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A good novel/fanfic with a fun and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing the manga into the world of One Piece is great..................
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Is there ntr or Yuri in the work? ( Hope not) ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is pretty good. Not much to say about it. A decent read and helped kill some time.
Es casi lo más tonto que se ha escrito, los clichés son abundantes y tiene demasiadas contradicciones, la historia no fue pensada en lo más mínimo.
author yaps way too much about his MC and sucks him off too much but I still read cuz of the manga moments oh well
I like this novel because it is fun and entertaining to see the reaction of the characters while reading the manga. plus, the author has added other manga and anime in the story, which is also great when you see them supporting their favourite characters like Naruto, eren, gon,meruem, etc .
Para mi es muy bueno ya que hasta ahora no habia leido un escrito de fanfic de one piece que publicara manga y es muy interesante principalmente las reaciones de los personajes y se lo recomiendo para darle una oportunidad
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Basically two stories in one if you remove the manga part if the story it just a generic one piece power fantasy which is not bad in my opinion but just that I read so much of it that it’s gotten boring to me but the manga part is interesting in my opinion but the story could have been more interesting if the MC worked in the shadows you know an enigmatic entity spreading this around knowing the future and in my opinion the system did should not give him strength abilities but stealth abilities to keep his identity but that is just my opinion.
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Hello author, I would like to share with you an idea. I am currently stuck in the same chapter 301 I stopped by to check out King of the Monsters vs. Gods In fact, it was so wonderful that I don't know why you don't finish it. I felt sad because there were no other chapters, like the disappearance of something dear to your heart. I hope you will continue it from my heart. Now I would like to share the idea with you After the individual leveling is complete, why don't you make him blend into the mold? Why? Well, he protects his family and loved ones, so I think that putting the servants in their shadows would be better and be a winning card. Are you not saying that he can watch them all without blinking? Everyone makes mistakes and it won't be focused on them so it would be a good idea Why didn't I say to make the Shadow King template like the Camorra? Well, what do you think? Well, the Shadow King is a human being with a portion of shadow energy that has improved him and raised the value of his life by degrees. In fact, I would like to ask you to buy several molds because in my opinion, he is an external force that may come one day and disappear. There is nothing better than your own strength. You will say, well, you are the strongest person because you have the Camorra template, and no, do not forget, even if it becomes stronger, there is the Divine Network. What if they decide to erase it? He must control his destiny, and he is essentially the king of the manga. He is not a villain or a hero, meaning a third party chooses what he wants, and he should not feel afraid of just a global villain. Should she be the one who feels afraid of him, so that he can erase her with the click of a finger? is not it Don't forget that the Divine Network gave him a warning, and if he doesn't comply, it will erase him? At least he must be strong so that no one in this world can hinder him Well, you will say that even if you stick to your idea of merging the templates, his body will not be able to achieve balance. For example, if you merge the Camorra and the Shadow King, you will not be able to. Here I have 4 ideas First, make him have the character of Meliodas from the Seven Sins, he has 7 hearts, or all the demons. I don't really remember, so you will say why this character. Well, make yourself only 7 blocks, combine them with hearts. I think you can. It might cause his body to explode like a fruit the first time. But he is immortal so he will recover Secondly, the character Rimuru (the hero, Slime), has the skill of Gluttony. He can absorb everything to convert it into his energy, and you will say how to absorb it. Since the templates are in the system, you need a blood cloning technique like that of the hero of the novel Infinity Mana, which allows you to create an exact copy of the character with its full strength and everything, and you can You command it or you enter your consciousness into it and control it And make the system create a template on your clone or on your real personality, because there is no difference between the real and the copied. They are both vessels that only need to transfer