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Attention spoil !! . . . . This commentary is written for people who stop right after reading the first chapter and the list of cheaters and yelling that this is unacceptable and that one of the abilities would be enough. I am writing this review to explain why from my point of view, although the number of cheats is numerous, their power consumption is still acceptable. So let's come back to the number of cheaters: (1) -> the potential X5 (2) -> purified blood line (Uzumaki) (3) -> Haki armament (4) -> Quirk: creation I would like to remind you that we are sticking to an MC which in the original version only has the kama and its own chakra and the Jogan in the official version. where Naruto has a monstrous chakra coupled with the help of Kurama / Hagoromo / Reincarnation of Ashura I think the author wanted to give through cheaters (1) and (2) the means to strengthen the MC and allow him to face the danger he will have to face without giving him the strength of naruto from chapter 1. the potential of the X5 is acceptable and allows him to quickly learn a lot of jutsu. I think given how fast the MC progresses, he will have a Jonin or Kage level when he has to face the first attack and be able to perform actions from the first fight and not just show presence as was the case in the anime. concerning the purified Uzumaki line. it offers 4 abilities (healing / large amount of chakra / Third Eye of Kagura / sealing chain). the MC figured out how to increase his chakra amount on his own in his youth, so I don't think this skill offers a particular cheat. regarding the capabilities of sensor ninja, I will response that to be able to effectively strike the Otsutsuki with ninjutsu, learning senjutsu is necessary and the senjutsu offers the ninja sensor ability. The chains and blood heal are minor aids, it remains acceptable. concerning the Busoshoku no Haki this one offers 3 abilities, physical reinforcement, weapon reinforcement and emission (RYUO) For the physical strengthening part and reinforcement of weapons, the MC was able to obtain the same result by injecting doton chakra into his body or into his weapon to be reinforced. concerning the RYUO, the technique resembles the combat technique of combat of the hyuga clan (Jûken) as well as the taijutus of the toads. Much like the Juken which works by injecting chakra into the opponent's body, the RYUO technique concentrates its power in the emission of haki into the opponent's body. Whell, the "Quirk: Creation" is not a combat oriented quirk but rather a support type quirk, its power lies in its versatility, non-combat use is much more suited to harness the full potential of this ability. this is why i think that although the number of cheats remains numerous, in the world of naruto these cheats are acceptable.
What a great time to read a fanmade story. I like the story pls continue work on this by adding new plots and good lines so it becomes more interesting to read.
Dude for sure you need continue this story! It's fun to read. Btw I'm curious about Mitsuki.. he kinda of jokes here. And why to write this i need more than 140 character?? Sigh... Hope I get new chapter... Have a good day sir!
Yes yes, please continue And I really liked the story and I hope you continue.....................................................................................................................................................................................
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I really enjoy reading this book I like his character and how his development has been so far Character is OP and progresses through life easily without noting much failure My favourite part though is his humbleness and how much he cares for his family but he’s still pretty cheeky
No volvió subir capitulo lastima sería muy capitulo sigue así pero para se ser que va dejar abandonada la historia lastima era muy buena la historia pero quedó abandonada
You have to turn off your brain to read this. MC come up with new toys and author dont give logical reason behind them but expect us to except it as is. Like MC make a super AI in naruto world without any programming knowledge (creation quirk doesnt work that way), He stole one tail worth of chakra from Kurama without anyone knowing (yeah ryt). He make his own pocket dimention using stroage scroll technique (🙄), He learn lightning cloak using nauture transformation (cloud's top secret?) Now he's talking about getting lighten boudler jutsu (like its so easy 🤮)
Espero que o autor volte a postar mesmo que isso seja quase impossível 😭 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Author-san this fanfic is awesome and interesting but I wish you could continue updating.
Author dropped ? at least make another naruto fan fic if u don't gonna continue this one because unlike other naruto fan fics in web novels u doing great fan fics
when is the update ????????????????? is it droppppppppppppppp?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I like the story and characters but unfortunately there ain't new chapters coming, it's sad but that's how it is. I hope there will be more chapters soon. Hope to read them.
