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I can't read the text message style writing. jason: how are you today john: I'm doing good that's not writing you lose emersion in the story I think you have a great idea and story here but this just takes away from everything
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awesome............................................i need more chapters author ....................................................................................................
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I do find it quite intriguing how the MC is The Shadow Monarch and is the ruler of shadows not to mention way he built or shaped his empire to be and just how powerful and rich he is with the company that he had Sebastian make for him on Earth but also way he had conquered so many different planets and has plenty of loyal and powerful subordinates also like how they say for "The Emperor" overall I have enjoyed reading this book and do wonder what will happen especially with MC being so old and powerful that some of the other races/species around the galaxy forgot about him until now that is look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book although could do with not so many women for his harem/peerage don't want it to be like most other books/stories that have the MC or OC being in a harem just a suggestion still enjoy reading this book
bro when are you coming back... please post another chapter........ 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ..............
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When I saw the title and description of the story I have to say I was excited to say the lease but unfortunately the author did something that many great authors do they insert a charcter into a universe in a way that makes no sense in that universe Im sure u know that the marvel universe has its own powerful cosmic entities that represent something in the universe from the being above all to lady death it just doesn’t make sense for Monarchs and ruler to be there also with the existence of lady death she can rip away control from ashborn is her domain …… then the last thing that bothers me and cause me to drop this is the recreation of the evil pieces from high school dxd like why man why u need to do something dumb like that there’s no need why will the MC even do that above all that this thing is edgy af don’t get me wrong I like me a little edge but jeez this is beyond me dominate this dominate that 😫 like “daddy chill”🤣
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3.6 stars. Actually, I don't think you really need to throw out the character development and actual plots OUT OF THE WINDOW just because the main character is "OP".
i know you said that you won't be dropping this but please write more I'm dying to know more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This fanfiction is based purely based on collection of women and nothing else. But still it was bearable.Everything went upside down when he added Boa Hancock to the fiction.
Update moooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
To anyone that wants to read a good story, avoid this lol. But to those who just want to turn their brain off and read for fun this is up your alley. Grammar, sentences, and paragraphs needs a lot of work, especially pov writing as well.
Quite interesting story, I'm liking it, here MC is super OP, transmigrated into the body of shadow monarch, I just hope Author won't dropped this story
Very well written and a great amount of variation from the real work. Well, in a way its a good thing, a change from usual fan-fic where MC just follows the usual timeline while acquiring strength. He is just born strong and is still very strong enough to cause instability in a world with just his presence and not an ounce of his power. All are perfect except for his harem collection. It just gets to my nerve, but it tolerable and convincing considering he is the last of his race 'ASHBORN BLACKHEART'
Really well I hope you continue this fic, I am impatiently awaiting the continuation 👌😌 ---‐--------------------------------------------------------
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author, please place the Ancient One in the harem author, please place the Ancient One in the harem author, please place the Ancient One in the harem
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It's nice to read, the character of the mc and his personality suit me perfectly
The concept is good but the writing quality and story development are horrible. You can see the main indicators that this book would be a story only for the author's pleasure is that it went for the romance and harem right away not even giving anything to make us root for the relationship or development between the characters and it seems so forceful too, the mc who is too focused on getting women and is op right away. in my opinion, it had a great concept, but a horrible story
A great fanfic. Love the character (A huge fan of solo leveling) and thankfully you made his personality similar to what i think ashborn would have. Tho, he is a little straight forward, i don’t mind the harem but pls don’t pick them up like pokemons. Probably max 10? would be more than enough. (If possible, save some spot for anime waifu’s after endgame if there’s world travel) I also hope that Mc will not intervene in every problem/fight the avengers have. These are just my personal opinions. 🥰 Keep up the good work.
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Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....
I can't read the text message style writing. jason: how are you today john: I'm doing good that's not writing you lose emersion in the story I think you have a great idea and story here but this just takes away from everything
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awesome............................................i need more chapters author ....................................................................................................
