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are you not going to continue this fanfiction? A new chapter is not coming for a very long time, let me know if it has been left, please let's give up hope 🥲🥲🥲
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I am vary happy with the story and look forward to more Keep It Up {GOOD STUFF}
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So far this is very amazing to me i always felt that agot had a lot to offer in kingdon building genre sadly no one rlly made it work or i havnt seen it yet but this one is rlly good i was hooked hope you keep up the updates.
I'm really looking forward to the development. At the moment it's just beginning, but I can't wait for the kingdom to be built. There are not enough chapters at the moment to give a more detailed review but I hope that the author can post chapters more often.
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I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I like it so far, but I don't like where this is going. It kind of seems like the author is just going to introduce and develop a whole bunch of characters just to throw them all away like garbage as soon as a time skip happens and the MC gets reincarnated 100 years later. It feels totally unnecessary to describe every character, especially the so-called savages that are immediately killed right after being described. Honestly, I would be fine if the taking over of the island is completely glossed over with a single paragraph. In conclusion, this has too much character development where it is unnecessary. Don't get me wrong; it is still a good fanfic, but it's too slow for my liking. Yes, kingdom building stories should have good worldbuilding, and it does, but you're describing unnecessary things about other characters while I still don't have a clear understanding on the MC's character. I know more about his sister than him! Also, polygamy can go burn in heck.
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it's a good one....lots of potential...more chaps !!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................................................................
Well colour me impress on this novel !! It's well planned and i can see author san has put out great efforts in research and development too!! Just hoping for timely regular updates.. Once again great job author san 🤘
Me gusta,¿conquistara poniente o esos? Se emfrentara a los targayen?..................................................................................................................... .
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I love it and I want more. I really like the progressing kingdom building part, and that you don’t just time skip to all the major events.
Great novel, loving the story so far. Author seems very knowledgable about got which helps. Definitely worth the read. Just wish there was more chapters. Keep up the great work author ❤️
Great novel, the story and everything is great. The only problem is the updating speed and writing quality which isnt the best but still readable. I just hope more chaps can be released cuz this novel is a dime. 😭😭😭😭😔😭😭😭😭✌👌
Good Fanfiction MC is Valyrian, from declining house but still very rich he got 2 dragons around 60~80 dragon eggs, transmigrats just a year before The Doom. He is able to use magic, less than a year of training he is able to do few spells, I hope Author explore about magic. I just want to ask author if MC's conquest will be start from Westros or Essos?
Great story based on the creation of a kingdom on the island of skagos, focus on naval development and so far I really liked it.
I am really happy with this fan fiction. But you should do a quick timeskip soon. Just show the important moments like the dance of dragons, Blackfyre rebellion, war of ninepenny kings, Robert's rebellion. And also grow business in essos etc. The house should have an intelligent unit and silveros name should be feared by all even the Targaryans. And show some random povs in the story.
are you not going to continue this fanfiction? A new chapter is not coming for a very long time, let me know if it has been left, please let's give up hope 🥲🥲🥲
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I am vary happy with the story and look forward to more Keep It Up {GOOD STUFF}
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So far this is very amazing to me i always felt that agot had a lot to offer in kingdon building genre sadly no one rlly made it work or i havnt seen it yet but this one is rlly good i was hooked hope you keep up the updates.
I'm really looking forward to the development. At the moment it's just beginning, but I can't wait for the kingdom to be built. There are not enough chapters at the moment to give a more detailed review but I hope that the author can post chapters more often.
Supa good Plz don’t drop 🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀🦀
I really enjoy it so far. you could do alot with it i hope you add more chapters soon[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
I like it so far, but I don't like where this is going. It kind of seems like the author is just going to introduce and develop a whole bunch of characters just to throw them all away like garbage as soon as a time skip happens and the MC gets reincarnated 100 years later. It feels totally unnecessary to describe every character, especially the so-called savages that are immediately killed right after being described. Honestly, I would be fine if the taking over of the island is completely glossed over with a single paragraph. In conclusion, this has too much character development where it is unnecessary. Don't get me wrong; it is still a good fanfic, but it's too slow for my liking. Yes, kingdom building stories should have good worldbuilding, and it does, but you're describing unnecessary things about other characters while I still don't have a clear understanding on the MC's character. I know more about his sister than him! Also, polygamy can go burn in heck.
it's a good one....lots of potential...more chaps[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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it's a good one....lots of potential...more chaps !!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................................................................
Well colour me impress on this novel !! It's well planned and i can see author san has put out great efforts in research and development too!! Just hoping for timely regular updates.. Once again great job author san 🤘
Me gusta,¿conquistara poniente o esos? Se emfrentara a los targayen?..................................................................................................................... .
Revelar Spoiler I love it and I want more. I really like the progressing kingdom building part, and that you don’t just time skip to all the major events.
Great novel, loving the story so far. Author seems very knowledgable about got which helps. Definitely worth the read. Just wish there was more chapters. Keep up the great work author ❤️
Great novel, the story and everything is great. The only problem is the updating speed and writing quality which isnt the best but still readable. I just hope more chaps can be released cuz this novel is a dime. 😭😭😭😭😔😭😭😭😭✌👌
Good Fanfiction MC is Valyrian, from declining house but still very rich he got 2 dragons around 60~80 dragon eggs, transmigrats just a year before The Doom. He is able to use magic, less than a year of training he is able to do few spells, I hope Author explore about magic. I just want to ask author if MC's conquest will be start from Westros or Essos?
Great story based on the creation of a kingdom on the island of skagos, focus on naval development and so far I really liked it.
I am really happy with this fan fiction. But you should do a quick timeskip soon. Just show the important moments like the dance of dragons, Blackfyre rebellion, war of ninepenny kings, Robert's rebellion. And also grow business in essos etc. The house should have an intelligent unit and silveros name should be feared by all even the Targaryans. And show some random povs in the story.
Amazing idea 😭😭 so disappointed with the no updates