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I liked the story and I am qondering if its dropped, if it is then that sucks. The story gets better the more you read. I like the character of the MC it feels natural not like forced ideals. People complain alot about the story but I am loving it.
Dude, You Have Written A Good Novel But It Can Be Better, As The Whatever Magic, Warrior Or Rogue Class Are There That Can Be Erased Completely, You Want Magic - Learn Mystic Arts You Want Warrior - Learn Chi Control You Want Rogue - Learn From Shield Please Introduce More Special Classes, Write A Descent Plot, System Origin, try to put some life into this novel, there so many plot holes, that it is becoming glaring chapter by chapter. Please Try To Improve This Masterpiece 🥰😘
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The writing has great quality and very few mistakes here and there. It’s very easy to understand. Stability of updates changes from time to time, but that’s life. Story development and character design are there but they are lacking. The characters all appear to be very basic and not thought out. The storyline seems very unplanned and has no current route. The world is still being built and more characters are being introduced, again though, not much to them. Good for a quick read and when direction is determined could use a rewrite.
He gets beaten by spider but system decides what his strength will be. It's like the spider didn't beat him the system did. He should call himself system-man not spiderman. Author didn't even know anything about spiderman and says that his strength should be around 10 ton bruh that's the worst joke I have ever heard, even though he gets beaten and goes through the spider evolution his strength didn't even increase and it's on average human lvl. That's too much nerf. spiderman has min 15-20 ton strength at the beginning he is much more powerful than captain America in strength. Bruh if grandpa stan lee sees this story of yours ,he will surely die in anger on 5th chapter.
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To the Author, As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Thanks- Reader!
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems....................................................
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Hmm... I'm going to re-review this, last time I put it at a 3 since it was average and some mechanics were kinda irritating. But it's been months since then and the updates are somewhat consistent, or at least for the past month it was pretty consistent and it is a good read to pass time.
Ill be honest I wouldn't of left a review if I didn't see that review about him be needed heavily, this fabrics ratings are too high for that.
I read up to chapter 30, I'm going to read more now, and the criticisms in this story don't make sense, they're people who didn't even read the story, they only imposed themselves if the character has a super op power, for the mc to go out fighting with the young masters to show that he has the biggest d##k, the author himself said, he's not smart like Peter, because he's not Peter, he only has Peter's body, and he didn't gain the strength of Spider-Man because the sting only gave one class, but he has the potential to grow stronger than spider man, like it's obvious that the author is writing at a slower pace, and trying not to make him strong all at once, I don't understand the difficulty people have to read and understand this, the story is good, it's not an incredibly super good story, mainly because it has some points that i didn't like, but the story is not bad, it's good.
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Muito bom, espero que possa continuar escrevendo essa história mesmo com os comentários ruins, não se importe com eles, sua história é muito boa
the pace is a bit slow rather than what i am used to, but everything written is easily well understood. i just hope that there are more chapter, though i can understand that worldly mortal stuff ate more important.
This story is good so far your doing great I like it personally so keep up the hard work of writing a story and I really hope you don’t drop this I really want to see a Spider-Man story finished
The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.
c pas logique l'homme araignée est un level up genre 10 tonne de force et tout , la c nerf et c pas un systeme imcomplet si tu l'upgrade en allant alors change ton titre vu c pas chinois ou jeune maitre pour une fois ! je mets trois
It's a good job. She has a certain charm. In general, I like everything......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Achei pika mlk, continua assim, tamo junto................................. .............................................................................
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He is playing on very low class field I mean he is Spider-Man. Spiderman without system would have done better. He hasn't even developed any good physical abilities yet started with magic that as well is pretty useless compared to other magic users of marvel.
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it's a pretty bad story I don't know but I didn't like it one bit is a story about a stupid mc who get the body of one of the greatest minds on the earth but is still stupid and even after a system he is not even stronger than spiderman
I saw you want constructive criticism so I'll do my best Author-san. Spiderman's unique class idea was a good idea, but the equipment that came with him didn't like the webs that get stronger the higher the strength, I think it should be his natural webs that he generates like tobey's web , and the constant system nerfs I think it's good to add logic to his skills but these constant nerfs will make him much weaker than he should, the perks so ok the dungeons are great very good even the best thing I found, try to make a story background for each level of the dungeon I think it would be much better and there is a way to make him mess with technology like a scientist like the original peter, this would easily make him stronger without being dependent on the system that continues to nerf him science would make him strong even without his Spider-Man powers as an inventor for example why don't he create a technology that would be similar to Batman's utility belt. Anyway this is my review for this fanfic
I liked the story and I am qondering if its dropped, if it is then that sucks. The story gets better the more you read. I like the character of the MC it feels natural not like forced ideals. People complain alot about the story but I am loving it.
