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Tbh, the author doesnt really know much about Naruto or SL lore. You can tell since he keeps mixing up Rinnegan and Tenseigan abilities. Plus, the MC is the definition of a wuss. He’s an S rank, yet he still only does dungeons with other groups. They aren’t even high rank dungeons since he only earned a 100k after doing 8.
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Really going good. ..! The fanfics of Solo Leveling generally just replace Jin woo with the mc, but this is quite good ig... Tho IS THIS A HAREM??? If it is plz don't make it a harem
Hnmmm the writing quality is very good with a consistent storyline, the only drawback is the update speed. ...... . . . .................................................
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mc is the world's biggest retard. What are his truth seeking balls for decoration. can't he just block the attacks of evryone. It's just getting more and more forced as the chapter are increasing. MCs brain is degrading at a faster rate with each chapter, well so is his personality.
i LOVE this fic, author-san! dont drop this, please please please and keep up the great work =)
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I read like 10 chapter of this fanfic, and I said that it a average fanfic, the only problem that I have is that the author doesn’t use fully the power of the tenseigan and that the Mc is no using the power correctly. I’m disappointed for the author not knowing the true power level of naruto and solo leveling.
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its a really cool storyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you start the omniversal cafe again so thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First of all the writing quality as well as the update stability is quite good. This is a rare novel as not much fanfis are made on "Solo Levelling". Author has done a good work writing this fanfiction. The problem is that there are just too many problems with the mc. Mc has the power of Toneri and is made quite powerful by the author. But the author forgot to insert a brain in his head. He has a hateful personality and tries to suck up with everyone. Sometimes he is nerfed quite a lot by the author. And many a times situations are forced like when Beru is killed. Though killing Beru didn't matter much, but the way he was killed was quite forced. Though this a review just after 14 chapters, I hope the author will try to develop the personality of the author and decide his power level as well. At least make him strong or weak but don't keep changing his power level frequently. That's all.
Well starting to lose interest the longer I read it, I think mc is less confident in his own strength.Then mc in my opinion is also too fixated on the strength of the original tonery rather than increasing it further, after all, its strength is still related to the chakras. (Google Translate)
I came to support this novel. Web development course I have a few weeks ago and I have a few weeks ago and I have a few weeks ago and I have.
I'm just gonna start off by saying that I am amazed that this has so many power stones. I feel like it's many because it's new fanfic. Anyway, first, the Writing Quality is decent at most, nothing amazing compared to other fanfics of the same genre, so I don't have a lot to say about it. The stability of Updates is good, they inform us if there won't be a chapter in the future, and the updates seem normal. Story Development is bad, just bad. I mean it feels like MC just replaces Sung JIn-woo in every situation where he interferes, except MC does everything worse. Spoiler: #####He somehow managed to get Beru killed, no shadow Beru, no Puppet Beru. He just died. And If this changes in the future, I won't change my review because that idea was stupid. I'm not even gonna mention how the author makes MC hold back in every situation. Character Design is equally as bad as the Story Development, I mean I don't know about the MC or his OCs. They appear out of nowhere and basically hold no significant expect for some nonsense dialogue. World Background is even worse, we don't know about it. I get that it's a fanfic, but that doesn't mean you just name things without explaining. I mean nothing is expended on. It's just MC is at the bridge, MC is a gym, okay a week later, now MC is at Jeju Island or whatever. Anyway, my bad about the horrible grammar issues, it's just that I could give less than a flying fish about grammar right now. This is my honest review, now let's see if it gets deleted. Bye.
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Great chapter and the story is also great chat wait for more future chapters especially the island raid By the way i think toneri can beat beru
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Tenseigan is nerfed Where is the truth seeking orbs? Why he's weak when the Toneri literally cuts the moon in the half? Besides that, its a pretty fun story so far, but if he has all the knowledge 'bout jutsus, he has to have the truth seeking orbs, its part of his abillities that comes with tenseigan
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Tbh, the author doesnt really know much about Naruto or SL lore. You can tell since he keeps mixing up Rinnegan and Tenseigan abilities. Plus, the MC is the definition of a wuss. He’s an S rank, yet he still only does dungeons with other groups. They aren’t even high rank dungeons since he only earned a 100k after doing 8.
