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Escreva uma avaliaçãoEverything about this novel was good until 200 chapters where the story suddenly takes a turn and dive deeply into Chinese Mythology.Most importantly, the ending of this novel really disappointed me. The author brought an abrupt end to this story. In fact, the content of the last chapter could have taken a few hundred chapters to complete, however, the author decided to end everything instantly I don't know why.I'm really disappointed with this novel. It had just started becoming interesting again before ending all of a sudden.
Another story end up with disappointment..... could have been a good wholesome story and they just ruined it. From middle the characters just became two dimensional .......I shouldn't have read the end. Last couple of chapters doesn't make sense. He also end up with her sister too....ugh....
Great novel trash ending. could've been one of the best novel out there but author fking ruined it
I would give this 5 stars because I enjoyed the novel, but the ending was so horrible that I can’t do that in good conscience
Could’ve been a good book but the last 40 chapters make it a waste of time the ending is just all shoved into one chapter as well ridiculous
Started off strong and interesting. Sadly random injection of Journey to The West that was poorly executed made the story extremely boring and going in weird directions. Also the ending 💀💀💀. Absolute disgrace what the author did. They realized that they wrote their story to the ground and axed it.
was doing good but then auther did many time skips in last 4 chapters and final chapter was just a summary/outline of what the ending woulda been
for those who want to know which chapter the mc finds out the truth about his girlfriend and meets her for the first time as his lover it started in chapter 240 they meet in chapter 245
story is good at the start but its ending is too immediate or you can say fast . The last chapter single handedly brought down the good things about the book
why does Webnovel choose the novels which are already dropped by the author ...i hate this thing about WN
The plot is very forced, the main character has multiple views that conflict with each other due to poor planning, and the "romance" is just the MC being manipulated easier then play-doh. He constantly says he will stay true to his girl but is constantly put in situations that if it was true then he would've done something else. The MC is also made to be extremely dense when it comes to his online girlfriend with her doing/giving, in my opinion, very questionable things but he simply ingores it... This review was written at chapter 180, so I say I gave this book a chance. It certainly deserves 2.6 stars.
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So this is pretty good. The romance isn’t too bad and the story starts off pretty good. My only real issue is that a lot of the cultivation stuff isn’t really in depth or explained all that much when talking about realms, it feels like more of an afterthought. like it is never explained what any of the realms are really capable of or the actual difference between them so it feels a little off when the mc suddenly starts getting immensly stronger and its hard to tell the difference. I love the characters and while I wasnt a fan of the mc sometimes I still enjoy this I’d definitely say this is worth a read for the characters but the story itself is kinda leaving me wanting a little more depth.
has good potential, but MC too overly prideful. doesn't want to accept help, assistance, advice, suggestions of ANYONE, but wants people to accept his help and tutorage.
Starts off pretty fun. Mc is show to be a hardworking, filial person who cares for his family and wants to be strong. He has an online girlfriend and says some cringe things but you can laugh it off. Though he is obnoxis with his "poor man's pride" The girlfriend though......her character is horrific. All she does is complain and cause problems for everyone. She acts as a stranger to observe mc and gets mad when Mc doesn't fawn over her and is constantly nosey and disruptive Story is poorly translated as well.
I started off loving this book. I actually read it MTL to finish it. everything was great, up until the finale. the last chapter had to settle everything, and I feel like the author just gave up at the end. it was so disappointing.
this book is not bad. I've enjoyed reading this so far and it intrigues me enough to continue reading this novel because it is interesting and exciting
MC is very stupid and hypocritical which hurts the story massively. -spots a SSS technique, doesn't want to learn it because it might be hard to cultivate while at this point has a system that speeds up cultivation and is making decent money to buy materials to help cultivate even faster, he doesn't understand the rarity of SSS techniques even though the dude has lived in the world for over 20 years and received an education there, I assume he believes that all high tier cultivation techniques are common or something. -refuses any help from his online GF but will happily receive a SECOND SSS technique from a literal stranger he met twice at that point. -believes initially that the FL is stupid/crazy when she purposely does a bad deal to give him money for free by wanting to buy a 20 dollar sword for 10k from him. He is also very antagonistic towards her while she has been relatively kind to him overall. -goes on a spiel about status, power, money doesn't matter for love to encourage a fellow teacher to get a gf but actively refuses to meet his online gf due to her being way stronger then him.