consciousness. When you request a fusion from the system, the clone will transform into that corresponding character at its peak and will use Gluttony to absorb it, having obtained the power of the template and erasing the special impurities from the will of the template or the superior life level. You can create a feature in the system that allows you to create your own techniques. I have solved the problem of where the cloning technique comes from, and you can also create the Gluttony skill without the need to show the hero slime anime. Third, combine the templates that create a human being with a strong force, but its appearance will change slightly Fourth, creating a feature in the system that allows characters to be summoned to the world from different worlds whose stories have been created And using the Gluttony skill, you will say why don't I just make them protect me or fight for me? Well, have you forgotten the ability of the Shadow King? You can revive them after consuming them or search for resurrection technique. Absorb their power and revive them. Thus it will have strong power even Divine Grid can kill him or her. Even if she was just a person who placed the dictation just out of boredom and was added to the harem or something, don't forget, in the many worlds and universes there is no limit to power, so he must exploit the capabilities of the system to the last drop to be able to erase anyone, even if it is a divine network, or above it, or beyond imagination. Thank you if you read what I wrote I hope you'll think about this, even if you don't, just get ideas if you want Because no one can save the hero from being erased from the divine network. You are not like the hero of a novel with an invincible flow. The system chose him to be the heir to the primordial chaos, where his strength became stronger, but he did not ascend to the upper worlds because he was just a human before them, until his strength in the underworld became capable of killing the upper enemies. He ascended. But he had something that he could protect, which is a shield that prevents you from ascending to the higher worlds when your cultivation reaches a certain base. Did you understand my message? So the Manga King has no shield to protect him in case the Divine Network's whim wants to erase him I hope you will continue the novel King of the Monsters, please🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
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Finally we arrive 600 chapter thanks for the hard work please keep writing what you love 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞................................
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Hello author Thank you for this piece of art. I love works of fiction Currently I am in class 301. I would like to ask you a question if possible Is there a possibility for emo to join the harem? Or you will join Or you won't join I hope you understand the meaning of my question and answer me, please Your loyal follower🌷🌷🌷
writing Quality;5Story Development;5character Design ;5Updating Stability ;5World Background ;5
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Best one piece fanfic…captures the true essence of one piece fanfic …loved every chapter of it …honestly
A good novel/fanfic with a fun and powerful MC, and the idea of introducing the manga into the world of One Piece is great..................
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Is there ntr or Yuri in the work? ( Hope not) ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is pretty good. Not much to say about it. A decent read and helped kill some time.
Es casi lo más tonto que se ha escrito, los clichés son abundantes y tiene demasiadas contradicciones, la historia no fue pensada en lo más mínimo.
author yaps way too much about his MC and sucks him off too much but I still read cuz of the manga moments oh well
I like this novel because it is fun and entertaining to see the reaction of the characters while reading the manga. plus, the author has added other manga and anime in the story, which is also great when you see them supporting their favourite characters like Naruto, eren, gon,meruem, etc .
Para mi es muy bueno ya que hasta ahora no habia leido un escrito de fanfic de one piece que publicara manga y es muy interesante principalmente las reaciones de los personajes y se lo recomiendo para darle una oportunidad
Revelar Spoiler Basically two stories in one if you remove the manga part if the story it just a generic one piece power fantasy which is not bad in my opinion but just that I read so much of it that it’s gotten boring to me but the manga part is interesting in my opinion but the story could have been more interesting if the MC worked in the shadows you know an enigmatic entity spreading this around knowing the future and in my opinion the system did should not give him strength abilities but stealth abilities to keep his identity but that is just my opinion.
