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!!!!!I loved the work please don't stop author this is the best atg fanfic I've seen so I hope all atg heroines are in the harem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I feel like this story as been rewritten a few times but always stops right where this one has. It is a great story but ultimately its a waste of potential since it doesn't proceed farther than this.
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Writing quality is perfect, i haven't seen any errors for the firdt 14 chapters that I read. And all of those chapters have much more word count than many fics. Story development is prrfect, at first I thought these would be a generic itachi SI, but the author have a great job at expressing the characters principles, emotions, and views in life that it makes them have more depth to them. Character design is perfect, not much OG but since most inventions is a derivative from the already invented, I'll just give this one a perfect. Updating stability seems a bit shaky, is this dropped? World background is perfect, not much is known but still logicak since it is still early in the plot
very good story ..................................................................................................................................
Good story teller skill form author. .. surprise that you dont have another work beside this. .. !!!
This fanfic is a work of art, at first I had my doubts, because many have wanted to do something like Itachi in ATG and have failed with horrible jobs, but the author here is a genius writer, not only has he perfectly integrated his personality of Itachi, but the story has no holes and is even something that blows your mind. Read this, you won't regret it.
wowwww....... what great writing quality. generally atg fanfics are all about butchering the plot and overpowering the protagonist. its rare to see such great writing quality in a fanfiction, almost doesnt feel like a fanfic but a legitmiate novel
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Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!
Finally, another good ATG fanfic. !!!! GREAT WORK AUTHOR !!!! Just hope that the story is not dropped like dozens of other ATG fan fic.
This story is good, until the author starts writing what he thinks is an intelligent conversation. I feel my brain cells die every time Itachi and others try to speak "wisely". All those conversations are so silly that they almost ruin the reading. But if you can endure pretentious conversations without dying of embarrassment, then they might give this story a chance.
!!!!!I loved the work please don't stop author this is the best atg fanfic I've seen so I hope all atg heroines are in the harem !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I feel like this story as been rewritten a few times but always stops right where this one has. It is a great story but ultimately its a waste of potential since it doesn't proceed farther than this.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯
Writing quality is perfect, i haven't seen any errors for the firdt 14 chapters that I read. And all of those chapters have much more word count than many fics. Story development is prrfect, at first I thought these would be a generic itachi SI, but the author have a great job at expressing the characters principles, emotions, and views in life that it makes them have more depth to them. Character design is perfect, not much OG but since most inventions is a derivative from the already invented, I'll just give this one a perfect. Updating stability seems a bit shaky, is this dropped? World background is perfect, not much is known but still logicak since it is still early in the plot
very good story ..................................................................................................................................
Good story teller skill form author. .. surprise that you dont have another work beside this. .. !!!
This fanfic is a work of art, at first I had my doubts, because many have wanted to do something like Itachi in ATG and have failed with horrible jobs, but the author here is a genius writer, not only has he perfectly integrated his personality of Itachi, but the story has no holes and is even something that blows your mind. Read this, you won't regret it.
wowwww....... what great writing quality. generally atg fanfics are all about butchering the plot and overpowering the protagonist. its rare to see such great writing quality in a fanfiction, almost doesnt feel like a fanfic but a legitmiate novel
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Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!! Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!Itachi is here!!
Finally, another good ATG fanfic. !!!! GREAT WORK AUTHOR !!!! Just hope that the story is not dropped like dozens of other ATG fan fic.
This story is good, until the author starts writing what he thinks is an intelligent conversation. I feel my brain cells die every time Itachi and others try to speak "wisely". All those conversations are so silly that they almost ruin the reading. But if you can endure pretentious conversations without dying of embarrassment, then they might give this story a chance.