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Hi it is very intriguing and should be continued please. Yehdhdhjdjdjdjdjjd kjdndndjdr rich icicles disks visible disunityeverybody crisps thick doctor
Found it hard to find realistic but not edgy pokemon fanfics. This is my top 1 so far. It isnt too slow paced, has long chapters, grammar is excellent, very few plot holes, move usage of MC is cunning and romance isnt cringey or forced. Hope author hasnt dropped this. Updating stability is very slow though.
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Abandoned??? Un fanfic de pokemon interesante por el momento.... aunque claro que el pokemon del protagonista es de los que mas me gustan por lo que mi opinion no es muy objetiva, no diré cual es por que seria un spoiler aunque pronto se enteraran :D
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One of the best Pokémon story I have seen on the i would give 5 stars if The chapters where longer[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The “god” tricks the MC so he doesnt keep his old memories lol what was the point of going through all of that if you were just going to erase his memories. Only got through the prologue and the story became garbage lol you can tell how this story will go when dumb things like that happen. Pointless prologue.
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
well, well, well... what to say about this, to begin with the irregular MC, without memories, his personality development is quite unusual, his feelings change according to the author's convention, but that's normal in fics so nothing to comment on doing about it, take advantage of the time in training, and is not pessimistic. 4 stars. Let's move on to the development of the story, the pokemon world "invented" by the author, I received a lot of xiansi vibes from how it is made, but it is only based on the legendary pokemon trainer novels, polemon tactics, etc. or so I want to believe, blood ties seem to me more of a disadvantage in the distant future, the power of them is not well thought out, as it seems that all children can very easily have a pokemon of the quality of cynthia's garchomp, harem, the levels are also poorly thought out at the moment, but the story is just beginning so it can be developed later, let's not forget about the children who act as young masters of a wuxia novel, or how conveniently the MC is done friends or enemies of the main characters here and there. hmmm... between 2 and 3 stars at the moment, maybe it will go up in the future. let's end the world background, bad xiansi, bad harem, not so generic MC, generic character development, generic convenience, good world regulation, generic wishes with karma points to a ROB, very bad CLANS in pokemon. in general it would be a solid 2
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
one of the best stories on this site and not just for pokemon but overall as i'm writing this the story is on a hiatus because the author has covid, hopefully he makes a full recovery and the story isn't dropped
a bad write fic full of inconsitences and with a world background that is extremely bad and not though enough. author make it see extremely difficult to have a blue talent Pokemon but mc gain one extremely easy. we can t forget some more minor thing that make this fic difult to like. mc losing his memories and becoming nothing more than a of character,mc being a 10 year old that act like a adult but no one question,him having aura but his first and most important Pokemon being a normal type. author making only able to bond with one pokmeo only to change this later. resuming a fic with good potential but with a bad writer
Overall I really like the story. The new elements you add into the pokemon world is something I havent read before in other pokemon fanfics which I both enjoy and respect. Also I like reincarnation stories where the mc doesnt have their previous memories so I enjoyed this story.
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great its really awesome espein is cute and powerful i hope mc catches all the legendarys i hate it when other rivals have legendary but the mc didnt
Quite possibly one of the best pokemon fanfics I have ever read. The battles are well though out, the level progression and mastery system in place is also phenomenal. Additionally the plot of the story is beyond amazing so far. The Author is also highly receptive to constructive criticisms so kudos to that. Overall a must read if you are a Pokemon fan. Keep up the good work author-nim.
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I just don't like the fact that the mc loses his memories as there is no point in doing this, it's basically the same thing as giving some random newborn civilian in that world abilities/powers without them understanding how or why they have it. :/
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fanfic interessante escolha única de Pokémon para ser seu parceiro de Aura já estava cansado de sempre ver o mesmo Pokémon 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Quite funny, our FanFics are struggling for the 2th position on the ranking (not that I care tbh) and yet my powerstones go to yours, says enoug about what I think of it lol
really like the story and characters always like Pokemon stories and this is a great one aaaajhdhsohdsjjshkshdhdiievejeheujdbdosbhhdbhdhjsshi
I absolutely recomend this novel, great pokemon AU fanfic, the battles specially are very dynamic all character are great and the pokemon are people instead of of just dolls that can just say their names once in a while. The only stain in the fanfic is the prologue, which is pointless and infuriating, a HUGE turn off for anyone reading and really the only way to make it worse is if the author personally came to your house to kick you in the balls. That said, its just a turn off, the rest of the work is top tier and totally worth reading.
The story just completed its first Arc, so I will drop the shameless review. *COUGH* *COUGH* *AHEM* I want to be the very best Like no one ever was To catch them is my real test To train them is my cause I will travel across the land Searching far and wide Each Pokemon to understand The power that's inside Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all It's you and me I know it's my destiny Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend In a world we must defend Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all A heart so true Our courage will pull us through You teach me and I'll teach you Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all Every challenge along the way With courage I will face I will battle everyday To claim my rightful place Come with me, the time is right There's no better team On and on we'll win the fight It's always been our dream Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all It's you and me I know it's my destiny Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend In a world we must defend Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all A heart so true Our courage will pull us through You teach me and I'll teach you Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all
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Hi it is very intriguing and should be continued please. Yehdhdhjdjdjdjdjjd kjdndndjdr rich icicles disks visible disunityeverybody crisps thick doctor
Found it hard to find realistic but not edgy pokemon fanfics. This is my top 1 so far. It isnt too slow paced, has long chapters, grammar is excellent, very few plot holes, move usage of MC is cunning and romance isnt cringey or forced. Hope author hasnt dropped this. Updating stability is very slow though.
