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I just wait here and look on the river. Propably for 150+ chapters, when mc start to show progress and wouldn't be pushed around like a leaves by the wind. That's how it's goes for every novel of this author, ya knoooow.
This is a great story. I only hope that you will continue to update regularly and not just vanish. I can ‘t wait to see more of what you have to offer
This is amazing. It captures the reader’s attention quite easily and make u actually understand what is happening inside the mc’s head. I think the only reason it does not have a lot of view because of they way the story was made with two protagonist which is what other people thought. I hope u continue this story though.
This is my personal opinion but I don't understand this story. The writing is impeccable yet it manages to read like some amalgamation of different consepts themes and ideas. If that's what your into great, but for me it feels a bit off putting. Well that's my review, go away now.
first review why because why not. I will give a proper review if the story can go past 30-50 it as potential but we shall see if its wasted of not
there are 2 MCs, if someone likes it proceed, but according to the author's novel registry this fanfic will have a cumbersome and slow progress, as evidenced by the 20 chapters I read
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I just wait here and look on the river. Propably for 150+ chapters, when mc start to show progress and wouldn't be pushed around like a leaves by the wind. That's how it's goes for every novel of this author, ya knoooow.
This is a great story. I only hope that you will continue to update regularly and not just vanish. I can ‘t wait to see more of what you have to offer
This is amazing. It captures the reader’s attention quite easily and make u actually understand what is happening inside the mc’s head. I think the only reason it does not have a lot of view because of they way the story was made with two protagonist which is what other people thought. I hope u continue this story though.
This is my personal opinion but I don't understand this story. The writing is impeccable yet it manages to read like some amalgamation of different consepts themes and ideas. If that's what your into great, but for me it feels a bit off putting. Well that's my review, go away now.
first review why because why not. I will give a proper review if the story can go past 30-50 it as potential but we shall see if its wasted of not
there are 2 MCs, if someone likes it proceed, but according to the author's novel registry this fanfic will have a cumbersome and slow progress, as evidenced by the 20 chapters I read