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For those who wanna continue reading go to novelmao.com for the raw -Thought to inform but the chapter 429 was half baked as of 4months ago in case you tried reading it during that time chapters are also slower then before but as of now it's changed
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It was good up until a certain point in the story, The cultivation terms are very boring, every time it's "immortal palm" "immortal mode" thing, It was good, but Naruto is not a cultivation world
I don't understand how there are people who can like this novel, the characters are forcedly bad (such as Hiruzen), besides the girls falling in love with the MC at first sight, like they literally saw him for the first time and are already willing to kill and die for the hum, If you hear someone saying that this is the best Naruto fanfic you should stay away immediately, because for someone to think this trash is good, it can't be right in their mind.
I really liked this fan-fik. He has a very specific main character, he is not like the others. It's just a pity that chapters are rarely published.
Writing quality -3. Story development -3. Character design - 2. Updating stability -3. World background - 3. First of all it’s a chinese ff. So you know..... Second Mc is too much. about his parents and clan. he did not care. Thirdly I personally don’t like how mc lick 3rd hokage even though he just acting or manipulating. As for what to expect? Everything you can find in chinese ff. except cultivation. But in total it is a 3/5 rating fanfic.
anti china review ............................................................................................................................
The MC is actually just pure evil you can find no humanity in him. If you enjoy that kind of thing it's a perfect fic ig, but if you don't well it'll probably be an extremely miserable read. Also it's extremely hard to route for him lol.
It's all-around a great read. An amazing fanfic and I especially love the dark aspects. There are some translation errors, but overall worth reading.
hello, I have a question: can recognition disappear from the system , for example , when a person has lost recognition or not ?I just started reading and it became interesting.If I write incorrectly, I'm sorry, I'm Ukrainian
What the heck is happening! At this rate Tunan is surely going to suppress kaguya. So Distructively powerful and tactical intelligent add up with mind blowing manipulation, this guy is a package. This fanfic is even better than the original show I swear.
The story is growing so well. At this moment anything can happen. Our protagonist is so clever and brilliant. Not to mention he knows the formulas of human nature so good it seems he can dp anything. In short I love this story
great Naruto Fanfic, dark manipulative mc. everything is perfect. almost no grammar mistakes, even though it's translated.
Loving this book from the bottom of my heart. Mc is perfect, just perfect. It's really rare to find such a amazing and realistic yet unreal character. Tunan is really a politician with his sweet mouth and ruthless heart. I can't describe it in words how much I love this story.
Eu simplesmente amei muito essa fanfic. A escrita do autor aqui é simplicidade muito boa, pena que puxe muito as vezes de pontos muito culturais chineses. Mas de alguma forma dá pra relevar, e se é possível relevar, então dá para ter uma ótima experiência com essa história. Que inclusive tenta criar várias explicações prós furos que temos no Naruto original. Estou ansioso por mais capítulos. [img=update]
A good fanfic, it seems the people are talking it too seriously which they shouldn't because its hilarious and has an evil MC like Fang Yuan from RI.
Great book, actually one of my all time favorite up there with my favs. Honestly this fanfic is even better some legit books I know, the Mc is calculating, cunning, ruthless and very smart, knows when to endure, when to retreat, when to attack, everything is in synch. Great stuff worth it believe me guys. And yes the power scale is balanced but the Mc is still op, author does amazing job with story lovin it. keep going author-San you’re a guinius author hope I got to read a lot of your future stuff looking forward to it ❤️💯
My brain cells have burnt to the ashes, but take my stars cause I like it, villainy is the way of the world
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You should add Evil MC tags, thanks for the TL [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend]
200 chapters in, and it's amazing. The mc is a lying, manipulative, evil Uchiha that uses everything in his arsenal to get stronger with his system. Only problem i have is the writing quality. It started great at first, but as time went on, it got worse and worse. I hope they'd go through the book and fix the Google translated mess this is.