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Really going good. ..! The fanfics of Solo Leveling generally just replace Jin woo with the mc, but this is quite good ig... Tho IS THIS A HAREM??? If it is plz don't make it a harem
Hnmmm the writing quality is very good with a consistent storyline, the only drawback is the update speed. ...... . . . .................................................
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very very good .....................................................................................................................................
mc is the world's biggest retard. What are his truth seeking balls for decoration. can't he just block the attacks of evryone. It's just getting more and more forced as the chapter are increasing. MCs brain is degrading at a faster rate with each chapter, well so is his personality.
i LOVE this fic, author-san! dont drop this, please please please and keep up the great work =)
Continue please kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
I read like 10 chapter of this fanfic, and I said that it a average fanfic, the only problem that I have is that the author doesn’t use fully the power of the tenseigan and that the Mc is no using the power correctly. I’m disappointed for the author not knowing the true power level of naruto and solo leveling.
Multiverse or not? 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯👌👌👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👌👌👌
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its a really cool storyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you start the omniversal cafe again so thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First of all the writing quality as well as the update stability is quite good. This is a rare novel as not much fanfis are made on "Solo Levelling". Author has done a good work writing this fanfiction. The problem is that there are just too many problems with the mc. Mc has the power of Toneri and is made quite powerful by the author. But the author forgot to insert a brain in his head. He has a hateful personality and tries to suck up with everyone. Sometimes he is nerfed quite a lot by the author. And many a times situations are forced like when Beru is killed. Though killing Beru didn't matter much, but the way he was killed was quite forced. Though this a review just after 14 chapters, I hope the author will try to develop the personality of the author and decide his power level as well. At least make him strong or weak but don't keep changing his power level frequently. That's all.
Well starting to lose interest the longer I read it, I think mc is less confident in his own strength.Then mc in my opinion is also too fixated on the strength of the original tonery rather than increasing it further, after all, its strength is still related to the chakras. (Google Translate)
I came to support this novel. Web development course I have a few weeks ago and I have a few weeks ago and I have a few weeks ago and I have.
I'm just gonna start off by saying that I am amazed that this has so many power stones. I feel like it's many because it's new fanfic. Anyway, first, the Writing Quality is decent at most, nothing amazing compared to other fanfics of the same genre, so I don't have a lot to say about it. The stability of Updates is good, they inform us if there won't be a chapter in the future, and the updates seem normal. Story Development is bad, just bad. I mean it feels like MC just replaces Sung JIn-woo in every situation where he interferes, except MC does everything worse. Spoiler: #####He somehow managed to get Beru killed, no shadow Beru, no Puppet Beru. He just died. And If this changes in the future, I won't change my review because that idea was stupid. I'm not even gonna mention how the author makes MC hold back in every situation. Character Design is equally as bad as the Story Development, I mean I don't know about the MC or his OCs. They appear out of nowhere and basically hold no significant expect for some nonsense dialogue. World Background is even worse, we don't know about it. I get that it's a fanfic, but that doesn't mean you just name things without explaining. I mean nothing is expended on. It's just MC is at the bridge, MC is a gym, okay a week later, now MC is at Jeju Island or whatever. Anyway, my bad about the horrible grammar issues, it's just that I could give less than a flying fish about grammar right now. This is my honest review, now let's see if it gets deleted. Bye.
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Revelar Spoiler Great chapter and the story is also great chat wait for more future chapters especially the island raid By the way i think toneri can beat beru
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Tenseigan is nerfed Where is the truth seeking orbs? Why he's weak when the Toneri literally cuts the moon in the half? Besides that, its a pretty fun story so far, but if he has all the knowledge 'bout jutsus, he has to have the truth seeking orbs, its part of his abillities that comes with tenseigan
Toneri Otsutsuki siempre ha sido mi personaje favorito y lo será siempre. Así que cualquier mención o aparición de él, automáticamente se lleva mi aprecio absoluto. ¡Toneri Supremacy GWAAAAARR!! NOVELA 20/10 FULL LITERATURA