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probably one of the most unique hp fanfic I have read, waiting for more chapters
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Espero uma atualização da história.........................................................................................................................................
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If there was continuity in the chapters, you would have seen support from the readers. The novel is a masterpiece and one of the best I have read
this is honestly the best Harry Potter fanfiction that doesn't follow the original plot too much and takes place in another country outside of Britain and outside of hogwarts. they are still before Harry "defeated" Voldemort so I can't say how the story will develop after the war is over and how got that will be, but I hope it will be good. All in all my only problem is that I've ran out of chapters.
Although the author has a consistent release schedule they often have real world problems that delay the release (which is fine). The story, the MC and the world building has had a great start and amazing potential and I believe that this author with be able to truly make this story one of the best. Thx for the story author hope you have a great time writing :)
has potential , but there are some inconsistencys that arent that bad in the beginning but start to get on the nerfs later.
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Very good though , I love everything about mc and nothing disgusts me about his character, maybe this story will be slow because he doesn't have a system that can help him in growing
I think you’re doing well with this story. Something I would like to point out with the writing is that it doesn’t focus on the present events, rather it leans more in the inner thoughts. The issue with the writing at the moment is the constant monologue after every event. It disrupts the dialogue and inhibits the flow. Furthermore, it’s really long. It’s like those anime fights where, within each slash and each second, there’s an entire conversation between the protagonist and enemy. I would recommend you cut down on the length and focus more on the current in each dialogue. The plot is enjoyable at the moment. Good job.
قصة تتكلم عن عالم هاري بوتر وفي دولة رومانيا وفي عصر فولدمورت القصة فيها الكثير من الابداع في الشخصيات اقتراحات من الافضل ان ينشئ مدرسة في رومانيا وربما يخلف المنظمة A story that talks about the world of Harry Potter, in the country of Romania and in the age of Voldemort, the story has a lot of creativity in the characters Suggestions It is better to establish a school in Romania He may succeed the organization
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I have to say I'm really interested as to how this is going to develop and I really want to know if he's going to end up becoming a vampire but I suppose time will tell so long as it doesn't get dropped
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This fanfic is pretty good, from an objective point of view. The writing quality is great, and the author is doing a good job of developing his own world-building. Subjectively, however, I personally don't like it all that much. It doesn't read like a harry potter story at all, and after 25 chapters we haven't been introduced to a single canon character, and the MC is still a brat below Hogwarts age. It's just not what I'm looking for in a HP fanfiction.
This is probably the most unique and well thought out hp ff that I've read in my 7 years of using Webnovel (ps this is a second account forgot the password of my main😭) (pss spoiler ahead -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------) I personally love that u didn't for the generic starting point of every hp ff out there most hp ff's don't even engage with other countries or just straight up time skip it and about 90% of hp ffs out here is just Britain and f hogwartscause everyone's a unimaginative b
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I like the story so far and hope it will continue. It's one of the better ones on this site. I hope you can keep up the excellent work and wish you luck.
It is not a good idea to write in the first person, you lose many tools and from one moment to another you do not know how to continue. Sure, if your experience is good, no problem. I speak from personal experience, good luck.
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Начало понравилось, надеюсь дальше будет так же. Будет ли он изучать колдомедицину, темную магию, фехтование? Он будет анимагом? Как тебе идея сделать собственною палочку, будет ли у него фамильяр?
Shameless author review, but with a grain of salt. I am not the best writer out there, but I do wish to finish this story. My updates may not be stable, but I plan to release 3-4 chapters every week for sure. As for the story, I think its fun, the MC is a bit deranged, he sometimes talks breaking the 4th wall, but don't worry that's just to add to this crazy aesthetic. The story is mainly going to focus outside cannon storylines, but later on I will definitely rope in Hogwarts and the British isles into it. I was really inspired by the fantastic beasts movies as well. So expect to see some original spells and some fun fights ahead. I will try to make it as interesting as possible for you guys. Don't forget to leave your own review if you liked it or even if you didn't like and have some suggestions you want implemented. I will be sure to reply!
probably one of the most unique hp fanfic I have read, waiting for more chapters
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Espero uma atualização da história.........................................................................................................................................
