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had to stop reading at chapter 14. The spelling and writing got to me and the main character wasn't my personal cup of tea, which I can usually put aside and enjoy it if the writing quality and spelling is there. It's like they tried to smash all the cringe from anime thats only cool in anime into marvel which made it more cringe, also there seemed to be things happening that didn't actually effect much. Also it's was a bit too fast past, I only got through the start so that might change but the start is the funnest part of fanfiction for me and it felt like it was skipped.
Definitely have enjoyed reading this book and the way that this book has been going on with Cul and his plan not to mention didn't expect for Natasha to get one of the weapons that Cul had sent out but also I'm curious for what will happen in the time takes for Dormamu to arrive at Earth and all things that will happen look forward to reading more of this book and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Writing quality: 2 stars, my criticism on the grammar and stuff can be found below Updating stability: 2 stars, at first the updates were frequent, but in later chapters we got a lot of stop and go Story development: 4 stars, this story is an interesting tale on the MCU and brings a new perspective to factions and characters Character design: 2 1/2 - 3 stars, interesting Orginal character that sadly act irrational to their supposed characteristics World background: 2 stars, well this is the MCU + a bit of comic lore, and not much new was added to it so I can’t give the author too much credit for it, but even in that case I would usually give a better rating, but since some concepts are broken without elaborating on a new background creation and we up until recently didn’t get to see that much of the typical MCU I’ve decided on 2 stars (note to readers, possible readers of this book and the author; I mean no offense and only wish to state my subjective opinion) To be honest, I ignored the word Jumbles you call sentences for the better part of this story, I enjoyed this new concept and take on the marvel universe. Your characters were original, but (I don’t mean this in a disrespectful way, just as an advice) I’ll drop this story because I feel like my IQ and writing/reading abilities are going to disintegrate if I do this to my eyes any longer. And here is my advice: I know this is a fanfic and you may see this as a low priority but for your further work in writing literature (if you intend on continuing it) please re-read your chapters before posting them and go through grammer and sentence structure again. I totally understand when you overlook something or are in a writing spree, but there are just words missing, in the wrong places or random lone letters with no meaning sprinkle between words, that can only be explained due to lack of proof reading. So if you don’t want your fans (counting myself in) loose interest and quit you should take note of what I said. Have a good day I wrote this in a paragraph comment in the book already. I‘m only posting it as a review to give an honest and reflected opinion
overall it's a good novel,just the update were a bit long(〒﹏〒)..... Thanks author for your time and effort put in creating this novel ｡◕‿◕｡
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its a great novel but it`s slowly dying because the chapter are published so slowly. I know its a lot of work but i don't want this fic to disappear
Story has been really good has plenty of potential not to mention MC born in time with Odin even being his brother and having his own realm , being able to have different abilities along with divinity, the declaration of planet called Midgard being under his protection and part of planets he controls or in a way rules over, truly everything have done so far in this book has been quite interesting and intriguing overall has been entertaining especially with Gaia The Goddess of Earth and etc.. becoming wife of MC not just that but the different kinds of weapons looking for weilders to be able to use them made and created by their master is truly something unexpected and unique due to not many other books doing the same can't wait to read more of this book and find out what will happen next look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
awesome novel..............................................love it//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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well ...................................................................................................................................................................................................its honestly too bland
I honestly love the fan-fic the start was kinda rocky but in the current chapters it’s great.
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I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!
it's good that is all I'm gonna say ....................................................................................,...............m......
man no matter how many Times i come back to read this I can barely make it baste 4 chapters before dropping it...such a garbage novel just can't be enjoyed...
I have read this story before and just resumed to read it again. I think Cur's character does not progress very well, he is too much a predictable character knowing everything and seems to achieve almost everything that he works for,which makes the character the illusion of perfection.I wish there is another Isekai reader or character of equal potential that comes to avenge something/someone since he have made a lot of enemies .
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Well, the writing quality seems like an MTL but the progress and other things are good with the cheat not being too op but still considered a cheat. Although their cliche it is still a decent read.
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Ótima fanfic, adorei o MC, achei muito enteressante ele construir sua própria família e reino, por favo continue com as atualizações.........
TBH, i started reading and just reached the last updated chapter in one sitting. There are some areas that could’ve beed done better, but I can see how the authour keep improving his writing style from the beginning of the story to how it is now, and i’m very impressed. I loved this story and i hope for more chapters ❤️.
after reading almost every marvel fanfic out there... this came with a pleasant surprise to me..... i thank author for giving me few hours of entertainment....................................
Please don't be discouraged, but towards the end, your chapters became extremely brief and uninspired. The first 20 chapters went swimmingly until they abruptly turned sour. To me, it appeared that you had lost interest in this fanfic and were only updating out of obligation.
