of high vocabulary. The world building is amazing and the plot sucks you in like a black hole right from the beginning! I hope Adriana gets her revenge and makes those filthy royals pay dearly.
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
Well written the storyline grows well through the chapters, a good story development. The image created by the author is admirable. Overall a grest story
It's Sunus here, and this is just an author's review of his work. If you have any doubts towards my work or any theme of confusion you might be wondering about, feel free to comment below❤️.
You are here to check out reviews, well I assure you, it's a beautiful story. The thrilling part of stories that are not the usual tropes is that you can't really tell where the story is heading the specifics of the story, and this book here has it all. Superb job author ❤️
Superb read. Enjoying the strength of the female character and her string will to defy the odds of the ruler of her realm. Awesome job author...
The story is great, even though the chapters are long, it will leave you wanting for more. Although there times that words or sentences are a bit confusing, using context clues, you can still understand it somehow. Good job🧡
Amazing story with fantastic world building. There are so many things in this fantasy world that it really made me stick to the novel continuously. The only thing which I found pointing out was that the author needs to increase the vocabulary. Whenever I read the sentences it cuts so abruptly that I need to re read again this disrupting my flow. On the other hand, everything has been described so precisely that you can see the effort author put in this novel. There was a minor issue, which I've already mentioned in the comment. I wish author best of luck for his work☺️
Okay so after reading the story I have come to this that the plot is very well adapted to. The characters are nicely written tho some of them are hard to understand as their emotions are not clear. All in all good work Author
The writing style is appeasing with the pace and paragraph. This story is so good you will love it while reading chapters all the characters are awesome and world building are super .Great work author
Nicely written, fast-paced story. I was invested in Adriana's life from the start. even the introduction of Anlai was good. Hope to read more of it. good going author.
This book is awesome. Love the way it's going and I can't wait to read more chapters. The fact that it has a lot of description makes the story much more east to read.
An intense story line with strong characters is ably assisted by the quality writing..a great read..looking forward for more and more...keep updating
The story can make anyone addictive Keep up the good work! The main characters have good development. Hope to see more from the chapters, waiting how they end up.
So far, it is an intriguing story but I had to stop because of those long paragraphs that can be divided into two. Grammar and punctuation symbols are often misplaced/lacking as well. Best of luck to you, Author.
Strong FLs are just my cup of tea and this one here is awesome. The story unfolds nicely and the plot is good as well. Good job on this author!
First of all let me tell you. The Mc is OP. I really love to read about strong FML that's why enjoyed each and every chapters. The action sequence is mind blowing. I would love to keep reading. Keep up the good work author. [img=update][img=update]
This is amazing, the action and tension feels more like a male lead novel though this has a female lead. I like strong characters and that's why I think that the MC is really awesome. The Story is intense, and keeps on getting better with each new chapter!
Heaven's Flame? I actually didn't think the book would go this far but I'm actually enjoying the book. Adriana with her string features and the maniacal Anlai giving a hot pursuit.❤️❤️❤️
I find this creation interesting to read, with a great scenarios for every chapters. You can love the FL's character, a fighter one which makes the story runs quite well. In the traditional world of publishing, narration always in the past tense and the dialogue in the present tense, plus you need some proofreading and add appropriate punctuation marks, though I could say that it never affect the interest of the story. A great read for everybody
I admired your story telling, it's unique and detailed, the world building is solid as the setting was described excellently. There's no pressure while reading, except the buildup ofc🤭 and good work [img=update][img=recommend]
Great world building. The story line is well written that it matures like fine wine as you read the next chapter lol. The author knows how to present her vision in words and that helps you see the world through their eyes. The characters are relatable. The grammar is quite good, the only issue I might have is that the paragraphs are bulky but the way the story is told it does not take anything away from it. A good read
Nice! Hope there's more to come. .............................................................................................................................
Character descriptions are really well done (probably the best aspect of the story), painting a clear image in the mind of the reader. Barring a few grammatical errors, the writing is pretty good. The pace of the story is also moving along at a fair pace.
Loved the synopsis ,the story is well written ,I haven't help but feel like shading a tear whenever I think about Adriana.I love how this novel was described love the updating stability but also can't wait to read the next chapter ,I promise to read this book whenever I get time to spare .I highly recommend this book ,great job author!!!
The quality of representing the emotional components and bringing a tension to a reader while read is great. Interesting first chapters about the prisoned MC. Hope it won't get worse and wish all the luck to a writer in developing this story!
The quality of writing and the exposition for the background and characters are lovely written and detailed. I look forward to reading more!
I have been struggling to find a new book under a new author that I can follow along as they write each chapter, especially one that I enjoy. This Book meets and exceeds my anticipations! The descriptions are eloquent and of high vocabulary. The world building is amazing and the plot sucks you in like a black hole right from the beginning! I hope Adriana gets her revenge and makes those filthy royals pay dearly.
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
Well written the storyline grows well through the chapters, a good story development. The image created by the author is admirable. Overall a grest story
It's Sunus here, and this is just an author's review of his work. If you have any doubts towards my work or any theme of confusion you might be wondering about, feel free to comment below❤️.