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It's alright so far. Writing quality could use some polishing up, but a good beta reader should solve most of the issues. The dialogue feels a little stilted but that might just be me. Other than that I'm liking what I'm seeing so far and look forward to seeing how the story progresses.
really hope this continues can't wait for the next update............................................................ ..........................
Well.. I just finish this up and have to say that it's not what I expect. AM, a sacred gear that depend on your imagination, create countless monster with limitless abilities as you want. So it's kind of irk me when author focusing on digimon only. I can understand author love for digimon and to easily keep track instead of OC creature. I understand and it's good, solid for author plot. But I don't like it because it's limiting. Anyway, the plot is a bit cringe and kind of 'Tee-Hee!' moment that I don't like. Like.. Hurm.. Well, not my cup of tea. So good luck author and don't mind the star rating. I rate it according to the rating itself, not what I think of this ff.
Revelar Spoiler
i love Digimon i haven't read yet but 5 stars youtubeyoutubeyoutubeyoutubeyoubefghtghjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhtdrshtjyutdryjethgnhrmuyejthjyrmue,tkrstjy,uekyrfh,etdsykdtjk,jetukyjtmryjethqjmywmuj6ymetyemhyjmhyrjhmyjrhmsryjhjyuj,dkutj,t
10/10 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
idk man the idea seems interesting but the cape of the fic does not make it look good
It's Digimon... What else do you need? (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞🎁) ﾟдﾟ ） ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
It's alright so far. Writing quality could use some polishing up, but a good beta reader should solve most of the issues. The dialogue feels a little stilted but that might just be me. Other than that I'm liking what I'm seeing so far and look forward to seeing how the story progresses.
really hope this continues can't wait for the next update............................................................ ..........................
Well.. I just finish this up and have to say that it's not what I expect. AM, a sacred gear that depend on your imagination, create countless monster with limitless abilities as you want. So it's kind of irk me when author focusing on digimon only. I can understand author love for digimon and to easily keep track instead of OC creature. I understand and it's good, solid for author plot. But I don't like it because it's limiting. Anyway, the plot is a bit cringe and kind of 'Tee-Hee!' moment that I don't like. Like.. Hurm.. Well, not my cup of tea. So good luck author and don't mind the star rating. I rate it according to the rating itself, not what I think of this ff.
Revelar Spoiler i love Digimon i haven't read yet but 5 stars youtubeyoutubeyoutubeyoutubeyoubefghtghjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhtdrshtjyutdryjethgnhrmuyejthjyrmue,tkrstjy,uekyrfh,etdsykdtjk,jetukyjtmryjethqjmywmuj6ymetyemhyjmhyrjhmyjrhmsryjhjyuj,dkutj,t
10/10 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha
idk man the idea seems interesting but the cape of the fic does not make it look good
It's Digimon... What else do you need? (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞🎁) ﾟдﾟ ） ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