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Excellent writings in the matches but everything else it’s rubbish! Stretching but too far by saying everything else because there is NO everything else. It’s basically all about the matches mc is playing nothing else, we don’t get to see anything outside the pitch, i don’t even know where the dude lives
has great potential and background but it's dragging very slowly... It explain every match under tiltle of team name for average of three chapters.It only covered over two regulatr epl season with over 150 chapter...so not much content and most is junk in my pov
It's good but no it's not the best....It doesn't focus on mc too much...Instead it focuses too much on games of other players...And moreover kazuki doesn't shine much,he doesn't give the aura of mc,not score often only assists most time ...If it's a level up novel,MC should grow but it's not happening here..The others players are too good but then mc is too mediocre...So it becomes vexing
Came read this because I thought it would be like greatest of all time but I was disappointed he is mediocre like he has no special skill to him he gets ball stolen from can’ score like the list goes on
Revelar Spoiler
: i dont know u change everything from real record that make confused, the story should be enjoyable but the change of all character, world building make me confused. Did author expect us as reader to know the world author build without such explanation if author change almost everything about the football story goes? Like creating new people. How we can knew about their dominant skill to follow up the story. Really everything should be fine if author just take the real person or just make a explanation/description if author want make every player are new. I hope author try to research more about football then add that to the story. It just like random people wrote about football, not some football enthusiast wrote it
Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all 😕..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..
would have rated it higher but author misspells names alot from Ferguson to Bale even Peter cech. though the storyline is ok compared to others
first sports novel ...............................................................................................................................................
Just thought of another advantage for klopp if he goes to barcelona if the backroom starts becoming a bigger headache for both of them and kazuki learns to love the club, there is potential for kazuki's family if they have the money to try purchase the club and remove the rift completely. Unlikely to happen but just a thought.
Love the story, keep it up...........................................................................................................................................
I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................ I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................
This was a fun read for a while. The story is mostly focused on matches which I'd rather not be reading. The MC is kinda sucky outside football as if he suddenly changes his personality, the relationship between the MC and the personal assistant was annoying and too fast. This was good during fhd first 50 chapters, I'll keep reading and I'll see if this review stays.
i havnt read anything yet but the moment i saw Leicester im about to read btw huge Leicester fan . lets hope this is a good novel ............... .
Since this dream training, can Kazuki daydream while dreaming and training in the future? **************************************************
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why has Kazuki become so bad at forgetting goals in recent chapters? And only assists gives! I'm reading about Kazuki, not other players! Kazuki needs to be the best and not the average player!!!!!
good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers
I recommend the novel, hopefully he get to finish it as am tired of reading uncompleted sport novels. Kudos Author. More ideas to your brain.
Hi! I’ve just started reading this story and I enjoy the premise and the idea sounds promising. I just wanna know, does the grammar improve? Hope someone answer my question
currently in chap 18 so far the story is good. it has a lot of potential. I like like the fast pace and no drama so far. Pretty 👍. ...........
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—-—— Masterpieeceeeeee 🔥🔥🔥🔥———- ..........................................…...............................................................
The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
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A bit of an updated review from me on this novel, if you are into football or soccer (For Americans) this is absolutely is the book for you. Each chapter is always interesting, although it is a bit fast pace the MC can still lose as football is a sport where anything can happen. The stability of this update is alright, you don't get a chapter every day but once you do, you will get at least 3 chapters or more a day. Considering this is translated from Indonesian from the author itself is really impressive, as the grammar is actually not that bad. The world background is also just like our world, but with OC's, for example, the character of Matheo is actually Messi in real life, but instead, he plays for Juventus, and then with Quaresma who is supposed to be Cristiano Ronaldo, and he plays for Real Madrid. There is romance in this, but it is a slow romance. Then for character designs, there aren't really any specifics on how the character really looks, but that just allows me to use my imagination of what our MC looks like. Then for story development, it really shows the football world as a whole and it dives into things such as transfer and etc. Other than that, this is a gem of a novel, and I think people should review this a bit more.
Revelar Spoiler
Love the book. As long you keep releasing new chapter steadily on daily basis or like 5 chapter a week or more I will keep voting and supporting you.[img=update][img=update]
I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.
it's great, but the grammar is bad. It shows how football is not an individual player based sport but a team sport unlike other fanfics.