It’s a really good fanfic that I’m glad was translated, it was definitely worth the read however there is one issue I have with it. Around chapter 140 it just kind of completely goes offrail and becomes a cultivation novel. Because of this it seems like everybody and their dog can use senjustsu even if it’s called ”immortal arts”. Literally even the cannon fodder gennin who should physically be incapable of using it can. I’ll still read it when the translator starts updating all the novels again but it was definitely disappointing considering it was such a good idea.
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non racist, not picking up girls like Pokemon, logical, no face slapping, no clichés, thinking with mc brain, the subject is logical. chinese people need to write more novels like this. but even for this novel they said the subject is too bloody, they told the author 3 times the novel They had it edited. Almost all Chinese sites removed the novel until the author edited it. More works like Reverend Insanity and this novel should come. If you know real evil MC novels like this, could you write them in the comments?
The concept is really interesting but the translation is bad. Senjutsu is most often translated to "immortal arts", Sharingan is Kaleidoscope, even the names of nations and people are sometimes mistranslated.
When the novel is focusing on Naruto content it's all honestly pretty good and moderately well written. The characters all seem to be written with the proper personality and story. The only problem is the author at one point just completely abandons the ninja theme for a section and it starts reading like a generic cultivation novel. it goes back after a while but it's a real slog to get through those chapters. it's so cliche it hurts. the only other issue is that the translation quality varies greatly. sometimes it feels like it was masterfully done, very easy to understand with consistent naming. Other times it's barely a step above a machine translation.
even though you are translating it. it's good to see that there are fellow brothers who like evil novels. or should I say a rational novel with a ruthless guy with ambition that knows no limit.
Terrible, the more you read the more you realize that it's not that the mc is smart or cunning. it's that the author has made every other character a cruel idiot so we can feel good when the mc effortlessly crushes him, after about a hundred chapters of this I could no longer stand it.
For those who wanna continue reading go to novelmao.com for the raw -Thought to inform but the chapter 429 was half baked as of 4months ago in case you tried reading it during that time chapters are also slower then before but as of now it's changed
==========================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================================
It was good up until a certain point in the story, The cultivation terms are very boring, every time it's "immortal palm" "immortal mode" thing, It was good, but Naruto is not a cultivation world
I don't understand how there are people who can like this novel, the characters are forcedly bad (such as Hiruzen), besides the girls falling in love with the MC at first sight, like they literally saw him for the first time and are already willing to kill and die for the hum, If you hear someone saying that this is the best Naruto fanfic you should stay away immediately, because for someone to think this trash is good, it can't be right in their mind.
I really liked this fan-fik. He has a very specific main character, he is not like the others. It's just a pity that chapters are rarely published.
Writing quality -3. Story development -3. Character design - 2. Updating stability -3. World background - 3. First of all it’s a chinese ff. So you know..... Second Mc is too much. about his parents and clan. he did not care. Thirdly I personally don’t like how mc lick 3rd hokage even though he just acting or manipulating. As for what to expect? Everything you can find in chinese ff. except cultivation. But in total it is a 3/5 rating fanfic.
anti china review ............................................................................................................................
The MC is actually just pure evil you can find no humanity in him. If you enjoy that kind of thing it's a perfect fic ig, but if you don't well it'll probably be an extremely miserable read. Also it's extremely hard to route for him lol.
It's all-around a great read. An amazing fanfic and I especially love the dark aspects. There are some translation errors, but overall worth reading.
hello, I have a question: can recognition disappear from the system , for example , when a person has lost recognition or not ?I just started reading and it became interesting.If I write incorrectly, I'm sorry, I'm Ukrainian
What the heck is happening! At this rate Tunan is surely going to suppress kaguya. So Distructively powerful and tactical intelligent add up with mind blowing manipulation, this guy is a package. This fanfic is even better than the original show I swear.
