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The author doesn't know a thing about laws in India (I'm Indian). Mc makes dumb decisions left, right and center. Finally, the book sounds drier than even some of my 5th-grade school assignments along with having horrid grammar and spelling (worse than pretty much any mtl novel). I got this all from the first 5 chapters but honestly, reading past the first chapter was hard.
You really love tragic past. all this has Tragic tragic and tragic in the beginning chapters so all interest is lost.
Honestly I just didn’t enjoy the story I got two chapters in and felt all passion for reading the story gone. It just didn’t feel real and the massive unbroken paragraphs were extremely hard to slog through
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I don't really see the reason people hate this It about average for me nothing new not especially bad but yeah there isn't anything new to this if I had to say something is good then I guess the grammar isn't too bad well just as I said not especially bad but not good either how to say this yeah the story or the plot isn't interesting just same old guy died got reborn but the author has potential to write something good in the future personal advice author don't start collecting girls right away or people are just gonna go away just start the fic with something catchy and interesting to get people attention otherwise nobody is gonna like it or stick around Good luck
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To tell you the truth author i was expecting an edgelord but this got bashed real fast for crying out loud his insanity was on the blink of collapsing and it broke after he met his mother but no!! she forcefully reincarnated him and by the his probably still insane but the 4chp the dude is chill about all that happened Look author its not me its you i usually encourage you to do your level best but an Edgelord can't be this MC its just disappointing
the author doesnt know what he is writing at all. In child prison they teach you how to fight and also there are organ traffickers in child prison.................. what kind of nonsense is this???
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honestly this review is about the first four chapters of this book. I have the distinct impression that this story basis is shaky. the initial story was fine. however the main character goes into a hissy fit when he finally meets his quote unquote mother. their interaction was unnecessarily emotional, and there was an extreme emphasis on his abuse and his overwrought response. that kind of Poisoned the well for me and it came across as unrelated to the actual plot. so I probably won't be continuing reading this book. my apologies author this wasn't meant in a derogatory manner, but a constructive one.
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could be better, not saying its bad but not the best. but still a good book to read. also i like the wheele idea(ignore the see more button, it's just filler to post the comment) ... .. . . . . mcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthn😋v😋
The story is good not too op from the start and i enjoy reading it truly. So here you go author san my honest review,keep up the good work and thank you for the good story.....
I enjoy the story truly, I didnt realize I hadnt given a reiview so her eyou go author. =0 ---------------------------------------------------------------
shameless author here !!! first time writing novel/fan fic so i don't know how it will go and correction related comments are appreciated . THANKS AND BYE ~
😐 very bad [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
The author doesn't know a thing about laws in India (I'm Indian). Mc makes dumb decisions left, right and center. Finally, the book sounds drier than even some of my 5th-grade school assignments along with having horrid grammar and spelling (worse than pretty much any mtl novel). I got this all from the first 5 chapters but honestly, reading past the first chapter was hard.
You really love tragic past. all this has Tragic tragic and tragic in the beginning chapters so all interest is lost.
Honestly I just didn’t enjoy the story I got two chapters in and felt all passion for reading the story gone. It just didn’t feel real and the massive unbroken paragraphs were extremely hard to slog through
Revelar Spoiler ..................................................................................................................................................................
i like it keep going and don't drop upload soon[img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
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I don't really see the reason people hate this It about average for me nothing new not especially bad but yeah there isn't anything new to this if I had to say something is good then I guess the grammar isn't too bad well just as I said not especially bad but not good either how to say this yeah the story or the plot isn't interesting just same old guy died got reborn but the author has potential to write something good in the future personal advice author don't start collecting girls right away or people are just gonna go away just start the fic with something catchy and interesting to get people attention otherwise nobody is gonna like it or stick around Good luck
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To tell you the truth author i was expecting an edgelord but this got bashed real fast for crying out loud his insanity was on the blink of collapsing and it broke after he met his mother but no!! she forcefully reincarnated him and by the his probably still insane but the 4chp the dude is chill about all that happened Look author its not me its you i usually encourage you to do your level best but an Edgelord can't be this MC its just disappointing
the author doesnt know what he is writing at all. In child prison they teach you how to fight and also there are organ traffickers in child prison.................. what kind of nonsense is this???
Good novel . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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honestly this review is about the first four chapters of this book. I have the distinct impression that this story basis is shaky. the initial story was fine. however the main character goes into a hissy fit when he finally meets his quote unquote mother. their interaction was unnecessarily emotional, and there was an extreme emphasis on his abuse and his overwrought response. that kind of Poisoned the well for me and it came across as unrelated to the actual plot. so I probably won't be continuing reading this book. my apologies author this wasn't meant in a derogatory manner, but a constructive one.
Revelar Spoiler could be better, not saying its bad but not the best. but still a good book to read. also i like the wheele idea(ignore the see more button, it's just filler to post the comment) ... .. . . . . mcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthnmcscwcsdvvdfrgndbdfhnsrgjsfhnsthnsthnsthnsfhndfhnsfhnsthnfshnsfhnsfhnsthnsthnsthndthn😋v😋
The story is good not too op from the start and i enjoy reading it truly. So here you go author san my honest review,keep up the good work and thank you for the good story.....
I enjoy the story truly, I didnt realize I hadnt given a reiview so her eyou go author. =0 ---------------------------------------------------------------
shameless author here !!! first time writing novel/fan fic so i don't know how it will go and correction related comments are appreciated . THANKS AND BYE ~
I really liked this. Hate that it got dropped 😕😕