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You need to edit the first 2 chapter the grammar is off like heir should be spelled here other than that the story is good so far.[img=recommend]
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Mannnn i really like ur story but grammer is bad i mean really bad, try use some translate platform or some web to fix the grammer so u can continue.... hope the best for u
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You need to edit the first 2 chapter the grammar is off like heir should be spelled here other than that the story is good so far.[img=recommend]
Mannnn i really like ur story but grammer is bad i mean really bad, try use some translate platform or some web to fix the grammer so u can continue.... hope the best for u