Dude, You Have Written A Good Novel But It Can Be Better, As The Whatever Magic, Warrior Or Rogue Class Are There That Can Be Erased Completely, You Want Magic - Learn Mystic Arts You Want Warrior - Learn Chi Control You Want Rogue - Learn From Shield Please Introduce More Special Classes, Write A Descent Plot, System Origin, try to put some life into this novel, there so many plot holes, that it is becoming glaring chapter by chapter. Please Try To Improve This Masterpiece 🥰😘
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Revelar Spoiler The writing has great quality and very few mistakes here and there. It’s very easy to understand. Stability of updates changes from time to time, but that’s life. Story development and character design are there but they are lacking. The characters all appear to be very basic and not thought out. The storyline seems very unplanned and has no current route. The world is still being built and more characters are being introduced, again though, not much to them. Good for a quick read and when direction is determined could use a rewrite.
He gets beaten by spider but system decides what his strength will be. It's like the spider didn't beat him the system did. He should call himself system-man not spiderman. Author didn't even know anything about spiderman and says that his strength should be around 10 ton bruh that's the worst joke I have ever heard, even though he gets beaten and goes through the spider evolution his strength didn't even increase and it's on average human lvl. That's too much nerf. spiderman has min 15-20 ton strength at the beginning he is much more powerful than captain America in strength. Bruh if grandpa stan lee sees this story of yours ,he will surely die in anger on 5th chapter.
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To the Author, As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Thanks- Reader!
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems....................................................
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Hmm... I'm going to re-review this, last time I put it at a 3 since it was average and some mechanics were kinda irritating. But it's been months since then and the updates are somewhat consistent, or at least for the past month it was pretty consistent and it is a good read to pass time.
Ill be honest I wouldn't of left a review if I didn't see that review about him be needed heavily, this fabrics ratings are too high for that.
I read up to chapter 30, I'm going to read more now, and the criticisms in this story don't make sense, they're people who didn't even read the story, they only imposed themselves if the character has a super op power, for the mc to go out fighting with the young masters to show that he has the biggest d##k, the author himself said, he's not smart like Peter, because he's not Peter, he only has Peter's body, and he didn't gain the strength of Spider-Man because the sting only gave one class, but he has the potential to grow stronger than spider man, like it's obvious that the author is writing at a slower pace, and trying not to make him strong all at once, I don't understand the difficulty people have to read and understand this, the story is good, it's not an incredibly super good story, mainly because it has some points that i didn't like, but the story is not bad, it's good.
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Muito bom, espero que possa continuar escrevendo essa história mesmo com os comentários ruins, não se importe com eles, sua história é muito boa
the pace is a bit slow rather than what i am used to, but everything written is easily well understood. i just hope that there are more chapter, though i can understand that worldly mortal stuff ate more important.
This story is good so far your doing great I like it personally so keep up the hard work of writing a story and I really hope you don’t drop this I really want to see a Spider-Man story finished
The story is good. I personally like it and while some of the jokes aren't the best it does make me chuckle or smile. Writing quality is good. Some might say it isn't but this is a fanfic, plus not everyone first taal is engels. anyways, the story is good and it's solid pasing THERE is one problem though. While on could say because the title on what the story is, the writer does "bug fix" with the system and power system in the story. Doesn't seem like a big deal. Till the story goes from Spiderman having what looks and probably feels like wolverine regen(20% per minute thing) to a rather minor regen. Then later he brings it back up again. It's annoying to be honest. The constant nerfing then buffing then nerfing is annoying and while it is what the incomplete system means godamm man, it's annoying. Also in general characters aren't really interesting, but ok But overall it is a good fanfic to enjoy reading. You read for good time passing and to enjoy and it's for you. Author, keep up the good work bro. PS: hopefully don't take to much offense to it. Have a good day.
c pas logique l'homme araignée est un level up genre 10 tonne de force et tout , la c nerf et c pas un systeme imcomplet si tu l'upgrade en allant alors change ton titre vu c pas chinois ou jeune maitre pour une fois ! je mets trois
It's a good job. She has a certain charm. In general, I like everything......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Achei pika mlk, continua assim, tamo junto................................. .............................................................................
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
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He is playing on very low class field I mean he is Spider-Man. Spiderman without system would have done better. He hasn't even developed any good physical abilities yet started with magic that as well is pretty useless compared to other magic users of marvel.
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it's a pretty bad story I don't know but I didn't like it one bit is a story about a stupid mc who get the body of one of the greatest minds on the earth but is still stupid and even after a system he is not even stronger than spiderman
I saw you want constructive criticism so I'll do my best Author-san. Spiderman's unique class idea was a good idea, but the equipment that came with him didn't like the webs that get stronger the higher the strength, I think it should be his natural webs that he generates like tobey's web , and the constant system nerfs I think it's good to add logic to his skills but these constant nerfs will make him much weaker than he should, the perks so ok the dungeons are great very good even the best thing I found, try to make a story background for each level of the dungeon I think it would be much better and there is a way to make him mess with technology like a scientist like the original peter, this would easily make him stronger without being dependent on the system that continues to nerf him science would make him strong even without his Spider-Man powers as an inventor for example why don't he create a technology that would be similar to Batman's utility belt. Anyway this is my review for this fanfic
I really love this story so please keep it up.!