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Это то произведение которое хочется читать не отрываясь, ведь как только ты оторвешся тебя мучает вопрос. [А что было дальше?] Икогда ты понимаешь что это ты не узнаешь хочется найти автора и хорошенько попить с ним чай!!!!!
muy bueno, es de las mejores fanfics que e leido sobre Spiderman...... ....................................................................... ......
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Muito bom, gostei bastante da história tem bastante potencial, vi que não postas há alguns meses espere que não tenha se passado nada contigo ou que tenhas perdido o incentivo, força nisso e continua o bom trabalho!
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I need more chapters, this is a very good story keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice, I hope he gets a cool suit in the futur. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
good story, good stuff. just don't ruin everything by making it a harem. It seems like a typical marvel fanfic with a power seeking self insert protagonist. Obviously, that's exactly what I'm looking for. The SI also has his normal smart mouth, so that's a bonus.
I love me a good spider-man ff like this keep up the good work .......................................................................................
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its a great start for now i wish that you update soon. MOre interaction with people would be nice to see too, great way to see how the character grows. Keep it up author!
It's only 3 chapters in but so far it is better than 90% of webnovel's spiderman fanfictions. It is well written and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Ну пока что понравилось,даже очень сильно понравилось,сюжет пока что хорошо идет,и мне нравиться эти дополнительные изменение в пауке,да и стиль написание хороший,главное надеюсь что он будет с одной из самых лучших девушек тайтла,а именно с Фелиций Харди,реально она самая крутая,к тому же она Чёрная кошка,а кто не хотел бы себе кошку?Желаю удачи и вдохновение автору[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Giving it a 5 stars cus this is one of the Best Spiderman fics I've ever read and definitely the best one on this site. Hope to see it reach it's completion!
i dont know if this storto Will continue but from what i Red so fare i really Hope this storys Will see a ending, hoping for the best, peace.
Looks good so far, but I just wanted to ask whether this is going to be a harem or not? Because I detest harems in marvel fics and would like to know before I continue reading. Looks like it's gonna be MJ so far, but I have previously been baited by that other popular spiderman fic, "The Spider", I think it was called. Don't want a repeat of that lol.
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This is looking to be a very nice story. As of writting this review, there’s only three chapters out, so it has a lot of potential. Writting quality: Very nice and easy to grasp. Definitely better than most writers on Webnovel. Updating Stability: Story recently came out and so far there’s been 3 chapters in 5 days. Story Development: It has a good pace, chapters are long and is mostly not tedious to get through. Not much engaging interactions between the mc and others, but it only has 3 chapters so thats okay. From the short interactions there’s been though, its clear the writer knows how to properly convey who’s speaking and dialogue is realistic. Character Design: Now, this is the fun part. It is a merge between peter parker and a transmigrator. However, both personalities appear equally within the character. So its not a transmigrator with just Peter’s memories. This is the driving point of this story, the transmigrator’s need for more power than normal Peter would have. And to also live a good life with more money and with Uncle Ben alive. So, a relatively new plot that I personally have not seen before. World Background: The mc seems to be in the MCU, yet it’s also a mix of The Amazing Spider-Man movies. An example would be that Oscorp exists and Green Goblin does too. It’s unknown if anything else exists in this AU MCU World other than that. I’m very excited for this story, hope author doesn’t drop it. Also, Happy New Years!
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one of the best spiderman fics . would love to read more please don't drop it. I love that he's trying to become more op. please include black cat.
A NOICE Fan-Fiction or may I say the best Spider-Man fiction out there. It may only have three chapters at present but I see the potential. It has a great character design. Thank you, Author, for sharing this Legen wait for it.. dary, a Legendary Fan-Fiction with us.
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So far the story has flowed well (excuse the pun) and the main character is not just someone on a mad quest for power money or women which is good as it would make him very shallow l hope he finds a balance and can be both a good hero and someone with a good life.
Это то произведение которое хочется читать не отрываясь, ведь как только ты оторвешся тебя мучает вопрос. [А что было дальше?] Икогда ты понимаешь что это ты не узнаешь хочется найти автора и хорошенько попить с ним чай!!!!!
muy bueno, es de las mejores fanfics que e leido sobre Spiderman...... ....................................................................... ......
exp..........................................................................................................................................
