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Awesome, can see clearly that author uses his brain unlike most others in this platform. One of the best, if not the best Marvel ff. People who say mc is pitifully weak and stop reading are missing out, tho even with Fate's power mc can be invincible but that is excusable as he has strong allies. So overall author is one of the best and the ff is great.
Mind-blowing creation. The best Marvel fanfic I've read beside Grandpa Universe, Reborn with Steve Stand (Multiverse), and Marvel: Mr. President.
Muy bueno en la trama pero algo lento en varios arcos o muy cortos[img=Sigh][img=Speechless] [img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night]
The author said in the first 50-100 chap the writing style will somewhat resemble CN novels and you can really see it in some cases. A 12 year old negotiating buying a company…and the power system for the MC is such a turn off for me i tried to read but i just cant..He basically needs to create movies or shows of like lets say Naruto and when he finishes it he can shapeshift into naruto characters or bring the whole naruto world to Marvel.. Its such a bad idea for me
Story would have been better if characters he brought over weren’t under his control and he instead had to use his knowledge of them to become friends and allies.
Cerita yang sangat panjang, menarik dan berbeda dari beberapa cerita marvel & dc yang lain, aku menunggu pembaruan lainnya [img=tampar muka]
Well written, bad powerscaling, mc sometimes is smart sometimes is stupid, the explanation behind his powers was weird, good characters although the arc in 616 was a little bit bad in my opinion. Read until 788 (latest chapter here right now), i recommend author to visit powerscalers wikis and better explanations of powers in his characters (naruto verse should have been basically useless from the wall onwards, same with the devil fruits, also with goku and his weird power scaling that mc hypes with being his secret weapon but right now is only planet buster level) that and also more stability in the updates.
wonderful novel. there are some mistakes in some chapters but it happens beside it it is a perfect and it can even become a comic . i have suggestion for you why don't you try and make it like manga or something it will be very popular
Not really worth the read. I don’t like that he gives abilities and all the items he gets to everyone, the MC is very dumb so it irritates me.
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This is horrible because the romance is useless and it ruins the hole think I mean it is terrible really really bad
I'm writing a bad review because he never finished the story! I bought the Patreon to see the end, and it never finished! It's been months, and he moved on to his other stories with no conclusion to this one. At least tell your readers you're done with it. The story was a 4/5 before that.
Revelar Spoiler
I must say that I loved your story, I give it a 100 out of 100 but I wanted to ask you something, I don't know if you will read this but I could upload your story to my Youtube channel and of course I will give you the credits because it is your story and I will say follow you can I upload it or not? the story I want to upload is Bringing the elements of the game into the real world.
an excellent work. The only weak point is the fight scenes that are not very detailed and end quickly. Why complain that MC is weak? That's a lie because he quickly becomes OP using his own body
I just read till chapter 60 so I may don't know anything sin this fanfic till now have more than 700 chapter so maybe in the future chapter the problem I have with them get solved. The problem I have with It MC doesn't have any power or development in character I don't expect him defeat everyone and dominate the world but there is no power for MC and he doesn't fight a lot I saw at first MC explaining a villain to the heroes and that what he does he just explain well at least till the 60 chapter I had read and it wasn't explained clearly that he going just go and bring Goku (I'm giving an example) tell him defeat thanos and this is just me maybe you like it maybe not you can try
I kinda got bored after reading to chapter 400+, it's not a bad novel in fact its really good and a cool idea, it's just you spent more time in bring people and powers into the world when I think you should have focused more on the objects and items, but I love it, read it since you started but I'll try and continue on, it's already been like a year or two since I stopped, so I'll try, but I definitely recommend. (But your grammar and vocabulary started to sink somewhere around chapter 300+, so I say good job with continuing even after so long.)
Is saitama in this story or his power? because im in chapter 276 and there's still no saitama. I was expecting saitama here because in the cover photo of this story. Still good story though
How about making a meta essence story? .......................................................................................................................,........
Just showing the middle finger to the crises in the novel and putting Rick in Rick and Morthy would almost instantly end the crises and problems in the multiverse.
Simplemente una obra maestra ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ Me encanta este fanfic, no puedo parar de ver capitulos, 10/10 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
Please write all the chapters where Lucifer Morningstar from the series is mentioned or talked about.I really liked the story, thanks in advance for your help
I can call John the emperor of mankind (Marvel version) because he taught many people how to do this and that, whose knowledge comes from a different multiverse.
where is the film being filmed? where are the original actors?. ....................... ........................................... ..............
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
somewhere around chapter 300, the system updates is the last time he gets free powers and he did not get any power besides alien x after that till last 600 chapters it get boring after as he was not powering up just only summons and technology or ships. it was so frustrating he was not getting any more power and he been only using alien x, that he can't even use less than 2-5mins. it was so slow I'm dropping this it was good but he was not getting stronger while op enemies are appearing one after another without him getting more powerful and he can't even fight the new enemies alone as they were scaling in power as new came out while he is stuck with alien x and tech and his alien x are weak compare to like multiversal enemy he was facing.
Good Book I love it 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Deserve the stars✨ I've been reading up to 180+ (plus more on his patr**n) and it's entertaining. Grammar is not a problem, story development is awesome. It's a wish kind of story but the author put them well. Character design and world background is on point with my understanding as a casual yet marvel's movie enthusiast. Update stability is straight compliment and magnificent. Thumbs up for your efforts to maintain the quality vs quantity. You fellow readers should give this a try. 10 Chaps should be enough, but I warn you it wouldn't.