Excellent writings in the matches but everything else it’s rubbish! Stretching but too far by saying everything else because there is NO everything else. It’s basically all about the matches mc is playing nothing else, we don’t get to see anything outside the pitch, i don’t even know where the dude lives
has great potential and background but it's dragging very slowly... It explain every match under tiltle of team name for average of three chapters.It only covered over two regulatr epl season with over 150 chapter...so not much content and most is junk in my pov
It's good but no it's not the best....It doesn't focus on mc too much...Instead it focuses too much on games of other players...And moreover kazuki doesn't shine much,he doesn't give the aura of mc,not score often only assists most time ...If it's a level up novel,MC should grow but it's not happening here..The others players are too good but then mc is too mediocre...So it becomes vexing
Came read this because I thought it would be like greatest of all time but I was disappointed he is mediocre like he has no special skill to him he gets ball stolen from can’ score like the list goes on
Revelar Spoiler : i dont know u change everything from real record that make confused, the story should be enjoyable but the change of all character, world building make me confused. Did author expect us as reader to know the world author build without such explanation if author change almost everything about the football story goes? Like creating new people. How we can knew about their dominant skill to follow up the story. Really everything should be fine if author just take the real person or just make a explanation/description if author want make every player are new. I hope author try to research more about football then add that to the story. It just like random people wrote about football, not some football enthusiast wrote it
Its not bad.... I kept reading on to know if the mc will be the main but nop... u don't focus in mc at all 😕..sorry my english is bad I hope u can understand this !!!!! I request the author to look read The greatest of all time...I swear it's the best novel..
would have rated it higher but author misspells names alot from Ferguson to Bale even Peter cech. though the storyline is ok compared to others
first sports novel ...............................................................................................................................................
Just thought of another advantage for klopp if he goes to barcelona if the backroom starts becoming a bigger headache for both of them and kazuki learns to love the club, there is potential for kazuki's family if they have the money to try purchase the club and remove the rift completely. Unlikely to happen but just a thought.
Love the story, keep it up...........................................................................................................................................
I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................ I like your novel, keep the good work man!!!! just didn't like your naming..... Good sport novel............................
This was a fun read for a while. The story is mostly focused on matches which I'd rather not be reading. The MC is kinda sucky outside football as if he suddenly changes his personality, the relationship between the MC and the personal assistant was annoying and too fast. This was good during fhd first 50 chapters, I'll keep reading and I'll see if this review stays.
i havnt read anything yet but the moment i saw Leicester im about to read btw huge Leicester fan . lets hope this is a good novel ............... .
Since this dream training, can Kazuki daydream while dreaming and training in the future? **************************************************
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Why has Kazuki become so bad at forgetting goals in recent chapters? And only assists gives! I'm reading about Kazuki, not other players! Kazuki needs to be the best and not the average player!!!!!
good novels. get us excited about football. however, the novel is too focused on the match. come on. it's about Mc who is a player. also a human. can't the author, write a few chapters about Mc. about agents, sponsorship contracts, friends outside the club, social life. unlucky. So far the chapter on Mc's social life has only revolved around. 1. Family in Japan. about 2-5 chapters..? 2. Holiday Mc with an assistant which is not explained at all. come on man. give a little stress reliever for Mc and readers
I recommend the novel, hopefully he get to finish it as am tired of reading uncompleted sport novels. Kudos Author. More ideas to your brain.
Hi! I’ve just started reading this story and I enjoy the premise and the idea sounds promising. I just wanna know, does the grammar improve? Hope someone answer my question
currently in chap 18 so far the story is good. it has a lot of potential. I like like the fast pace and no drama so far. Pretty 👍. ...........
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜👍💜
—-—— Masterpieeceeeeee 🔥🔥🔥🔥———- ..........................................…...............................................................
The story is quite good. The grammar of course could be better,but still,it's ok. Though,I would have preferred you you used real players, and not made up ones. Overall,it's nice.
Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![ Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Good job!!!!!![img=recommend]nice!!!!! Goodjob!!!!!![
A bit of an updated review from me on this novel, if you are into football or soccer (For Americans) this is absolutely is the book for you. Each chapter is always interesting, although it is a bit fast pace the MC can still lose as football is a sport where anything can happen. The stability of this update is alright, you don't get a chapter every day but once you do, you will get at least 3 chapters or more a day. Considering this is translated from Indonesian from the author itself is really impressive, as the grammar is actually not that bad. The world background is also just like our world, but with OC's, for example, the character of Matheo is actually Messi in real life, but instead, he plays for Juventus, and then with Quaresma who is supposed to be Cristiano Ronaldo, and he plays for Real Madrid. There is romance in this, but it is a slow romance. Then for character designs, there aren't really any specifics on how the character really looks, but that just allows me to use my imagination of what our MC looks like. Then for story development, it really shows the football world as a whole and it dives into things such as transfer and etc. Other than that, this is a gem of a novel, and I think people should review this a bit more.
Revelar Spoiler Love the book. As long you keep releasing new chapter steadily on daily basis or like 5 chapter a week or more I will keep voting and supporting you.[img=update][img=update]
I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.
it's great, but the grammar is bad. It shows how football is not an individual player based sport but a team sport unlike other fanfics.