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I am dissapointed beacuse this is just a copy paste of 'mi viaje a traves del mundo'(ff in spanish) and some changes . Author just translated to english. Sorry if i give 2 stars but 'mi viaje a traves del mundo' was of my favorite ffs and at least i expected you could give credits to the author bc you other novel(a great harem king) is also a copy and paste of mi viaje a través del mundo. Hope i am wrong about this.
English is ok 3-3,5 still some problems with grammar and wrong vocabulary. the story is pretty jumbled up and it skips a lot. a lot seems rather random too. characters including mc seem rather hollow from the character to the development. The preset of the story seems to have potential though
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I'm disappointed 😩, it's good at first few chapters, he become strongest in the world but in the end, this is just like another fanfic were mc has so much power but doesn't want to change the original story line.
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I am dissapointed beacuse this is just a copy paste of 'mi viaje a traves del mundo'(ff in spanish) and some changes . Author just translated to english. Sorry if i give 2 stars but 'mi viaje a traves del mundo' was of my favorite ffs and at least i expected you could give credits to the author bc you other novel(a great harem king) is also a copy and paste of mi viaje a través del mundo. Hope i am wrong about this.
English is ok 3-3,5 still some problems with grammar and wrong vocabulary. the story is pretty jumbled up and it skips a lot. a lot seems rather random too. characters including mc seem rather hollow from the character to the development. The preset of the story seems to have potential though
Revelar Spoiler I'm disappointed 😩, it's good at first few chapters, he become strongest in the world but in the end, this is just like another fanfic were mc has so much power but doesn't want to change the original story line.
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I have a thick face to rate my work 5 stars. :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) và hầu như tác giả nào cũng sẽ làm như vậy nên tôi cũng sẽ làm thôi
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