I love this story but currently it is on a break I think. Based on the lack of chapters. When it does get updated it’s usually the one I save for last to really enjoy it.
had to stop reading at chapter 14. The spelling and writing got to me and the main character wasn't my personal cup of tea, which I can usually put aside and enjoy it if the writing quality and spelling is there. It's like they tried to smash all the cringe from anime thats only cool in anime into marvel which made it more cringe, also there seemed to be things happening that didn't actually effect much. Also it's was a bit too fast past, I only got through the start so that might change but the start is the funnest part of fanfiction for me and it felt like it was skipped.
Definitely have enjoyed reading this book and the way that this book has been going on with Cul and his plan not to mention didn't expect for Natasha to get one of the weapons that Cul had sent out but also I'm curious for what will happen in the time takes for Dormamu to arrive at Earth and all things that will happen look forward to reading more of this book and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Writing quality: 2 stars, my criticism on the grammar and stuff can be found below Updating stability: 2 stars, at first the updates were frequent, but in later chapters we got a lot of stop and go Story development: 4 stars, this story is an interesting tale on the MCU and brings a new perspective to factions and characters Character design: 2 1/2 - 3 stars, interesting Orginal character that sadly act irrational to their supposed characteristics World background: 2 stars, well this is the MCU + a bit of comic lore, and not much new was added to it so I can’t give the author too much credit for it, but even in that case I would usually give a better rating, but since some concepts are broken without elaborating on a new background creation and we up until recently didn’t get to see that much of the typical MCU I’ve decided on 2 stars (note to readers, possible readers of this book and the author; I mean no offense and only wish to state my subjective opinion) To be honest, I ignored the word Jumbles you call sentences for the better part of this story, I enjoyed this new concept and take on the marvel universe. Your characters were original, but (I don’t mean this in a disrespectful way, just as an advice) I’ll drop this story because I feel like my IQ and writing/reading abilities are going to disintegrate if I do this to my eyes any longer. And here is my advice: I know this is a fanfic and you may see this as a low priority but for your further work in writing literature (if you intend on continuing it) please re-read your chapters before posting them and go through grammer and sentence structure again. I totally understand when you overlook something or are in a writing spree, but there are just words missing, in the wrong places or random lone letters with no meaning sprinkle between words, that can only be explained due to lack of proof reading. So if you don’t want your fans (counting myself in) loose interest and quit you should take note of what I said. Have a good day I wrote this in a paragraph comment in the book already. I‘m only posting it as a review to give an honest and reflected opinion
overall it's a good novel,just the update were a bit long(〒﹏〒)..... Thanks author for your time and effort put in creating this novel ｡◕‿◕｡
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its a great novel but it`s slowly dying because the chapter are published so slowly. I know its a lot of work but i don't want this fic to disappear
Story has been really good has plenty of potential not to mention MC born in time with Odin even being his brother and having his own realm , being able to have different abilities along with divinity, the declaration of planet called Midgard being under his protection and part of planets he controls or in a way rules over, truly everything have done so far in this book has been quite interesting and intriguing overall has been entertaining especially with Gaia The Goddess of Earth and etc.. becoming wife of MC not just that but the different kinds of weapons looking for weilders to be able to use them made and created by their master is truly something unexpected and unique due to not many other books doing the same can't wait to read more of this book and find out what will happen next look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
awesome novel..............................................love it//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
well ...................................................................................................................................................................................................its honestly too bland
I honestly love the fan-fic the start was kinda rocky but in the current chapters it’s great.
[img=empfehlen] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!I am just writing this to earn points!
it's good that is all I'm gonna say ....................................................................................,...............m......
man no matter how many Times i come back to read this I can barely make it baste 4 chapters before dropping it...such a garbage novel just can't be enjoyed...
I have read this story before and just resumed to read it again. I think Cur's character does not progress very well, he is too much a predictable character knowing everything and seems to achieve almost everything that he works for,which makes the character the illusion of perfection.I wish there is another Isekai reader or character of equal potential that comes to avenge something/someone since he have made a lot of enemies .
[img=empfehlen][img=empfehlen][img=empfehlen] _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Well, the writing quality seems like an MTL but the progress and other things are good with the cheat not being too op but still considered a cheat. Although their cliche it is still a decent read.
trash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trashtrash trash trash trash
Ótima fanfic, adorei o MC, achei muito enteressante ele construir sua própria família e reino, por favo continue com as atualizações.........
TBH, i started reading and just reached the last updated chapter in one sitting. There are some areas that could’ve beed done better, but I can see how the authour keep improving his writing style from the beginning of the story to how it is now, and i’m very impressed. I loved this story and i hope for more chapters ❤️.
after reading almost every marvel fanfic out there... this came with a pleasant surprise to me..... i thank author for giving me few hours of entertainment....................................
Please don't be discouraged, but towards the end, your chapters became extremely brief and uninspired. The first 20 chapters went swimmingly until they abruptly turned sour. To me, it appeared that you had lost interest in this fanfic and were only updating out of obligation.
I love this story but currently it is on a break I think. Based on the lack of chapters. When it does get updated it’s usually the one I save for last to really enjoy it.
Love it want more but stop at 110 it’ a good read tho