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Esta novela es demasiado mala, la escritura es rigida y tensa, las cosas suceden demasiado rapido, el comportamiento de los personajes es muy superficial, tampoco ayuda que este en ingles la novela Supongo que sear una traduccion de una pesima novela
It was an amazing novel just so sad to see the ending be rushed like that especially because this novel had the potential for several hundred chapters if not thousand. so many things happen all at once and there were several parts that I really wanted to see but were just skipped past. overall its a great novel just with a very upsetting and rushed ending
As usual Author-sama wrote another great book!! It starts off with one love interest but don't worry Harem Lovers it changes! We have Fox Wives! Elves! And all sorts of new races that aren't common in Harems! So go now new readers! Read this Story!
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We really need more JP names/Originals on here. I really like the name 'Minato'. Glad to see more and more people using Chinese names as well. Just hope JP doesn't die out either.
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The author was doing great with the story all through the book. The book had everything going for it. Then you just ruin it by the last few chapters. He literally used the last four chapters to finish the book at light speed it left so many holes in the plot.
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muy buena la historia, 100% recomendado para todos los que no le importan las novelas +18 es bastante interesante, y no se que mas escribir pero fin
To start, the other work of Sixth which I read was "I Like them big, do you?". That story was the sort of benchmark I used going into this one. From my standpoint, it looks like you went for something much more casual this time with "My Wife's sisters". and it worked. It was a light-hearted, fast paced story with a little added depth. Overall, it was a good story. Now for the negative. The ending, obviously. To give author credit, with how light hearted and somewhat lacking in depth this one was, the immensely lazy ending didn't leave a bad taste in my mouth; in fact, I was expecting it, with the story only 120 odd chapters... extremely short. As opposed to "I Like Them Big", where you put a lot of work into the characters, setting, and plot; in which case it made the rushed ending in that one SO much more terrible. In my humble opinion; you have what it takes to write a fantastic novel, from cover to cover. Take the depth, and lead and side character development of "I like them Big" (and the awesome MC), the light hearted Romance and conflict of "My Wife's Sisters", mash em together and you have a fantastic recipe for a harem novel. Obviously, plan to write a MINIMUM of 500 chapters (of course, you can always write much higher word count per chapter instead which I STRONGLY recommend), in order to give yourself plenty of room to fully flesh out the story and characters and give a PROPER resolution to the story. In my experience, a conclusion of the average novel will be a few chapters long. Again, you have what it takes man, and I really hope to see you put a new work out and put your skills and motivation to the test. Write the perfect harem story! haha
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so I have to say I very much love this story characters were well done they had good relationships good background story are everything about it was just very well done and honestly it would be all five stars on everything except for and the author explains that the end the reason for it but I couldn't give five stars on everything because of the ending I don't want to give anything to huge way except that it was rushed and for such a great story that really was still in the starting stages it's very sad to see its potential end so soon I will continue watching for other stories by this author and I will be going back to read some of the other ones that he is finished or she I honestly don't know but in any case great story that I'm sorry to see and very sorry to see it end that goes about to spend a lot of money to give where they gold stars are gold tickets or yeah golden tickets I guess we'll have to save that for something else I'm still tempted to give it but with that ending it's hard to justify spending money that I don't necessarily have goodbye Minden goodbye Yuna goodbye Bei goodbye to the angels the elves the succubi goblins Dwarfs lizard girls and all the others we didn't get to meet and I'm sure there's several that I'm forgetting you will be missed
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the overall story was good but the plot armour was as thick as can be. the ending of the story is just far too rushed leaving one unsatisfied. however up until the point where the rush began the story was enjoyable.
Buen capitulo el 123 bueno el mundo medio ahora solo quiero ver follando ah ese ángel hasta el contecontenido de su corazón jajajaja buenos capítuloscapítulos auto
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Muy buena novela la drama y todo es bueno el harem yo también quiero uso así 😃😃 bueno que más digo sólo espero seguir hasta el final como la otra novela yandere fue bueno
Really good story, keep it up author. Can’t wait for more chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'd like to atmosphere the MC gives off Though it is hard to understand what the author is trying to say all the words are gibberish sometimes Overall a good story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Obrigado pelo capítulo, muito interessante para um começou com histórias, Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte 😁😁😁😁😁👌
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Interessante mas extremamente difícil de ler e continuar são .[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Esta novela es demasiado mala, la escritura es rigida y tensa, las cosas suceden demasiado rapido, el comportamiento de los personajes es muy superficial, tampoco ayuda que este en ingles la novela Supongo que sear una traduccion de una pesima novela
It was an amazing novel just so sad to see the ending be rushed like that especially because this novel had the potential for several hundred chapters if not thousand. so many things happen all at once and there were several parts that I really wanted to see but were just skipped past. overall its a great novel just with a very upsetting and rushed ending
As usual Author-sama wrote another great book!! It starts off with one love interest but don't worry Harem Lovers it changes! We have Fox Wives! Elves! And all sorts of new races that aren't common in Harems! So go now new readers! Read this Story!
