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I didn't even get to finish it before it vanished so far the story was alright, it had that newish vibe to it as it was his first dxd from what I remember but the only issue I had was the random adding of other characters dxd already had some fine characters in my opinion
Esto se callo ?? No lo leí todavía pero leeré lo poco que hay escrito. Espero que el autor retome el fanfic porque parece muy bueno y hay pocos fanfic buenos en Webnovel 😥😅
overall this story pleased me a lot, the way it progressed surprised me in many ways its a good story but i think maybe it progressed too fast. good story recommend
The words in the story are grammatically correct but I feel that the dialogue could be much better and that you could maybe do more show, rather than tell with your words. Other than that I feel that this is a great story. ;)
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when the title says in DXD I had expected it to focus more around the actual story and not just be based in that world. it's a great story and it's been progressing really well, but I came for Adam in DXD.
I really want to like this story but by chapter 48 the story is just to boring to read there are barely any good fights and it just seams like the author decided to go big or go home while adding like a 100 gods(way too many) and just keeps adding characters that will probably never appear again. The mc also seams to not plan on killing anybody. Its not bad but also not good.
what i expected : secret agent with the power of Adam from RoR in dxd, epic battles and girls what i got : otaku with Adam powers with nerf power growth, lots of boys, and relationship development with girls only happening in the background
unfortunately this fanfiction is not for me. I personally don't really like it when characters from other anime just come together for the harem.i don't understand how strong adam is because the author doesn't say it.(Cap57)I don't understand, is Adam stronger than zeus?...
5 star just because of Adam, I don't like how Rias is in the haram, the story progress is good, I like the original Adam then this MC as the original held himself with the right amount of arrogance, pride, care, coolness, not a simp, and care for his wife and children, I don't like how Rias is in the haram, I don't like the romance very much as girls will just be a stuttering mess with just light teasing and the girls don't have much of a strong personality against the mc except esdeath( i wish mc will have more interaction), did I mention how I don't like Rias being in the harem, and finally I hope you will be a bit harsher to fix her personality and be a bit more responsible AND be more grateful for what she has.
las lolis son amor, no te gusta las lolis para mi es un gran pecado asi que no me agradas. Las lolis siempre seran las mejores Las lolis son vida y amor las lolis no tienen una masa de grasa en el pecho
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Adam is my most favorite character in ROR, and DXD is one of my most favorite anime(lol it's because of harem hahahaha). So seeing these two together really excites me. I just hope that MC will not let others look down on him because he's a human, I also hope that he's not a perverted guy who only thinks of his pants and not a simp beta character.
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5⭐ why? cause it's adam from Record of Ragnarok all I'm asking is not to drop, take your time no rush also, cause my name Join the Raccoon Military Sign up here
Amigo es mi primera reseña...creo... Solo por favor que está tenga un gran desarrollo, Adam como persona tienen un gran potencial... Además como es dxd, debe haber una forma de superar la debilidad de los ojos del señor....y por favor, que en algún cap, diga la frase por la que las 2 de la mañana viendo manga grite como fan girl de bts... Y me gane una paliza de mi mama
it's a good read so far the only problem would be the update stability .......................................................................
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ok I am excited now can't wait gor more chapters... as for the system well use it as it will be a waste to not use it as it was already included and give the novice gift pack.... i can't wait for more...
I rate it 5 star because we're same I like Adam too he was the Biggest Chad on the story how he followed Eve when she got frame and kicked on Eden? how he fight until his last breath for his children
Adam is great so I plead with you to not make him a simp like character. He should have the arrogance as The Great Adam. pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
I wanna ask where's the rewrite buh am sure uve already given up on fanfic writing
I didn't even get to finish it before it vanished so far the story was alright, it had that newish vibe to it as it was his first dxd from what I remember but the only issue I had was the random adding of other characters dxd already had some fine characters in my opinion
Esto se callo ?? No lo leí todavía pero leeré lo poco que hay escrito. Espero que el autor retome el fanfic porque parece muy bueno y hay pocos fanfic buenos en Webnovel 😥😅
overall this story pleased me a lot, the way it progressed surprised me in many ways its a good story but i think maybe it progressed too fast. good story recommend
The words in the story are grammatically correct but I feel that the dialogue could be much better and that you could maybe do more show, rather than tell with your words. Other than that I feel that this is a great story. ;)
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when the title says in DXD I had expected it to focus more around the actual story and not just be based in that world. it's a great story and it's been progressing really well, but I came for Adam in DXD.
I really want to like this story but by chapter 48 the story is just to boring to read there are barely any good fights and it just seams like the author decided to go big or go home while adding like a 100 gods(way too many) and just keeps adding characters that will probably never appear again. The mc also seams to not plan on killing anybody. Its not bad but also not good.
what i expected : secret agent with the power of Adam from RoR in dxd, epic battles and girls what i got : otaku with Adam powers with nerf power growth, lots of boys, and relationship development with girls only happening in the background
unfortunately this fanfiction is not for me. I personally don't really like it when characters from other anime just come together for the harem.i don't understand how strong adam is because the author doesn't say it.(Cap57)I don't understand, is Adam stronger than zeus?...
5 star just because of Adam, I don't like how Rias is in the haram, the story progress is good, I like the original Adam then this MC as the original held himself with the right amount of arrogance, pride, care, coolness, not a simp, and care for his wife and children, I don't like how Rias is in the haram, I don't like the romance very much as girls will just be a stuttering mess with just light teasing and the girls don't have much of a strong personality against the mc except esdeath( i wish mc will have more interaction), did I mention how I don't like Rias being in the harem, and finally I hope you will be a bit harsher to fix her personality and be a bit more responsible AND be more grateful for what she has.
las lolis son amor, no te gusta las lolis para mi es un gran pecado asi que no me agradas. Las lolis siempre seran las mejores Las lolis son vida y amor las lolis no tienen una masa de grasa en el pecho
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Adam is my most favorite character in ROR, and DXD is one of my most favorite anime(lol it's because of harem hahahaha). So seeing these two together really excites me. I just hope that MC will not let others look down on him because he's a human, I also hope that he's not a perverted guy who only thinks of his pants and not a simp beta character.
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5⭐ why? cause it's adam from Record of Ragnarok all I'm asking is not to drop, take your time no rush also, cause my name Join the Raccoon Military Sign up here
Amigo es mi primera reseña...creo... Solo por favor que está tenga un gran desarrollo, Adam como persona tienen un gran potencial... Además como es dxd, debe haber una forma de superar la debilidad de los ojos del señor....y por favor, que en algún cap, diga la frase por la que las 2 de la mañana viendo manga grite como fan girl de bts... Y me gane una paliza de mi mama
it's a good read so far the only problem would be the update stability .......................................................................
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УРАААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААА!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Я ЛЮБЛЮ ТЕБЯ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ПРОДОЛЖАЙ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ok I am excited now can't wait gor more chapters... as for the system well use it as it will be a waste to not use it as it was already included and give the novice gift pack.... i can't wait for more...
I rate it 5 star because we're same I like Adam too he was the Biggest Chad on the story how he followed Eve when she got frame and kicked on Eden? how he fight until his last breath for his children
Adam is great so I plead with you to not make him a simp like character. He should have the arrogance as The Great Adam. pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
I wanna ask where's the rewrite buh am sure uve already given up on fanfic writing