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I just started the story, and I like the concept a lot, however I don't think the author understands how the Naruto powers work at all. They work so differently to canon, he might as well have made his own power system. it's that bad.
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A childish character that I honestly didn't like, a lot of stupid conversations, a harem mark must be added, a lot of charming beauty, the hero of a perverted person as if he had never seen a beauty before
Я дважды давал шанс этому произведению и пытался найти в нем интересные стороны, но нет, все же это низкосортный фанфик. Автору ещё долго надо будет набираться опытом.
while an intresting start it grows wierd after chapter 3. the grammar could use some work but have seen worse. the problem i the wierd powerscaling and the nonexistant knowledge about charcter design, plot and story. this is ecspicially damaging to the fic when the mc has a timeskip of 4 years and achives absolutely nothing. like he just sat around the garden for 4 years waiting.
I love this fanfic... And I'll be waiting for the continuation of the story... although there are some parts of the story that are not to my liking as a reader, but I still support your work... keep working author
Good fan fiction. But I am interested in the question - is it abandoned? ................................................................................................................................
ooooo it interesting.there are lot of sponsor lol .......................,...........................it a great story.hope it uoadte more...
this story started very well but the part of the execution of his parents and a 5 year old was the last straw for me, the author wants to pass on to his readers an emo and edgelord "MC", he simply accepted the death of his mother who took care of him throughout history because she saw that feeling as weakness, the worst thing is seeing all the comments in the chapter supporting these actions. I like to read about "MC" villains, but it has its limits, and the only thing I've seen about "MC" in the story is a pathetic, power-hungry emo, who just because he has feelings gets all BS full, no I know how the webnovel didn't censor this fanfic
When I read to ch12, I immediately gave this fic 5*, because I am a cultured man :)) .
I think this is quite the interesting novel. The grammar is pretty bad but the rest of the content are fine. 1 star rating for writing quality. The updating rate is also pretty fine but we have to see what happens in the future so 5 stars for that for now. The story development is not bad so 3 stars for that. The character design is also pretty interesting so 4 stars for that. The story background was quite creative so 4 stars for that. The total score would be 3.4.
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The story is good, I recommended it. Macdonald is not the same thing but the railways of a good movie was mito by it in my life that was in a good way of saying it would make sense that I am a little confused and would not want you find the best of my ability for the future and I am sure I would like a good feel about what is one that is going through and what I can I say I will make it work on your own if it doesn't happen in a couple weeks but if I do it I would have been able even though the last one piece is a bit too far off for us we travel in and we are over the last year.
The first 2 volumes were good but I had to drop after that because i didn't like the direction the story was going in, but you may enjoy it. The grammar is a bit iffy at times but doesn't ruin the reading.
the novel is nice to read and evrything is clear.. the system and the charachters are also good. but i would make more contact whit the villains from system
All I can say is it is a very awesome novel 5 star for me. MC is a villain, ruthless, cold, and smart but not too edgy. He is also overpowered. I like how the harem is just a subplot and he is not focus on collecting girls like pokemon and the girls are more like subordinates. The story has nice action and nice scheming in the part of the mc. Please don't drop this author. Thanks for the great work.
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................
i really liked this ff there are some mistakes but I can forgive the author for that (just don't drop it ) xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdcdcdcdcdcdcdcfcfcfcfcfcfcfc
good ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the beginning was ok but as it progress more i can't bear to read more...............................................................,.........
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Overall, IT IS A GOOD FF WITH SOME MINOR MISTAKES ..........................................................................................
started off really good then just slowly got worse and worse. not worth the read but to each there own ig …………………………………………………..
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The only thing that needs improvement is fixing the flaws at early on chapters and spelling mistakes, which is a lot.
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Constant repetition of words. Shut up with the 'death', 'dark' and 'silhouette'. You need a larger vocabulary. It's honestly annoying and a chore to read. The text itself is understandable, but there are a lot of mistakes.
Must Read!! YES YES YES!!!! another gem 💎, I got sick of those "beta mc's" "good guy mc's" like do they think the world is just sunshine and rainbows 💀 plus overlord ❤ (favourite anime 😉)
overall we have fake villain,with abilities don't make sense in how they are powered or can be used without the necessity organs.the author can't be bothered to explain things properly,like how chakra is refined.the author forgets who the MC is just let.you know author if you reading this your novel is trash
I just started the story, and I like the concept a lot, however I don't think the author understands how the Naruto powers work at all. They work so differently to canon, he might as well have made his own power system. it's that bad.