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Its a very good story just need to be updated more. I will bring up the stars if he actually updates it because this has great potential……….
why is the update taking so long, it's been more than 1 month not updating. for a very good story, I ask the author to update the chapter often for the future
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hey what happened with ur other ff..........................................................................................................
مرحبا لقد كنت سعيدة حقا بإيجاد هذا المعجب ... وأريد أن أقول أنه لم يخيب ظني!! ... يعجبني التفاعل بين الشخصيات .... و لكن الغش الخاص بالبطل كثير جدا !!!! خصوصا الذكاء الاصطناعي و قدرة الانشاء ... على أي حال أنه معجب رائع أتمنى ألا تتوقف عن الكتابة
Yo, I like your story keep it up, it's one of the best boruto fanfiction out there.........................................................................waiting for the next chapter
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the reason why there are so few Borutard fics is simple... it sucks. it's one of those desperate money grabs disguised as a sequel. actual fans of naruto look at Boringto like it was "the land before time 43; Cera and the proctologist.
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Is this dropped or not? ..................................................................................................................................................
I read up to the current chapter: 19. And I can say that I loved this work, for these reasons: - I like the fact that the MC is more childish at this age because it makes him more human, different from others who are cold and calculating. - I also loved the fact that he is not a protagonist who acts as a teacher and nanny for his friends. - I loved how the interactions, it's so good! Well, the story is very very promising, I'll keep reading! The only part that made me sad was that he shows his AI to everyone, something I don't agree with, I think it should be kept hidden, and with that comes the hole in the story where nobody talks too much about this amazing creation. ATTENTION: I strongly recommend you give it a try, I saw some negative comments and I was disappointed with them, some believe that cheats are bad, but complain when the protagonists are weak, all hypocrites! In the shinobi world the cheats he got are good, but the author just has to hold it to not cross the limits as he did with the creation of the AI, after that I think it's a great work
Revelar Spoiler Attention spoil !! . . . . This commentary is written for people who stop right after reading the first chapter and the list of cheaters and yelling that this is unacceptable and that one of the abilities would be enough. I am writing this review to explain why from my point of view, although the number of cheats is numerous, their power consumption is still acceptable. So let's come back to the number of cheaters: (1) -> the potential X5 (2) -> purified blood line (Uzumaki) (3) -> Haki armament (4) -> Quirk: creation I would like to remind you that we are sticking to an MC which in the original version only has the kama and its own chakra and the Jogan in the official version. where Naruto has a monstrous chakra coupled with the help of Kurama / Hagoromo / Reincarnation of Ashura I think the author wanted to give through cheaters (1) and (2) the means to strengthen the MC and allow him to face the danger he will have to face without giving him the strength of naruto from chapter 1. the potential of the X5 is acceptable and allows him to quickly learn a lot of jutsu. I think given how fast the MC progresses, he will have a Jonin or Kage level when he has to face the first attack and be able to perform actions from the first fight and not just show presence as was the case in the anime. concerning the purified Uzumaki line. it offers 4 abilities (healing / large amount of chakra / Third Eye of Kagura / sealing chain). the MC figured out how to increase his chakra amount on his own in his youth, so I don't think this skill offers a particular cheat. regarding the capabilities of sensor ninja, I will response that to be able to effectively strike the Otsutsuki with ninjutsu, learning senjutsu is necessary and the senjutsu offers the ninja sensor ability. The chains and blood heal are minor aids, it remains acceptable. concerning the Busoshoku no Haki this one offers 3 abilities, physical reinforcement, weapon reinforcement and emission (RYUO) For the physical strengthening part and reinforcement of weapons, the MC was able to obtain the same result by injecting doton chakra into his body or into his weapon to be reinforced. concerning the RYUO, the technique resembles the combat technique of combat of the hyuga clan (Jûken) as well as the taijutus of the toads. Much like the Juken which works by injecting chakra into the opponent's body, the RYUO technique concentrates its power in the emission of haki into the opponent's body. Whell, the "Quirk: Creation" is not a combat oriented quirk but rather a support type quirk, its power lies in its versatility, non-combat use is much more suited to harness the full potential of this ability. this is why i think that although the number of cheats remains numerous, in the world of naruto these cheats are acceptable.
