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It's a really good fic. Pacing, plot, Mc, writing... The only fault it has is its inconsistencies with numbers and leveling up. I would advice the author to change the system for any future projects and make it similar to "the dark wolf shiro"s newer works wherein abilities/traits are set in stone and not defined by numbers.
Rare Fanfiction of "ATLA" and even a good one what do you want more? In my opinion author checks on all points, The author handles the perfect balance to write an original story but still having the canon as a world background. These aspect of his/her fanfiction makes it very interesting to read bc it gives a kinda "small" world in the anime a bigger setting, As for Stability of Updates author may doesnt update as fast as other authors tho thats not the point in "stability". Also until now author also seems to continue on even tho RL issues are there hard to find here as of most ff get sadly dropped when RL happens. All in All its a great fanfiction and I hope to read more of it.
A fanfic with a stupid character who can only pretend to be smart because the author made the side characters even stupider. It seems like everyone is having a constant stroke. The MC creates unnecessary conflicts and in such a stupid way that it makes you want to slap him. He is only saved from the consequences thanks to the armor of the plot.
Me gusta la historia asta el momento de el espíritu del caos,perdió todo el sentido y dirrección la historia,quedó inconclusa y el otro mundo fue totalmente innecesario
I prefer Mc's initial attitude to conquer the world. Look at him now being very emotional, careless and acting like Mc China. Look At Him Now He's Like Jesus And Saved The World 🤣 .He Will Continue To Become Strong And Travel To Other Worlds He's Very Fickle and That's Not Good For The Future MC So Stupid
Since I'm reading the super gene fic I had to check if I reviewed once again. Good stuff
I love the smallest details that you bring into the story, and you complement it with incredible things. _---------------_------------_---------_
Es un fanfic interesante de avatar me gusta que haga lo necesario para lograr sus objetivos sin exagerar tanto además es bueno que actualice muy seguido ya lo habían dejado pausado, en cuanto a la forma en que evoluciona su pode no se siente que sea demasiado op lo que hace entretenidas las peleas
After reading Ascending to Supremacy and heaven's gene I am sure that it is going to be another banger from Sovereign .So here is my review before reading and I will give another review after reading .
Dude you write the ascending to supremacy One of the best fanfic i have read and finish But this fanfic the mc just make so mhe mhe decisions and its making the storg bland
One of the few Avatar Fan Fictions i've read. although the updates are rather faulty rn, its as good as it is. just the irregularity of the update is the issue which the author can fix in his own schedule. Very good! i'm not good giving critics so i'll just spout nonsense and praise this little god of ours.
I've read till chapter 56, amazing work, Genji is a little Edgy McEdgeLord at the start but improves insanely fast, I have been without proper character development in fanfictions for so long and now that I'm in front of it, I have to say, It's glorious. Thanks, author, I love it, keep up the good work!
best avatar fanfic, unhurried power development, good mc conspirator. the author is enthusiastic about updating... [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Yo, ong…this is one of, if not the best, atla fanfic I’ve ever read, easily. Like it’s funny how good this is, scheming, anti-ish-hero, morals…huh? What are those???, protag with balls…😏, def and he uses them in more ways than one…very well written, has a goal that I feel like will change, has no qualms doing what it takes to achieve what he wants…just read it okay? Go on shoo shoo go on
MC is against sexists, what a good simp. I suspect that the author is a feminist woman or is in a relationship with someone who is a feminist and/or a socialist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Great story until know which is chapter 52 great MC loved the different pov's can't wait to see the avatar again to see his reactions.
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It's from mlt not because it feels like a Chinese novel, frogs and wells, and the fact that katara blushes as she blushes for her sworn enemy the fire nation if they saw the program they know that if they harm their loved ones she is a capable murderous psychopath whatever it is, it's not being a hater it's just that chinese fanfic novels glorify their protagonist and despise the main cast that is not a woman who will end up with the protagonist
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love the story espachely the development with azula genji can be less edgy thou ,and he needs to stope hating on avatar gang for no reason i understand him not trusting a group of 12 year olds to save the world but hating them is too much
well, I am not gonna lie, this novel has immense potential, but the past 10 or so chapters have been less then desirable. The Mc seems to have regressed inside of progressing, he seems to have lost his edge and is not making best of decisions. I used to enjoy reading this, like a lot but now it doesn't feel the same, the starting chapters are great, but at current pace the story is going towards its ruin, and the author also doesn't seem to be taking any criticism or he just flat out ignores the comments, many people seem to have been voicing their but have been ignored, so I don't think that he plans to improve, so I would say that read it casually, but don't get invested into it, you might get disappointed.
the only thing i didn't like is he isn't loyal to suki or any other girls je'd encounter. that's my issue. everything else is good. tho i'd like it if he'd just tone down a little with his shissy fantasy about dumping girls.
I tried to endure it, but the character design for MC is really not good. in no way would he have survived with all the stupid things he keeps doing, and his personality is complete garbage.
