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I love the story it is so good. just wondering is this based off another story because I think I have read one nearly the same as this one
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amazing work keep up the good work (here an idea try adding creating table/workbench so when he upgrades it he can blue futuristic high walls)
The best story that was reading.hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola
Please start writing again I am enjoying this very much please don't drop this. please start writing again. please start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing again.
The story has been nice so far. Please keep up the good work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Awesome I am not yet in my teens so I don’t know how to judge but overall I like the overpowered mc and the character development is good so I think I will be looking forward to chapter fourty-two so I recon people should read this tho it’s pretty sad when the mobile system feels like it gets ignored because all the attention is going towards the two supreme systems
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Overall, the entire novel is pretty good except for one definite flaw. The MC. He is obnoxiously Naive to the point that I felt like I was having an Aneurysm reading the things he thinks/says. I find myself speaking/talking out loud about how stupid/naive his actions are atleast 1-2 times per chapter.
Previously MC said that he is not a faint-hearted person but he is afraid to change his thought of society pet to something more suitable to his situation, but that doesn't matter when your future happiness may be threatened. He seems like the typical person who would hit just because of his poor mentality and his high content of hypocrisy
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Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
It is an overpowered protagonist story but the author manages to keep the story interesting,unlike all the other OP protagonist story’s, keep up the good work work authur.
i really like this novel or whatever it is, but i cannot give the full 5 stars without further chapters, which I believe will be interesting.
alli can say is great as novel it is better than most upgrade apocalypse novels can be said to be close to the top the translation is also good theres no super patriotism and it dosent only focus on asia(like the ones on trial read or pilot) and the mc is actually maturing from being naive instead of staying a bad xianxia mc wich goes looking for trouble
It’s a very interesting novel and it’s not that bad. Although, it may be lacking in writing quality, the rest is perfect and it’s something you should have in your list to read.
I am giving it full 5 stars because it is interesting. I like everything about it.. although I sometimes feels like he is been overly cautions.. but it make later it makes sense what he is did is correct. I just want to say.. why didn't he upgrade the mobile phone.. I am sure it will help him alot in finding out information if he got the system out of it. Then he can ask about his parents too. But overall it's amazing story.. I hope it will not decrease in the future of the novel.
This is a review from the beginning to chapter 26. This novel is a great novel to read if your looking for a overpowered MC, it also includes in depths of emotional intelligence. it gives the novel a great Vibe of 'what would you feel if you where there'. So far author has no grammer errors which makes this a must read novel. I don't really see the comedy but I could be blind. the one thing I like about this novel is that it goes into details a bit into other things instead of the MC all the time. Overall I would give this book a 5/5 Star. Spoiler I find it interesting that he hasn't thought about saving his points for future upgrades. For the author: I think you have potential to make this novel better, I like this novel because of a similar novel that had a person upgrade his stuff. I think you can work more on your MC upgrading himself I don't see how much times he upgraded himself. It's a great read thanks for writing this.
well gonna give this 5 star and hope u not gonna drop this story ....................................... ............ ......................
I really enjoy this novel i really hope you dont drop it, that seems to happen to all the books i read lol.
please write more often I loved this story and have been looking forward to your updates
I love the story it is so good. just wondering is this based off another story because I think I have read one nearly the same as this one
Revelar Spoiler amazing work keep up the good work (here an idea try adding creating table/workbench so when he upgrades it he can blue futuristic high walls)
The best story that was reading.hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola,hola
Please start writing again I am enjoying this very much please don't drop this. please start writing again. please start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing againplease start writing again.
The story has been nice so far. Please keep up the good work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Awesome I am not yet in my teens so I don’t know how to judge but overall I like the overpowered mc and the character development is good so I think I will be looking forward to chapter fourty-two so I recon people should read this tho it’s pretty sad when the mobile system feels like it gets ignored because all the attention is going towards the two supreme systems
Revelar Spoiler Overall, the entire novel is pretty good except for one definite flaw. The MC. He is obnoxiously Naive to the point that I felt like I was having an Aneurysm reading the things he thinks/says. I find myself speaking/talking out loud about how stupid/naive his actions are atleast 1-2 times per chapter.
Previously MC said that he is not a faint-hearted person but he is afraid to change his thought of society pet to something more suitable to his situation, but that doesn't matter when your future happiness may be threatened. He seems like the typical person who would hit just because of his poor mentality and his high content of hypocrisy
Revelar Spoiler Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
It is an overpowered protagonist story but the author manages to keep the story interesting,unlike all the other OP protagonist story’s, keep up the good work work authur.
i really like this novel or whatever it is, but i cannot give the full 5 stars without further chapters, which I believe will be interesting.
alli can say is great as novel it is better than most upgrade apocalypse novels can be said to be close to the top the translation is also good theres no super patriotism and it dosent only focus on asia(like the ones on trial read or pilot) and the mc is actually maturing from being naive instead of staying a bad xianxia mc wich goes looking for trouble
It’s a very interesting novel and it’s not that bad. Although, it may be lacking in writing quality, the rest is perfect and it’s something you should have in your list to read.
I am giving it full 5 stars because it is interesting. I like everything about it.. although I sometimes feels like he is been overly cautions.. but it make later it makes sense what he is did is correct. I just want to say.. why didn't he upgrade the mobile phone.. I am sure it will help him alot in finding out information if he got the system out of it. Then he can ask about his parents too. But overall it's amazing story.. I hope it will not decrease in the future of the novel.
This is a review from the beginning to chapter 26. This novel is a great novel to read if your looking for a overpowered MC, it also includes in depths of emotional intelligence. it gives the novel a great Vibe of 'what would you feel if you where there'. So far author has no grammer errors which makes this a must read novel. I don't really see the comedy but I could be blind. the one thing I like about this novel is that it goes into details a bit into other things instead of the MC all the time. Overall I would give this book a 5/5 Star. Spoiler I find it interesting that he hasn't thought about saving his points for future upgrades. For the author: I think you have potential to make this novel better, I like this novel because of a similar novel that had a person upgrade his stuff. I think you can work more on your MC upgrading himself I don't see how much times he upgraded himself. It's a great read thanks for writing this.
well gonna give this 5 star and hope u not gonna drop this story ....................................... ............ ......................
I really enjoy this novel i really hope you dont drop it, that seems to happen to all the books i read lol.
please write more often I loved this story and have been looking forward to your updates