Awesome, can see clearly that author uses his brain unlike most others in this platform. One of the best, if not the best Marvel ff. People who say mc is pitifully weak and stop reading are missing out, tho even with Fate's power mc can be invincible but that is excusable as he has strong allies. So overall author is one of the best and the ff is great.
Mind-blowing creation. The best Marvel fanfic I've read beside Grandpa Universe, Reborn with Steve Stand (Multiverse), and Marvel: Mr. President.
Muy bueno en la trama pero algo lento en varios arcos o muy cortos[img=Sigh][img=Speechless] [img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night][img=Good night]
The author said in the first 50-100 chap the writing style will somewhat resemble CN novels and you can really see it in some cases. A 12 year old negotiating buying a company…and the power system for the MC is such a turn off for me i tried to read but i just cant..He basically needs to create movies or shows of like lets say Naruto and when he finishes it he can shapeshift into naruto characters or bring the whole naruto world to Marvel.. Its such a bad idea for me
Story would have been better if characters he brought over weren’t under his control and he instead had to use his knowledge of them to become friends and allies.
Cerita yang sangat panjang, menarik dan berbeda dari beberapa cerita marvel & dc yang lain, aku menunggu pembaruan lainnya [img=tampar muka]
Well written, bad powerscaling, mc sometimes is smart sometimes is stupid, the explanation behind his powers was weird, good characters although the arc in 616 was a little bit bad in my opinion. Read until 788 (latest chapter here right now), i recommend author to visit powerscalers wikis and better explanations of powers in his characters (naruto verse should have been basically useless from the wall onwards, same with the devil fruits, also with goku and his weird power scaling that mc hypes with being his secret weapon but right now is only planet buster level) that and also more stability in the updates.
wonderful novel. there are some mistakes in some chapters but it happens beside it it is a perfect and it can even become a comic . i have suggestion for you why don't you try and make it like manga or something it will be very popular
Not really worth the read. I don’t like that he gives abilities and all the items he gets to everyone, the MC is very dumb so it irritates me.
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This is horrible because the romance is useless and it ruins the hole think I mean it is terrible really really bad
I'm writing a bad review because he never finished the story! I bought the Patreon to see the end, and it never finished! It's been months, and he moved on to his other stories with no conclusion to this one. At least tell your readers you're done with it. The story was a 4/5 before that.
Revelar Spoiler I must say that I loved your story, I give it a 100 out of 100 but I wanted to ask you something, I don't know if you will read this but I could upload your story to my Youtube channel and of course I will give you the credits because it is your story and I will say follow you can I upload it or not? the story I want to upload is Bringing the elements of the game into the real world.
an excellent work. The only weak point is the fight scenes that are not very detailed and end quickly. Why complain that MC is weak? That's a lie because he quickly becomes OP using his own body
I just read till chapter 60 so I may don't know anything sin this fanfic till now have more than 700 chapter so maybe in the future chapter the problem I have with them get solved. The problem I have with It MC doesn't have any power or development in character I don't expect him defeat everyone and dominate the world but there is no power for MC and he doesn't fight a lot I saw at first MC explaining a villain to the heroes and that what he does he just explain well at least till the 60 chapter I had read and it wasn't explained clearly that he going just go and bring Goku (I'm giving an example) tell him defeat thanos and this is just me maybe you like it maybe not you can try
I kinda got bored after reading to chapter 400+, it's not a bad novel in fact its really good and a cool idea, it's just you spent more time in bring people and powers into the world when I think you should have focused more on the objects and items, but I love it, read it since you started but I'll try and continue on, it's already been like a year or two since I stopped, so I'll try, but I definitely recommend. (But your grammar and vocabulary started to sink somewhere around chapter 300+, so I say good job with continuing even after so long.)
Is saitama in this story or his power? because im in chapter 276 and there's still no saitama. I was expecting saitama here because in the cover photo of this story. Still good story though
How about making a meta essence story? .......................................................................................................................,........
Just showing the middle finger to the crises in the novel and putting Rick in Rick and Morthy would almost instantly end the crises and problems in the multiverse.
Simplemente una obra maestra ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ Me encanta este fanfic, no puedo parar de ver capitulos, 10/10 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
Please write all the chapters where Lucifer Morningstar from the series is mentioned or talked about.I really liked the story, thanks in advance for your help
I can call John the emperor of mankind (Marvel version) because he taught many people how to do this and that, whose knowledge comes from a different multiverse.
where is the film being filmed? where are the original actors?. ....................... ........................................... ..............
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
somewhere around chapter 300, the system updates is the last time he gets free powers and he did not get any power besides alien x after that till last 600 chapters it get boring after as he was not powering up just only summons and technology or ships. it was so frustrating he was not getting any more power and he been only using alien x, that he can't even use less than 2-5mins. it was so slow I'm dropping this it was good but he was not getting stronger while op enemies are appearing one after another without him getting more powerful and he can't even fight the new enemies alone as they were scaling in power as new came out while he is stuck with alien x and tech and his alien x are weak compare to like multiversal enemy he was facing.
Good Book I love it 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
Deserve the stars✨ I've been reading up to 180+ (plus more on his patr**n) and it's entertaining. Grammar is not a problem, story development is awesome. It's a wish kind of story but the author put them well. Character design and world background is on point with my understanding as a casual yet marvel's movie enthusiast. Update stability is straight compliment and magnificent. Thumbs up for your efforts to maintain the quality vs quantity. You fellow readers should give this a try. 10 Chaps should be enough, but I warn you it wouldn't.