last half of the synopsis makes no freaking sense where you on crack or something 😒 the synopsis is important it's the hook and arguably the most important part of the whole book if you can't respect that what's the point of any 9f it in the first place and this is my genre too right up my alley but now I'm not reading it you'd have been better off just leaving the last half off all together GOD CAN PEOPLE NOT TAKE THERE WRITING SERIOUSLY ANYMORE...??
man i read this book in raw too it goes awesome till second last chapter from then author decided to end the novel so he gave summary in the last chapter how the book ended 🤣🤣🤣🤣
another good book have to spit 3 part for 1 chapter.... .. .. .. ...why? did webnovel not pay translator enough............................
Objectively speaking this is a great novel and for those who have even an inkling of this type of story telling then this would be a great read. however, personally I do not enjoy this novel that much. I find the common sense of the MMC and the FMC to deviate by a large margin from what I consider common sense so what I have read causing a very sharp disconnect with me and makes me feel irritable with the characters. This is just my personal subjective feelings. For others I suggest you attempt to atleast read a few chapters to see if it compatible with you but for me 40 chapters is enough.
Decent translation, but that’s all. The basic idea is interesting but the MC is unrealistic and illogical, conflict is boring and very, VERY forced, and every single character is unlikeable and unremarkable. This book isn’t worth anyones time, skip for your own sake.
Its a good like slice of life, modern cultivation world kinda story…. but it isnt what i expected. From the current chapter onwards, it seems like . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . He wont actually realize Xiaoqi is his online gf until he becomes an immortal, which makes me sad cuz i was imagining a story where his gf helps him after he reaches a certain level cuz shes tired of seeing him struggle or something but i guess not.
Everything about this novel was good until 200 chapters where the story suddenly takes a turn and dive deeply into Chinese Mythology.Most importantly, the ending of this novel really disappointed me. The author brought an abrupt end to this story. In fact, the content of the last chapter could have taken a few hundred chapters to complete, however, the author decided to end everything instantly I don't know why.I'm really disappointed with this novel. It had just started becoming interesting again before ending all of a sudden.
Another story end up with disappointment..... could have been a good wholesome story and they just ruined it. From middle the characters just became two dimensional .......I shouldn't have read the end. Last couple of chapters doesn't make sense. He also end up with her sister too....ugh....
Great novel trash ending. could've been one of the best novel out there but author fking ruined it
I would give this 5 stars because I enjoyed the novel, but the ending was so horrible that I can’t do that in good conscience
Could’ve been a good book but the last 40 chapters make it a waste of time the ending is just all shoved into one chapter as well ridiculous
Started off strong and interesting. Sadly random injection of Journey to The West that was poorly executed made the story extremely boring and going in weird directions. Also the ending 💀💀💀. Absolute disgrace what the author did. They realized that they wrote their story to the ground and axed it.
was doing good but then auther did many time skips in last 4 chapters and final chapter was just a summary/outline of what the ending woulda been
for those who want to know which chapter the mc finds out the truth about his girlfriend and meets her for the first time as his lover it started in chapter 240 they meet in chapter 245
story is good at the start but its ending is too immediate or you can say fast . The last chapter single handedly brought down the good things about the book
why does Webnovel choose the novels which are already dropped by the author ...i hate this thing about WN
The plot is very forced, the main character has multiple views that conflict with each other due to poor planning, and the "romance" is just the MC being manipulated easier then play-doh. He constantly says he will stay true to his girl but is constantly put in situations that if it was true then he would've done something else. The MC is also made to be extremely dense when it comes to his online girlfriend with her doing/giving, in my opinion, very questionable things but he simply ingores it... This review was written at chapter 180, so I say I gave this book a chance. It certainly deserves 2.6 stars.
