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this the best thing i have ever read 1 11 1 1 1 11 11 1 1 1 1 11 11 1 11 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 111 1
Me gusta mucho la historia espero que la continúes y que no dejes de hacer lo que haces es unos de los mejores fan-fiction que he logrado leer espero que sigas y gracias por entreteje mi día
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best DBZ fanfiction on MC as Frostdemon, and finally someone with good head. The strongest race on mortal level is finally realised by someone and Idiots say saiyan is overpowered, where goku trained indefinetly to gain his strength, whereas freiza trained a bit an became Golden Freiza
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great fanfic dragon ball fanfic are getting more rare especially ones where mc is reborn as something not saiyan frieza is one of my favorite characters and dragon ball is my favorite show so im loving this fanfc and i really hope you dont drop it.
I loved how the story goes, you can add characters that have a balanced force rate across the galaxy and don't just turn it into a timeline because the writer of Dragon Ball is united by Goku's perspective and doesn't talk about the seventh universe as a whole. There are a group of characters in the dark to make your story interesting
ok mc personality change is bit of plot hole but good start. waiting for more chapters 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
My only problem with this fanfic is the sudden change of the mc personality. If there were more details on the mc change, it would be better. But we only got a summary of how the mc conquered his planet.
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Nice love the frost demon race in dragon ball z so PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Interesting and a great start. I hope he becomes op and toy with everyone. Idk if there’s romance but if possible have 18. Pls update more and keep up the good work!
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Хороший фанфик мне зашол ,продолжай писать[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this the best thing i have ever read 1 11 1 1 1 11 11 1 1 1 1 11 11 1 11 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 111 1
Me gusta mucho la historia espero que la continúes y que no dejes de hacer lo que haces es unos de los mejores fan-fiction que he logrado leer espero que sigas y gracias por entreteje mi día
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best DBZ fanfiction on MC as Frostdemon, and finally someone with good head. The strongest race on mortal level is finally realised by someone and Idiots say saiyan is overpowered, where goku trained indefinetly to gain his strength, whereas freiza trained a bit an became Golden Freiza
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
great fanfic dragon ball fanfic are getting more rare especially ones where mc is reborn as something not saiyan frieza is one of my favorite characters and dragon ball is my favorite show so im loving this fanfc and i really hope you dont drop it.
I loved how the story goes, you can add characters that have a balanced force rate across the galaxy and don't just turn it into a timeline because the writer of Dragon Ball is united by Goku's perspective and doesn't talk about the seventh universe as a whole. There are a group of characters in the dark to make your story interesting
ok mc personality change is bit of plot hole but good start. waiting for more chapters 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
My only problem with this fanfic is the sudden change of the mc personality. If there were more details on the mc change, it would be better. But we only got a summary of how the mc conquered his planet.
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Nice love the frost demon race in dragon ball z so PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Interesting and a great start. I hope he becomes op and toy with everyone. Idk if there’s romance but if possible have 18. Pls update more and keep up the good work!
fantastic idea for a fanfic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This is great! Keep it up! I hope you dont drop this!