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Atualiza!!! Eu amo essa fanfic.......................................................................................................................
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Where is the updateeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We been waiting for 14 days[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good book 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌
please don't drop, it's a good story can't wait to see how it develops 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Me encanta esta serie haber como la desarrolla espero que publique mas seguido, la verdad es que estoy enganchado, e hubiera gustado que se describiera mas su vida delictiva pero a si esta bien
So is this novel dead? I hope not it's a great read so please keep writing!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Just gonna say the only thing I don’t like is the fact you have Carl’s sister as a love interest which is quite weird can’t lie.[img=recommend]
Revelar Spoiler I can't wait to see how this develops please stick with it, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Incredible it would be too good if it continued regularly, good work for me it's perfect, especially the Romance carl/fiona...I really liked how it developed
listen this is amazing i love the idea of it and the concept behind this and the romance is good its such a good ff i frucking love it my only problem is the update stability
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Isso é muito bom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Revelar Spoiler If you like Korean NTR dramas this is the author for you. Character development? lol. Strong female characters, well-crafted and with a minimum of self-love? Protagonist who is not passive and bipolar? Hahahaha. You won't find any of that in his works, just the dumping of irrelevant information and without context, in favor of a pre-made plot using the age justification for everything. Good luck to the readers, you will need it.
sorry for everyone because this review is not for this novel.Author other novel is so stressed me and it can be this novel exactly the same so i will not read because author other novel give me some opinions of author has green hat fetish and i think this novel has green hat fetish mc too because author has this so again i say sorry for everyone but how this author can be get really high score.It was just me for being weird because i dont have green hat fetish or everyone love home mc get ntr.I think its not my problem whatever i really stress out this author so after i say so much i feel a little better. WARNİNG:DONT READ AUTHOR'S TEEN WOLF NOVEL
Very Good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good everything was hoping to get more chapters in the future but overall it is a good book......................................................................................................... .................. .m.nmnnm.............mmm
Atualiza!!! Eu amo essa fanfic.......................................................................................................................
At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again At least say you won't post again
are you still writing this? 👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍👍 👍 👍
Where is the updateeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We been waiting for 14 days[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good book 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌 👍 😊 ☺️ 👏 📖 👌
please don't drop, it's a good story can't wait to see how it develops 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Me encanta esta serie haber como la desarrolla espero que publique mas seguido, la verdad es que estoy enganchado, e hubiera gustado que se describiera mas su vida delictiva pero a si esta bien
So is this novel dead? I hope not it's a great read so please keep writing!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Revelar Spoiler Just gonna say the only thing I don’t like is the fact you have Carl’s sister as a love interest which is quite weird can’t lie.[img=recommend]
Revelar Spoiler I can't wait to see how this develops please stick with it, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Incredible it would be too good if it continued regularly, good work for me it's perfect, especially the Romance carl/fiona...I really liked how it developed
listen this is amazing i love the idea of it and the concept behind this and the romance is good its such a good ff i frucking love it my only problem is the update stability
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Isso é muito bom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Revelar Spoiler If you like Korean NTR dramas this is the author for you. Character development? lol. Strong female characters, well-crafted and with a minimum of self-love? Protagonist who is not passive and bipolar? Hahahaha. You won't find any of that in his works, just the dumping of irrelevant information and without context, in favor of a pre-made plot using the age justification for everything. Good luck to the readers, you will need it.
sorry for everyone because this review is not for this novel.Author other novel is so stressed me and it can be this novel exactly the same so i will not read because author other novel give me some opinions of author has green hat fetish and i think this novel has green hat fetish mc too because author has this so again i say sorry for everyone but how this author can be get really high score.It was just me for being weird because i dont have green hat fetish or everyone love home mc get ntr.I think its not my problem whatever i really stress out this author so after i say so much i feel a little better. WARNİNG:DONT READ AUTHOR'S TEEN WOLF NOVEL
Very Good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good everything was hoping to get more chapters in the future but overall it is a good book......................................................................................................... .................. .m.nmnnm.............mmm