What a great time to read a fanmade story. I like the story pls continue work on this by adding new plots and good lines so it becomes more interesting to read.
Dude for sure you need continue this story! It's fun to read. Btw I'm curious about Mitsuki.. he kinda of jokes here. And why to write this i need more than 140 character?? Sigh... Hope I get new chapter... Have a good day sir!
Yes yes, please continue And I really liked the story and I hope you continue.....................................................................................................................................................................................
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I really enjoy reading this book I like his character and how his development has been so far Character is OP and progresses through life easily without noting much failure My favourite part though is his humbleness and how much he cares for his family but he’s still pretty cheeky
No volvió subir capitulo lastima sería muy capitulo sigue así pero para se ser que va dejar abandonada la historia lastima era muy buena la historia pero quedó abandonada
You have to turn off your brain to read this. MC come up with new toys and author dont give logical reason behind them but expect us to except it as is. Like MC make a super AI in naruto world without any programming knowledge (creation quirk doesnt work that way), He stole one tail worth of chakra from Kurama without anyone knowing (yeah ryt). He make his own pocket dimention using stroage scroll technique (🙄), He learn lightning cloak using nauture transformation (cloud's top secret?) Now he's talking about getting lighten boudler jutsu (like its so easy 🤮)
Espero que o autor volte a postar mesmo que isso seja quase impossível 😭 ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Author-san this fanfic is awesome and interesting but I wish you could continue updating.
Author dropped ? at least make another naruto fan fic if u don't gonna continue this one because unlike other naruto fan fics in web novels u doing great fan fics
when is the update ????????????????? is it droppppppppppppppp?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I like the story and characters but unfortunately there ain't new chapters coming, it's sad but that's how it is. I hope there will be more chapters soon. Hope to read them.
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(mode musical) Down..., Down, this fall-the fic... Is now, where actualization the fic?... Why the stop writing the fic now? All today step the fic right now WHE SHOP THE MONEY IS MY NOW
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Its a very good story just need to be updated more. I will bring up the stars if he actually updates it because this has great potential……….
why is the update taking so long, it's been more than 1 month not updating. for a very good story, I ask the author to update the chapter often for the future
Can mitsuki and Boruto end up together?plss[img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
hey what happened with ur other ff..........................................................................................................
مرحبا لقد كنت سعيدة حقا بإيجاد هذا المعجب ... وأريد أن أقول أنه لم يخيب ظني!! ... يعجبني التفاعل بين الشخصيات .... و لكن الغش الخاص بالبطل كثير جدا !!!! خصوصا الذكاء الاصطناعي و قدرة الانشاء ... على أي حال أنه معجب رائع أتمنى ألا تتوقف عن الكتابة
Yo, I like your story keep it up, it's one of the best boruto fanfiction out there.........................................................................waiting for the next chapter
Revelar Spoiler the reason why there are so few Borutard fics is simple... it sucks. it's one of those desperate money grabs disguised as a sequel. actual fans of naruto look at Boringto like it was "the land before time 43; Cera and the proctologist.
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I read up to the current chapter: 19. And I can say that I loved this work, for these reasons: - I like the fact that the MC is more childish at this age because it makes him more human, different from others who are cold and calculating. - I also loved the fact that he is not a protagonist who acts as a teacher and nanny for his friends. - I loved how the interactions, it's so good! Well, the story is very very promising, I'll keep reading! The only part that made me sad was that he shows his AI to everyone, something I don't agree with, I think it should be kept hidden, and with that comes the hole in the story where nobody talks too much about this amazing creation. ATTENTION: I strongly recommend you give it a try, I saw some negative comments and I was disappointed with them, some believe that cheats are bad, but complain when the protagonists are weak, all hypocrites! In the shinobi world the cheats he got are good, but the author just has to hold it to not cross the limits as he did with the creation of the AI, after that I think it's a great work
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