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Hello author, I would like to share with you an idea. I am currently stuck in the same chapter 301 I stopped by to check out King of the Monsters vs. Gods In fact, it was so wonderful that I don't know why you don't finish it. I felt sad because there were no other chapters, like the disappearance of something dear to your heart. I hope you will continue it from my heart. Now I would like to share the idea with you After the individual leveling is complete, why don't you make him blend into the mold? Why? Well, he protects his family and loved ones, so I think that putting the servants in their shadows would be better and be a winning card. Are you not saying that he can watch them all without blinking? Everyone makes mistakes and it won't be focused on them so it would be a good idea Why didn't I say to make the Shadow King template like the Camorra? Well, what do you think? Well, the Shadow King is a human being with a portion of shadow energy that has improved him and raised the value of his life by degrees. In fact, I would like to ask you to buy several molds because in my opinion, he is an external force that may come one day and disappear. There is nothing better than your own strength. You will say, well, you are the strongest person because you have the Camorra template, and no, do not forget, even if it becomes stronger, there is the Divine Network. What if they decide to erase it? He must control his destiny, and he is essentially the king of the manga. He is not a villain or a hero, meaning a third party chooses what he wants, and he should not feel afraid of just a global villain. Should she be the one who feels afraid of him, so that he can erase her with the click of a finger? is not it Don't forget that the Divine Network gave him a warning, and if he doesn't comply, it will erase him? At least he must be strong so that no one in this world can hinder him Well, you will say that even if you stick to your idea of merging the templates, his body will not be able to achieve balance. For example, if you merge the Camorra and the Shadow King, you will not be able to. Here I have 4 ideas First, make him have the character of Meliodas from the Seven Sins, he has 7 hearts, or all the demons. I don't really remember, so you will say why this character. Well, make yourself only 7 blocks, combine them with hearts. I think you can. It might cause his body to explode like a fruit the first time. But he is immortal so he will recover Secondly, the character Rimuru (the hero, Slime), has the skill of Gluttony. He can absorb everything to convert it into his energy, and you will say how to absorb it. Since the templates are in the system, you need a blood cloning technique like that of the hero of the novel Infinity Mana, which allows you to create an exact copy of the character with its full strength and everything, and you can You command it or you enter your consciousness into it and control it And make the system create a template on your clone or on your real personality, because there is no difference between the real and the copied. They are both vessels that only need to transfer consciousness. When you request a fusion from the system, the clone will transform into that corresponding character at its peak and will use Gluttony to absorb it, having obtained the power of the template and erasing the special impurities from the will of the template or the superior life level. You can create a feature in the system that allows you to create your own techniques. I have solved the problem of where the cloning technique comes from, and you can also create the Gluttony skill without the need to show the hero slime anime. Third, combine the templates that create a human being with a strong force, but its appearance will change slightly Fourth, creating a feature in the system that allows characters to be summoned to the world from different worlds whose stories have been created And using the Gluttony skill, you will say why don't I just make them protect me or fight for me? Well, have you forgotten the ability of the Shadow King? You can revive them after consuming them or search for resurrection technique. Absorb their power and revive them. Thus it will have strong power even Divine Grid can kill him or her. Even if she was just a person who placed the dictation just out of boredom and was added to the harem or something, don't forget, in the many worlds and universes there is no limit to power, so he must exploit the capabilities of the system to the last drop to be able to erase anyone, even if it is a divine network, or above it, or beyond imagination. Thank you if you read what I wrote I hope you'll think about this, even if you don't, just get ideas if you want Because no one can save the hero from being erased from the divine network. You are not like the hero of a novel with an invincible flow. The system chose him to be the heir to the primordial chaos, where his strength became stronger, but he did not ascend to the upper worlds because he was just a human before them, until his strength in the underworld became capable of killing the upper enemies. He ascended. But he had something that he could protect, which is a shield that prevents you from ascending to the higher worlds when your cultivation reaches a certain base. Did you understand my message? So the Manga King has no shield to protect him in case the Divine Network's whim wants to erase him I hope you will continue the novel King of the Monsters, please🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷
Great ff ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Finally we arrive 600 chapter thanks for the hard work please keep writing what you love 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞................................
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Hello author Thank you for this piece of art. I love works of fiction Currently I am in class 301. I would like to ask you a question if possible Is there a possibility for emo to join the harem? Or you will join Or you won't join I hope you understand the meaning of my question and answer me, please Your loyal follower🌷🌷🌷
writing Quality;5Story Development;5character Design ;5Updating Stability ;5World Background ;5
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Best one piece fanfic…captures the true essence of one piece fanfic …loved every chapter of it …honestly