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This is the Best fanfic that i have read so pleaze keep it up, i really want more chapters of this story so plz make more chapters. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz !!!!!!!!! ITS THE BEST FANFIC SO PLZZZZZZZ MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
ignore my review hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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This is juste a copy paste of tensura but with Anos the mc………………..so I don’t like it………..,………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
Do you have discord if yes then please Link or you should make one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The updates might be not stable but the chapters that go out is good 729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸
The mc is suppose to be Anos Voldigoad from The Misfit of Demon King Academy but he acts nothing like it. Sure you can argue that this is more then 5 trillion years into the future but doesnt change the fact that he is nothing like the original Anos. The author contradicts things. For an example Anos was super excited that he made friends with Veldora but then let him get eaten by Rimuru. Because? Because Aisha said it would be intressting. The author even said in the beginning that he was a person who takes great intrest in his family and friends/subordinates. And his creed was to never kill people needlessly. But he let Veldora get eaten because it would be intresting, I really don't know where his lines are drawn, letting his friend die because it would be intresting really goes against his personality. And why is he acting like a kid all of a sudden in chapter 2? He takes on the form of a kid because he didn't want to be noticed by the primodrials. But why though? They can't hurt him or do anything to him. Why would he need to hide? Don't get those plotholes. Overall the writing and the concept is good. It may just be me being angry over you ruining one of my favorite anime/manga character. But keep doing what you do. And I mean no offence by this review. If you can handle that the mc isn't really Anos then you would enjoy this I believe.
Revelar Spoiler Needs more recognition, this story is an underdog for me #8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9
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Great story, waiting for you to continue. There are not many fanfictions on Anos so it feel great that someone is finally using anos as their mc.
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1. Good English. 2. Nice Plot 3. Has a background Story 4. Yeah, So far Great. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice Story------------------------------------------------------------------- Awesome background story------------------------------------------------ Read It.
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I like how the author has given Anos a background story and how he has shown the interactions between Anos and all the primordial beings as he likes to call it. overall I am excited to see where the story goes. Keep the good work up Author-Kun[img=update]
The writing is good and the author seems to clearly know what he's doing. Character design for the 7 primordials and especially Rouge is really intriguing and I would love to read more [img=update][img=recommend]
the story development is going good and the plot is really interesting. But please show some epic fight scenes of Anos with opponents. overall I am excited to see where the story goes.
As a marvelous creator, I will give myself 5 stars. Be that as it may, truly folks, a debt of gratitude is in order for your help. I never expected this fanfiction to do so well. I thank all of you guys for your support.
This is the Best fanfic that i have read so pleaze keep it up, i really want more chapters of this story so plz make more chapters. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz !!!!!!!!! ITS THE BEST FANFIC SO PLZZZZZZZ MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
ignore my review hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Revelar Spoiler This is juste a copy paste of tensura but with Anos the mc………………..so I don’t like it………..,………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
Do you have discord if yes then please Link or you should make one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The updates might be not stable but the chapters that go out is good 729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸729x¹² - 5832x¹⁰y³ + 19440x⁸y⁶ - 34560x⁶y⁹ + 34560x⁶y⁹ - 18432x²y¹⁵ + 4096y¹⁸
The mc is suppose to be Anos Voldigoad from The Misfit of Demon King Academy but he acts nothing like it. Sure you can argue that this is more then 5 trillion years into the future but doesnt change the fact that he is nothing like the original Anos. The author contradicts things. For an example Anos was super excited that he made friends with Veldora but then let him get eaten by Rimuru. Because? Because Aisha said it would be intressting. The author even said in the beginning that he was a person who takes great intrest in his family and friends/subordinates. And his creed was to never kill people needlessly. But he let Veldora get eaten because it would be intresting, I really don't know where his lines are drawn, letting his friend die because it would be intresting really goes against his personality. And why is he acting like a kid all of a sudden in chapter 2? He takes on the form of a kid because he didn't want to be noticed by the primodrials. But why though? They can't hurt him or do anything to him. Why would he need to hide? Don't get those plotholes. Overall the writing and the concept is good. It may just be me being angry over you ruining one of my favorite anime/manga character. But keep doing what you do. And I mean no offence by this review. If you can handle that the mc isn't really Anos then you would enjoy this I believe.
Revelar Spoiler Needs more recognition, this story is an underdog for me #8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C98P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9#8P0LR2C9
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Great story, waiting for you to continue. There are not many fanfictions on Anos so it feel great that someone is finally using anos as their mc.
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1. Good English. 2. Nice Plot 3. Has a background Story 4. Yeah, So far Great. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice Story------------------------------------------------------------------- Awesome background story------------------------------------------------ Read It.
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I like how the author has given Anos a background story and how he has shown the interactions between Anos and all the primordial beings as he likes to call it. overall I am excited to see where the story goes. Keep the good work up Author-Kun[img=update]
The writing is good and the author seems to clearly know what he's doing. Character design for the 7 primordials and especially Rouge is really intriguing and I would love to read more [img=update][img=recommend]
the story development is going good and the plot is really interesting. But please show some epic fight scenes of Anos with opponents. overall I am excited to see where the story goes.
As a marvelous creator, I will give myself 5 stars. Be that as it may, truly folks, a debt of gratitude is in order for your help. I never expected this fanfiction to do so well. I thank all of you guys for your support.