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If there was continuity in the chapters, you would have seen support from the readers. The novel is a masterpiece and one of the best I have read
this is honestly the best Harry Potter fanfiction that doesn't follow the original plot too much and takes place in another country outside of Britain and outside of hogwarts. they are still before Harry "defeated" Voldemort so I can't say how the story will develop after the war is over and how got that will be, but I hope it will be good. All in all my only problem is that I've ran out of chapters.
Although the author has a consistent release schedule they often have real world problems that delay the release (which is fine). The story, the MC and the world building has had a great start and amazing potential and I believe that this author with be able to truly make this story one of the best. Thx for the story author hope you have a great time writing :)
has potential , but there are some inconsistencys that arent that bad in the beginning but start to get on the nerfs later.
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Very good though , I love everything about mc and nothing disgusts me about his character, maybe this story will be slow because he doesn't have a system that can help him in growing
I think you’re doing well with this story. Something I would like to point out with the writing is that it doesn’t focus on the present events, rather it leans more in the inner thoughts. The issue with the writing at the moment is the constant monologue after every event. It disrupts the dialogue and inhibits the flow. Furthermore, it’s really long. It’s like those anime fights where, within each slash and each second, there’s an entire conversation between the protagonist and enemy. I would recommend you cut down on the length and focus more on the current in each dialogue. The plot is enjoyable at the moment. Good job.
قصة تتكلم عن عالم هاري بوتر وفي دولة رومانيا وفي عصر فولدمورت القصة فيها الكثير من الابداع في الشخصيات اقتراحات من الافضل ان ينشئ مدرسة في رومانيا وربما يخلف المنظمة A story that talks about the world of Harry Potter, in the country of Romania and in the age of Voldemort, the story has a lot of creativity in the characters Suggestions It is better to establish a school in Romania He may succeed the organization
Revelar Spoiler I have to say I'm really interested as to how this is going to develop and I really want to know if he's going to end up becoming a vampire but I suppose time will tell so long as it doesn't get dropped
Revelar Spoiler This fanfic is pretty good, from an objective point of view. The writing quality is great, and the author is doing a good job of developing his own world-building. Subjectively, however, I personally don't like it all that much. It doesn't read like a harry potter story at all, and after 25 chapters we haven't been introduced to a single canon character, and the MC is still a brat below Hogwarts age. It's just not what I'm looking for in a HP fanfiction.
This is probably the most unique and well thought out hp ff that I've read in my 7 years of using Webnovel (ps this is a second account forgot the password of my main😭) (pss spoiler ahead -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------) I personally love that u didn't for the generic starting point of every hp ff out there most hp ff's don't even engage with other countries or just straight up time skip it and about 90% of hp ffs out here is just Britain and f hogwartscause everyone's a unimaginative b
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I like the story so far and hope it will continue. It's one of the better ones on this site. I hope you can keep up the excellent work and wish you luck.
It is not a good idea to write in the first person, you lose many tools and from one moment to another you do not know how to continue. Sure, if your experience is good, no problem. I speak from personal experience, good luck.
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Начало понравилось, надеюсь дальше будет так же. Будет ли он изучать колдомедицину, темную магию, фехтование? Он будет анимагом? Как тебе идея сделать собственною палочку, будет ли у него фамильяр?
Shameless author review, but with a grain of salt. I am not the best writer out there, but I do wish to finish this story. My updates may not be stable, but I plan to release 3-4 chapters every week for sure. As for the story, I think its fun, the MC is a bit deranged, he sometimes talks breaking the 4th wall, but don't worry that's just to add to this crazy aesthetic. The story is mainly going to focus outside cannon storylines, but later on I will definitely rope in Hogwarts and the British isles into it. I was really inspired by the fantastic beasts movies as well. So expect to see some original spells and some fun fights ahead. I will try to make it as interesting as possible for you guys. Don't forget to leave your own review if you liked it or even if you didn't like and have some suggestions you want implemented. I will be sure to reply!