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So this is pretty good. The romance isn’t too bad and the story starts off pretty good. My only real issue is that a lot of the cultivation stuff isn’t really in depth or explained all that much when talking about realms, it feels like more of an afterthought. like it is never explained what any of the realms are really capable of or the actual difference between them so it feels a little off when the mc suddenly starts getting immensly stronger and its hard to tell the difference. I love the characters and while I wasnt a fan of the mc sometimes I still enjoy this I’d definitely say this is worth a read for the characters but the story itself is kinda leaving me wanting a little more depth.
has good potential, but MC too overly prideful. doesn't want to accept help, assistance, advice, suggestions of ANYONE, but wants people to accept his help and tutorage.
Starts off pretty fun. Mc is show to be a hardworking, filial person who cares for his family and wants to be strong. He has an online girlfriend and says some cringe things but you can laugh it off. Though he is obnoxis with his "poor man's pride" The girlfriend though......her character is horrific. All she does is complain and cause problems for everyone. She acts as a stranger to observe mc and gets mad when Mc doesn't fawn over her and is constantly nosey and disruptive Story is poorly translated as well.
I started off loving this book. I actually read it MTL to finish it. everything was great, up until the finale. the last chapter had to settle everything, and I feel like the author just gave up at the end. it was so disappointing.
this book is not bad. I've enjoyed reading this so far and it intrigues me enough to continue reading this novel because it is interesting and exciting
MC is very stupid and hypocritical which hurts the story massively. -spots a SSS technique, doesn't want to learn it because it might be hard to cultivate while at this point has a system that speeds up cultivation and is making decent money to buy materials to help cultivate even faster, he doesn't understand the rarity of SSS techniques even though the dude has lived in the world for over 20 years and received an education there, I assume he believes that all high tier cultivation techniques are common or something. -refuses any help from his online GF but will happily receive a SECOND SSS technique from a literal stranger he met twice at that point. -believes initially that the FL is stupid/crazy when she purposely does a bad deal to give him money for free by wanting to buy a 20 dollar sword for 10k from him. He is also very antagonistic towards her while she has been relatively kind to him overall. -goes on a spiel about status, power, money doesn't matter for love to encourage a fellow teacher to get a gf but actively refuses to meet his online gf due to her being way stronger then him.
last half of the synopsis makes no freaking sense where you on crack or something 😒 the synopsis is important it's the hook and arguably the most important part of the whole book if you can't respect that what's the point of any 9f it in the first place and this is my genre too right up my alley but now I'm not reading it you'd have been better off just leaving the last half off all together GOD CAN PEOPLE NOT TAKE THERE WRITING SERIOUSLY ANYMORE...??
man i read this book in raw too it goes awesome till second last chapter from then author decided to end the novel so he gave summary in the last chapter how the book ended 🤣🤣🤣🤣
another good book have to spit 3 part for 1 chapter.... .. .. .. ...why? did webnovel not pay translator enough............................
Objectively speaking this is a great novel and for those who have even an inkling of this type of story telling then this would be a great read. however, personally I do not enjoy this novel that much. I find the common sense of the MMC and the FMC to deviate by a large margin from what I consider common sense so what I have read causing a very sharp disconnect with me and makes me feel irritable with the characters. This is just my personal subjective feelings. For others I suggest you attempt to atleast read a few chapters to see if it compatible with you but for me 40 chapters is enough.
Decent translation, but that’s all. The basic idea is interesting but the MC is unrealistic and illogical, conflict is boring and very, VERY forced, and every single character is unlikeable and unremarkable. This book isn’t worth anyones time, skip for your own sake.
Its a good like slice of life, modern cultivation world kinda story…. but it isnt what i expected. From the current chapter onwards, it seems like . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . He wont actually realize Xiaoqi is his online gf until he becomes an immortal, which makes me sad cuz i was imagining a story where his gf helps him after he reaches a certain level cuz shes tired of seeing him struggle or something but i guess not.
one of the best novels to read on web novel 😄