Muito bom, gostei bastante da história tem bastante potencial, vi que não postas há alguns meses espere que não tenha se passado nada contigo ou que tenhas perdido o incentivo, força nisso e continua o bom trabalho!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I need more chapters, this is a very good story keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice, I hope he gets a cool suit in the futur. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
good story, good stuff. just don't ruin everything by making it a harem. It seems like a typical marvel fanfic with a power seeking self insert protagonist. Obviously, that's exactly what I'm looking for. The SI also has his normal smart mouth, so that's a bonus.
I love me a good spider-man ff like this keep up the good work .......................................................................................
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood gooooooooooooooooooooood continue.🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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its a great start for now i wish that you update soon. MOre interaction with people would be nice to see too, great way to see how the character grows. Keep it up author!
It's only 3 chapters in but so far it is better than 90% of webnovel's spiderman fanfictions. It is well written and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Ну пока что понравилось,даже очень сильно понравилось,сюжет пока что хорошо идет,и мне нравиться эти дополнительные изменение в пауке,да и стиль написание хороший,главное надеюсь что он будет с одной из самых лучших девушек тайтла,а именно с Фелиций Харди,реально она самая крутая,к тому же она Чёрная кошка,а кто не хотел бы себе кошку?Желаю удачи и вдохновение автору[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Giving it a 5 stars cus this is one of the Best Spiderman fics I've ever read and definitely the best one on this site. Hope to see it reach it's completion!
i dont know if this storto Will continue but from what i Red so fare i really Hope this storys Will see a ending, hoping for the best, peace.
Looks good so far, but I just wanted to ask whether this is going to be a harem or not? Because I detest harems in marvel fics and would like to know before I continue reading. Looks like it's gonna be MJ so far, but I have previously been baited by that other popular spiderman fic, "The Spider", I think it was called. Don't want a repeat of that lol.
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залупупа . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is looking to be a very nice story. As of writting this review, there’s only three chapters out, so it has a lot of potential. Writting quality: Very nice and easy to grasp. Definitely better than most writers on Webnovel. Updating Stability: Story recently came out and so far there’s been 3 chapters in 5 days. Story Development: It has a good pace, chapters are long and is mostly not tedious to get through. Not much engaging interactions between the mc and others, but it only has 3 chapters so thats okay. From the short interactions there’s been though, its clear the writer knows how to properly convey who’s speaking and dialogue is realistic. Character Design: Now, this is the fun part. It is a merge between peter parker and a transmigrator. However, both personalities appear equally within the character. So its not a transmigrator with just Peter’s memories. This is the driving point of this story, the transmigrator’s need for more power than normal Peter would have. And to also live a good life with more money and with Uncle Ben alive. So, a relatively new plot that I personally have not seen before. World Background: The mc seems to be in the MCU, yet it’s also a mix of The Amazing Spider-Man movies. An example would be that Oscorp exists and Green Goblin does too. It’s unknown if anything else exists in this AU MCU World other than that. I’m very excited for this story, hope author doesn’t drop it. Also, Happy New Years!
Revelar Spoiler Wwwwoooooooooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!Good very well made ((σ≧▽≦)σＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏヾ(≧▽≦*)oＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ(σ≧▽≦)σＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏヾ(≧▽≦*)oＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ(σ≧▽≦)σＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏヾ(≧▽≦*)oＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ(σ≧▽≦)σ
one of the best spiderman fics . would love to read more please don't drop it. I love that he's trying to become more op. please include black cat.
A NOICE Fan-Fiction or may I say the best Spider-Man fiction out there. It may only have three chapters at present but I see the potential. It has a great character design. Thank you, Author, for sharing this Legen wait for it.. dary, a Legendary Fan-Fiction with us.
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So far the story has flowed well (excuse the pun) and the main character is not just someone on a mad quest for power money or women which is good as it would make him very shallow l hope he finds a balance and can be both a good hero and someone with a good life.
I really love this story so please keep it up.!