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A childish character that I honestly didn't like, a lot of stupid conversations, a harem mark must be added, a lot of charming beauty, the hero of a perverted person as if he had never seen a beauty before
Я дважды давал шанс этому произведению и пытался найти в нем интересные стороны, но нет, все же это низкосортный фанфик. Автору ещё долго надо будет набираться опытом.
while an intresting start it grows wierd after chapter 3. the grammar could use some work but have seen worse. the problem i the wierd powerscaling and the nonexistant knowledge about charcter design, plot and story. this is ecspicially damaging to the fic when the mc has a timeskip of 4 years and achives absolutely nothing. like he just sat around the garden for 4 years waiting.
I love this fanfic... And I'll be waiting for the continuation of the story... although there are some parts of the story that are not to my liking as a reader, but I still support your work... keep working author
Good fan fiction. But I am interested in the question - is it abandoned? ................................................................................................................................
ooooo it interesting.there are lot of sponsor lol .......................,...........................it a great story.hope it uoadte more...
this story started very well but the part of the execution of his parents and a 5 year old was the last straw for me, the author wants to pass on to his readers an emo and edgelord "MC", he simply accepted the death of his mother who took care of him throughout history because she saw that feeling as weakness, the worst thing is seeing all the comments in the chapter supporting these actions. I like to read about "MC" villains, but it has its limits, and the only thing I've seen about "MC" in the story is a pathetic, power-hungry emo, who just because he has feelings gets all BS full, no I know how the webnovel didn't censor this fanfic
When I read to ch12, I immediately gave this fic 5*, because I am a cultured man :)) .
I think this is quite the interesting novel. The grammar is pretty bad but the rest of the content are fine. 1 star rating for writing quality. The updating rate is also pretty fine but we have to see what happens in the future so 5 stars for that for now. The story development is not bad so 3 stars for that. The character design is also pretty interesting so 4 stars for that. The story background was quite creative so 4 stars for that. The total score would be 3.4.
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The story is good, I recommended it. Macdonald is not the same thing but the railways of a good movie was mito by it in my life that was in a good way of saying it would make sense that I am a little confused and would not want you find the best of my ability for the future and I am sure I would like a good feel about what is one that is going through and what I can I say I will make it work on your own if it doesn't happen in a couple weeks but if I do it I would have been able even though the last one piece is a bit too far off for us we travel in and we are over the last year.
The first 2 volumes were good but I had to drop after that because i didn't like the direction the story was going in, but you may enjoy it. The grammar is a bit iffy at times but doesn't ruin the reading.
the novel is nice to read and evrything is clear.. the system and the charachters are also good. but i would make more contact whit the villains from system
All I can say is it is a very awesome novel 5 star for me. MC is a villain, ruthless, cold, and smart but not too edgy. He is also overpowered. I like how the harem is just a subplot and he is not focus on collecting girls like pokemon and the girls are more like subordinates. The story has nice action and nice scheming in the part of the mc. Please don't drop this author. Thanks for the great work.
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................
i really liked this ff there are some mistakes but I can forgive the author for that (just don't drop it ) xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdcdcdcdcdcdcdcfcfcfcfcfcfcfc
good ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
the beginning was ok but as it progress more i can't bear to read more...............................................................,.........
Entertaining,new concept.........[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Overall, IT IS A GOOD FF WITH SOME MINOR MISTAKES ..........................................................................................
started off really good then just slowly got worse and worse. not worth the read but to each there own ig …………………………………………………..
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
The only thing that needs improvement is fixing the flaws at early on chapters and spelling mistakes, which is a lot.
SUBARASHI! o(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)oo(｀ω´*)o
Constant repetition of words. Shut up with the 'death', 'dark' and 'silhouette'. You need a larger vocabulary. It's honestly annoying and a chore to read. The text itself is understandable, but there are a lot of mistakes.
Must Read!! YES YES YES!!!! another gem 💎, I got sick of those "beta mc's" "good guy mc's" like do they think the world is just sunshine and rainbows 💀 plus overlord ❤ (favourite anime 😉)
overall we have fake villain,with abilities don't make sense in how they are powered or can be used without the necessity organs.the author can't be bothered to explain things properly,like how chakra is refined.the author forgets who the MC is just let.you know author if you reading this your novel is trash