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The Most Perfect "The Last Airbender" Fanfic That I Have Ever Read, such clarity & schemes, though world building is missing, along with drama, still it is the best fanfic I have read so far. Kudos To The Writer 😍🤩😍
It's a really good fic. Pacing, plot, Mc, writing... The only fault it has is its inconsistencies with numbers and leveling up. I would advice the author to change the system for any future projects and make it similar to "the dark wolf shiro"s newer works wherein abilities/traits are set in stone and not defined by numbers.
Rare Fanfiction of "ATLA" and even a good one what do you want more? In my opinion author checks on all points, The author handles the perfect balance to write an original story but still having the canon as a world background. These aspect of his/her fanfiction makes it very interesting to read bc it gives a kinda "small" world in the anime a bigger setting, As for Stability of Updates author may doesnt update as fast as other authors tho thats not the point in "stability". Also until now author also seems to continue on even tho RL issues are there hard to find here as of most ff get sadly dropped when RL happens. All in All its a great fanfiction and I hope to read more of it.
A fanfic with a stupid character who can only pretend to be smart because the author made the side characters even stupider. It seems like everyone is having a constant stroke. The MC creates unnecessary conflicts and in such a stupid way that it makes you want to slap him. He is only saved from the consequences thanks to the armor of the plot.
Me gusta la historia asta el momento de el espíritu del caos,perdió todo el sentido y dirrección la historia,quedó inconclusa y el otro mundo fue totalmente innecesario
I prefer Mc's initial attitude to conquer the world. Look at him now being very emotional, careless and acting like Mc China. Look At Him Now He's Like Jesus And Saved The World 🤣 .He Will Continue To Become Strong And Travel To Other Worlds He's Very Fickle and That's Not Good For The Future MC So Stupid
Since I'm reading the super gene fic I had to check if I reviewed once again. Good stuff
I love the smallest details that you bring into the story, and you complement it with incredible things. _---------------_------------_---------_
Es un fanfic interesante de avatar me gusta que haga lo necesario para lograr sus objetivos sin exagerar tanto además es bueno que actualice muy seguido ya lo habían dejado pausado, en cuanto a la forma en que evoluciona su pode no se siente que sea demasiado op lo que hace entretenidas las peleas
After reading Ascending to Supremacy and heaven's gene I am sure that it is going to be another banger from Sovereign .So here is my review before reading and I will give another review after reading .
Dude you write the ascending to supremacy One of the best fanfic i have read and finish But this fanfic the mc just make so mhe mhe decisions and its making the storg bland
One of the few Avatar Fan Fictions i've read. although the updates are rather faulty rn, its as good as it is. just the irregularity of the update is the issue which the author can fix in his own schedule. Very good! i'm not good giving critics so i'll just spout nonsense and praise this little god of ours.
I've read till chapter 56, amazing work, Genji is a little Edgy McEdgeLord at the start but improves insanely fast, I have been without proper character development in fanfictions for so long and now that I'm in front of it, I have to say, It's glorious. Thanks, author, I love it, keep up the good work!
best avatar fanfic, unhurried power development, good mc conspirator. the author is enthusiastic about updating... [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Yo, ong…this is one of, if not the best, atla fanfic I’ve ever read, easily. Like it’s funny how good this is, scheming, anti-ish-hero, morals…huh? What are those???, protag with balls…😏, def and he uses them in more ways than one…very well written, has a goal that I feel like will change, has no qualms doing what it takes to achieve what he wants…just read it okay? Go on shoo shoo go on
MC is against sexists, what a good simp. I suspect that the author is a feminist woman or is in a relationship with someone who is a feminist and/or a socialist. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Great story until know which is chapter 52 great MC loved the different pov's can't wait to see the avatar again to see his reactions.
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It's from mlt not because it feels like a Chinese novel, frogs and wells, and the fact that katara blushes as she blushes for her sworn enemy the fire nation if they saw the program they know that if they harm their loved ones she is a capable murderous psychopath whatever it is, it's not being a hater it's just that chinese fanfic novels glorify their protagonist and despise the main cast that is not a woman who will end up with the protagonist
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love the story espachely the development with azula genji can be less edgy thou ,and he needs to stope hating on avatar gang for no reason i understand him not trusting a group of 12 year olds to save the world but hating them is too much
well, I am not gonna lie, this novel has immense potential, but the past 10 or so chapters have been less then desirable. The Mc seems to have regressed inside of progressing, he seems to have lost his edge and is not making best of decisions. I used to enjoy reading this, like a lot but now it doesn't feel the same, the starting chapters are great, but at current pace the story is going towards its ruin, and the author also doesn't seem to be taking any criticism or he just flat out ignores the comments, many people seem to have been voicing their but have been ignored, so I don't think that he plans to improve, so I would say that read it casually, but don't get invested into it, you might get disappointed.
the only thing i didn't like is he isn't loyal to suki or any other girls je'd encounter. that's my issue. everything else is good. tho i'd like it if he'd just tone down a little with his shissy fantasy about dumping girls.
I tried to endure it, but the character design for MC is really not good. in no way would he have survived with all the stupid things he keeps doing, and his personality is complete garbage.
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The Most Perfect "The Last Airbender" Fanfic That I Have Ever Read, such clarity & schemes, though world building is missing, along with drama, still it is the best fanfic I have read so far. Kudos To The Writer 😍🤩😍