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Abandoned??? Un fanfic de pokemon interesante por el momento.... aunque claro que el pokemon del protagonista es de los que mas me gustan por lo que mi opinion no es muy objetiva, no diré cual es por que seria un spoiler aunque pronto se enteraran :D
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One of the best Pokémon story I have seen on the i would give 5 stars if The chapters where longer[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The “god” tricks the MC so he doesnt keep his old memories lol what was the point of going through all of that if you were just going to erase his memories. Only got through the prologue and the story became garbage lol you can tell how this story will go when dumb things like that happen. Pointless prologue.
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
well, well, well... what to say about this, to begin with the irregular MC, without memories, his personality development is quite unusual, his feelings change according to the author's convention, but that's normal in fics so nothing to comment on doing about it, take advantage of the time in training, and is not pessimistic. 4 stars. Let's move on to the development of the story, the pokemon world "invented" by the author, I received a lot of xiansi vibes from how it is made, but it is only based on the legendary pokemon trainer novels, polemon tactics, etc. or so I want to believe, blood ties seem to me more of a disadvantage in the distant future, the power of them is not well thought out, as it seems that all children can very easily have a pokemon of the quality of cynthia's garchomp, harem, the levels are also poorly thought out at the moment, but the story is just beginning so it can be developed later, let's not forget about the children who act as young masters of a wuxia novel, or how conveniently the MC is done friends or enemies of the main characters here and there. hmmm... between 2 and 3 stars at the moment, maybe it will go up in the future. let's end the world background, bad xiansi, bad harem, not so generic MC, generic character development, generic convenience, good world regulation, generic wishes with karma points to a ROB, very bad CLANS in pokemon. in general it would be a solid 2
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
one of the best stories on this site and not just for pokemon but overall as i'm writing this the story is on a hiatus because the author has covid, hopefully he makes a full recovery and the story isn't dropped
a bad write fic full of inconsitences and with a world background that is extremely bad and not though enough. author make it see extremely difficult to have a blue talent Pokemon but mc gain one extremely easy. we can t forget some more minor thing that make this fic difult to like. mc losing his memories and becoming nothing more than a of character,mc being a 10 year old that act like a adult but no one question,him having aura but his first and most important Pokemon being a normal type. author making only able to bond with one pokmeo only to change this later. resuming a fic with good potential but with a bad writer
Overall I really like the story. The new elements you add into the pokemon world is something I havent read before in other pokemon fanfics which I both enjoy and respect. Also I like reincarnation stories where the mc doesnt have their previous memories so I enjoyed this story.
Revelar Spoiler great its really awesome espein is cute and powerful i hope mc catches all the legendarys i hate it when other rivals have legendary but the mc didnt
Quite possibly one of the best pokemon fanfics I have ever read. The battles are well though out, the level progression and mastery system in place is also phenomenal. Additionally the plot of the story is beyond amazing so far. The Author is also highly receptive to constructive criticisms so kudos to that. Overall a must read if you are a Pokemon fan. Keep up the good work author-nim.
One of the best pokemon fanfic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I just don't like the fact that the mc loses his memories as there is no point in doing this, it's basically the same thing as giving some random newborn civilian in that world abilities/powers without them understanding how or why they have it. :/
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fanfic interessante escolha única de Pokémon para ser seu parceiro de Aura já estava cansado de sempre ver o mesmo Pokémon 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Quite funny, our FanFics are struggling for the 2th position on the ranking (not that I care tbh) and yet my powerstones go to yours, says enoug about what I think of it lol
really like the story and characters always like Pokemon stories and this is a great one aaaajhdhsohdsjjshkshdhdiievejeheujdbdosbhhdbhdhjsshi
I absolutely recomend this novel, great pokemon AU fanfic, the battles specially are very dynamic all character are great and the pokemon are people instead of of just dolls that can just say their names once in a while. The only stain in the fanfic is the prologue, which is pointless and infuriating, a HUGE turn off for anyone reading and really the only way to make it worse is if the author personally came to your house to kick you in the balls. That said, its just a turn off, the rest of the work is top tier and totally worth reading.
The story just completed its first Arc, so I will drop the shameless review. *COUGH* *COUGH* *AHEM* I want to be the very best Like no one ever was To catch them is my real test To train them is my cause I will travel across the land Searching far and wide Each Pokemon to understand The power that's inside Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all It's you and me I know it's my destiny Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend In a world we must defend Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all A heart so true Our courage will pull us through You teach me and I'll teach you Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all Every challenge along the way With courage I will face I will battle everyday To claim my rightful place Come with me, the time is right There's no better team On and on we'll win the fight It's always been our dream Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all It's you and me I know it's my destiny Pokemon! Oh, you're my best friend In a world we must defend Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all A heart so true Our courage will pull us through You teach me and I'll teach you Pokemon! Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all Gotta catch 'em all