Revelar Spoiler We really need more JP names/Originals on here. I really like the name 'Minato'. Glad to see more and more people using Chinese names as well. Just hope JP doesn't die out either.
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The author was doing great with the story all through the book. The book had everything going for it. Then you just ruin it by the last few chapters. He literally used the last four chapters to finish the book at light speed it left so many holes in the plot.
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muy buena la historia, 100% recomendado para todos los que no le importan las novelas +18 es bastante interesante, y no se que mas escribir pero fin
To start, the other work of Sixth which I read was "I Like them big, do you?". That story was the sort of benchmark I used going into this one. From my standpoint, it looks like you went for something much more casual this time with "My Wife's sisters". and it worked. It was a light-hearted, fast paced story with a little added depth. Overall, it was a good story. Now for the negative. The ending, obviously. To give author credit, with how light hearted and somewhat lacking in depth this one was, the immensely lazy ending didn't leave a bad taste in my mouth; in fact, I was expecting it, with the story only 120 odd chapters... extremely short. As opposed to "I Like Them Big", where you put a lot of work into the characters, setting, and plot; in which case it made the rushed ending in that one SO much more terrible. In my humble opinion; you have what it takes to write a fantastic novel, from cover to cover. Take the depth, and lead and side character development of "I like them Big" (and the awesome MC), the light hearted Romance and conflict of "My Wife's Sisters", mash em together and you have a fantastic recipe for a harem novel. Obviously, plan to write a MINIMUM of 500 chapters (of course, you can always write much higher word count per chapter instead which I STRONGLY recommend), in order to give yourself plenty of room to fully flesh out the story and characters and give a PROPER resolution to the story. In my experience, a conclusion of the average novel will be a few chapters long. Again, you have what it takes man, and I really hope to see you put a new work out and put your skills and motivation to the test. Write the perfect harem story! haha
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so I have to say I very much love this story characters were well done they had good relationships good background story are everything about it was just very well done and honestly it would be all five stars on everything except for and the author explains that the end the reason for it but I couldn't give five stars on everything because of the ending I don't want to give anything to huge way except that it was rushed and for such a great story that really was still in the starting stages it's very sad to see its potential end so soon I will continue watching for other stories by this author and I will be going back to read some of the other ones that he is finished or she I honestly don't know but in any case great story that I'm sorry to see and very sorry to see it end that goes about to spend a lot of money to give where they gold stars are gold tickets or yeah golden tickets I guess we'll have to save that for something else I'm still tempted to give it but with that ending it's hard to justify spending money that I don't necessarily have goodbye Minden goodbye Yuna goodbye Bei goodbye to the angels the elves the succubi goblins Dwarfs lizard girls and all the others we didn't get to meet and I'm sure there's several that I'm forgetting you will be missed
Revelar Spoiler the overall story was good but the plot armour was as thick as can be. the ending of the story is just far too rushed leaving one unsatisfied. however up until the point where the rush began the story was enjoyable.
Buen capitulo el 123 bueno el mundo medio ahora solo quiero ver follando ah ese ángel hasta el contecontenido de su corazón jajajaja buenos capítuloscapítulos auto
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Muy buena novela la drama y todo es bueno el harem yo también quiero uso así 😃😃 bueno que más digo sólo espero seguir hasta el final como la otra novela yandere fue bueno
Really good story, keep it up author. Can’t wait for more chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'd like to atmosphere the MC gives off Though it is hard to understand what the author is trying to say all the words are gibberish sometimes Overall a good story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Obrigado pelo capítulo, muito interessante para um começou com histórias, Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte Boa sorte 😁😁😁😁😁👌
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2 chapters in and I am already having a Aneurysm from reading this