The story is growing so well. At this moment anything can happen. Our protagonist is so clever and brilliant. Not to mention he knows the formulas of human nature so good it seems he can dp anything. In short I love this story
great Naruto Fanfic, dark manipulative mc. everything is perfect. almost no grammar mistakes, even though it's translated.
Loving this book from the bottom of my heart. Mc is perfect, just perfect. It's really rare to find such a amazing and realistic yet unreal character. Tunan is really a politician with his sweet mouth and ruthless heart. I can't describe it in words how much I love this story.
Eu simplesmente amei muito essa fanfic. A escrita do autor aqui é simplicidade muito boa, pena que puxe muito as vezes de pontos muito culturais chineses. Mas de alguma forma dá pra relevar, e se é possível relevar, então dá para ter uma ótima experiência com essa história. Que inclusive tenta criar várias explicações prós furos que temos no Naruto original. Estou ansioso por mais capítulos. [img=update]
A good fanfic, it seems the people are talking it too seriously which they shouldn't because its hilarious and has an evil MC like Fang Yuan from RI.
Great book, actually one of my all time favorite up there with my favs. Honestly this fanfic is even better some legit books I know, the Mc is calculating, cunning, ruthless and very smart, knows when to endure, when to retreat, when to attack, everything is in synch. Great stuff worth it believe me guys. And yes the power scale is balanced but the Mc is still op, author does amazing job with story lovin it. keep going author-San you’re a guinius author hope I got to read a lot of your future stuff looking forward to it ❤️💯
My brain cells have burnt to the ashes, but take my stars cause I like it, villainy is the way of the world
Revelar Spoiler You should add Evil MC tags, thanks for the TL [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend]
200 chapters in, and it's amazing. The mc is a lying, manipulative, evil Uchiha that uses everything in his arsenal to get stronger with his system. Only problem i have is the writing quality. It started great at first, but as time went on, it got worse and worse. I hope they'd go through the book and fix the Google translated mess this is.
It’s a really good fanfic that I’m glad was translated, it was definitely worth the read however there is one issue I have with it. Around chapter 140 it just kind of completely goes offrail and becomes a cultivation novel. Because of this it seems like everybody and their dog can use senjustsu even if it’s called ”immortal arts”. Literally even the cannon fodder gennin who should physically be incapable of using it can. I’ll still read it when the translator starts updating all the novels again but it was definitely disappointing considering it was such a good idea.
Revelar Spoiler non racist, not picking up girls like Pokemon, logical, no face slapping, no clichés, thinking with mc brain, the subject is logical. chinese people need to write more novels like this. but even for this novel they said the subject is too bloody, they told the author 3 times the novel They had it edited. Almost all Chinese sites removed the novel until the author edited it. More works like Reverend Insanity and this novel should come. If you know real evil MC novels like this, could you write them in the comments?
The concept is really interesting but the translation is bad. Senjutsu is most often translated to "immortal arts", Sharingan is Kaleidoscope, even the names of nations and people are sometimes mistranslated.
When the novel is focusing on Naruto content it's all honestly pretty good and moderately well written. The characters all seem to be written with the proper personality and story. The only problem is the author at one point just completely abandons the ninja theme for a section and it starts reading like a generic cultivation novel. it goes back after a while but it's a real slog to get through those chapters. it's so cliche it hurts. the only other issue is that the translation quality varies greatly. sometimes it feels like it was masterfully done, very easy to understand with consistent naming. Other times it's barely a step above a machine translation.
even though you are translating it. it's good to see that there are fellow brothers who like evil novels. or should I say a rational novel with a ruthless guy with ambition that knows no limit.
Terrible, the more you read the more you realize that it's not that the mc is smart or cunning. it's that the author has made every other character a cruel idiot so we can feel good when the mc effortlessly crushes him, after about a hundred chapters of this I could no longer stand it.
MC is crazy psycho and I love it😩❤️ one of the best fanfics