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I do find it quite intriguing how the MC is The Shadow Monarch and is the ruler of shadows not to mention way he built or shaped his empire to be and just how powerful and rich he is with the company that he had Sebastian make for him on Earth but also way he had conquered so many different planets and has plenty of loyal and powerful subordinates also like how they say for "The Emperor" overall I have enjoyed reading this book and do wonder what will happen especially with MC being so old and powerful that some of the other races/species around the galaxy forgot about him until now that is look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book although could do with not so many women for his harem/peerage don't want it to be like most other books/stories that have the MC or OC being in a harem just a suggestion still enjoy reading this book
bro when are you coming back... please post another chapter........ 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ..............
will you continue this book?👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
When I saw the title and description of the story I have to say I was excited to say the lease but unfortunately the author did something that many great authors do they insert a charcter into a universe in a way that makes no sense in that universe Im sure u know that the marvel universe has its own powerful cosmic entities that represent something in the universe from the being above all to lady death it just doesn’t make sense for Monarchs and ruler to be there also with the existence of lady death she can rip away control from ashborn is her domain …… then the last thing that bothers me and cause me to drop this is the recreation of the evil pieces from high school dxd like why man why u need to do something dumb like that there’s no need why will the MC even do that above all that this thing is edgy af don’t get me wrong I like me a little edge but jeez this is beyond me dominate this dominate that 😫 like “daddy chill”🤣
Revelar Spoiler 3.6 stars. Actually, I don't think you really need to throw out the character development and actual plots OUT OF THE WINDOW just because the main character is "OP".
i know you said that you won't be dropping this but please write more I'm dying to know more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This fanfiction is based purely based on collection of women and nothing else. But still it was bearable.Everything went upside down when he added Boa Hancock to the fiction.
Update moooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
To anyone that wants to read a good story, avoid this lol. But to those who just want to turn their brain off and read for fun this is up your alley. Grammar, sentences, and paragraphs needs a lot of work, especially pov writing as well.
Quite interesting story, I'm liking it, here MC is super OP, transmigrated into the body of shadow monarch, I just hope Author won't dropped this story
Very well written and a great amount of variation from the real work. Well, in a way its a good thing, a change from usual fan-fic where MC just follows the usual timeline while acquiring strength. He is just born strong and is still very strong enough to cause instability in a world with just his presence and not an ounce of his power. All are perfect except for his harem collection. It just gets to my nerve, but it tolerable and convincing considering he is the last of his race 'ASHBORN BLACKHEART'
Really well I hope you continue this fic, I am impatiently awaiting the continuation 👌😌 ---‐--------------------------------------------------------
👍👍👍-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Historia simplesmente magnífico espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhosa 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Simplesmente incrivel que historia maravilhosa e interessante e nova você fez um ótimo trabalho uma obra totalmente nova parabéns 👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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author, please place the Ancient One in the harem author, please place the Ancient One in the harem author, please place the Ancient One in the harem
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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It's nice to read, the character of the mc and his personality suit me perfectly
The concept is good but the writing quality and story development are horrible. You can see the main indicators that this book would be a story only for the author's pleasure is that it went for the romance and harem right away not even giving anything to make us root for the relationship or development between the characters and it seems so forceful too, the mc who is too focused on getting women and is op right away. in my opinion, it had a great concept, but a horrible story
A great fanfic. Love the character (A huge fan of solo leveling) and thankfully you made his personality similar to what i think ashborn would have. Tho, he is a little straight forward, i don’t mind the harem but pls don’t pick them up like pokemons. Probably max 10? would be more than enough. (If possible, save some spot for anime waifu’s after endgame if there’s world travel) I also hope that Mc will not intervene in every problem/fight the avengers have. These are just my personal opinions. 🥰 Keep up the good work.
A FF e boa mas, muito misturado, nao e meu gosto, uma pena --------------------------------------------------------__----------------------------------------------
Mc is just interested in collecting women. The idea is good but poorly executed and some stuff seems extremely forced but it is a good ream to kill some time. ........... ....... ....... ..... .... ..... ....