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wow, what a way to start a synopsis.. I am already emotional. The characters are beautifully design. the spacing and paragraphs are impressive, I like the FL already, hope she get through it and revenge😒😒 keep on with the good work , Author.
The Story is captivating! This author was able to catch the reader's interest with the amazing start. The synopsis itself told us how exciting this story will be. Good job author for this book. All the best!
I don’t understand where such positive reviews come from, but the book is not logical, the conflict is out of nowhere, the heroine is stupid, no, this is not from weak to strong, she is just stupid with the intelligence of a child, the rest of the characters are the same. The funny thing is that even in the initial chapters, she is not allowed to meet her mother, who is sick, and then it turns out that she has a powerful grandfather 🤦🏻♂️
goodness this is too dragging.. a very insignificant group conversation can last up to 2 chapters.. this novel is full of useless interactions and convo that it drags the story slow. i am now in chapter 50 and the only significant decelopment after the one night stand is bai renxiang finding out she's pregnant.. dont tell me another 50 chapters to go before she could give birth.. haha
currently in chapter 30.. if not beacuse the story has potential, i would have dropped it this early . i can tolerate the grammatical errors, but not the overly detailed and cheesy conversatios that are dragging the flow of the story. . its like you are listening verbatim to the actual conversations of people that even nuances are included . so annoying. .
Mmm. I could only read up to 150. There are so many writing mistakes, and now that it is complete, I hope the author will go over it and fix all the mistakes. To me, it's quite unrealistic? like the son will demolish the living room, throw her work papers, run out of the apartment, and he'll pout, and she'll forgive him like that. As a parent, that scenario is a fantasy. The neighbors mom still calls her grown child hunny cakes, etc. I understand great parent child relationships, but to me, all the relationships were too much. It's kind of like a simpleton? a novel you wouldn't expect any drama just family stuff.
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the book is an interesting story, just a few typing errors. overall I enjoy the story
this novel is really nice !!! such a heartwarming story with beautiful characters !! renxiang and fenjin are soooo cute and not to miss the star xiaojin always taking my heart away ...wanna c how the story goes ahead ....
I really liked the synopsis of this novel but I honestly could only read up to chapter 5, because there were too many word errors and word placement errors. if the writing errors get better as the chapters progress that is my loss. I just can't get past chapter 5, sorry.
the story is so amazing and awesome❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Great Story formation... I really like the way every character seems important....Especially the dialogues and imagery make the scenes play in my mind...There is no one who does not have his/her ideal type...
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I LOVE!!! This book. The start was captivating and that stupid father of hers. Sadly she did not have support and was step up twice. Gosh! But I love her rise author and I love the cute little son of hers. Thanks author for this good work.[img=update][img=recommend]
Wow!!! The synopsis sent me right into the book without even thinking twice. What a nice way to peak the interests of your readers! The story so far is an amazing one. I just had to stop at a certain chapter to give my review and ratings. It's a 5-star from me for such a good job on your first book. Each chapter leaves you wanting more, an evidence that you did a great job👍👍👍👍
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My new Passion of reading started during lockdown in 2019 and now I look for it interesting novel and also have craze to read more chapters hence pls keep updating more chapters to keep us glued
This is quite good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]Sypnopsis is looking good i will definetely give it a try after my exams for sure
So far is gooddd😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Can I know how .any chapter for this book ?
can this be good...this must be good......i think its good......... ok....ill add this to myblibrary.......basing on the synopsis.......this is goos..
I love love this!!! The characters, the positive vibe is just freaking awesome. I love that it isn't overloaded with scheme after scheme (Don't get me wrong who doesn't like schemes that leads to juicy face slapping 🤭, I just find it refreshing that its happening too much here. The bond that the characters have with their respective families is awesome, cute and HILARIOUS 🤣🤣
Love the work dear author. It's a fantastic story, though the progression is slow but I love how well it's going. The character development is steady.
Dear author.. just one review to make this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Love the author's name. D storyline alone is already, wow... And l let's not forget sad. Reading in, I must say, the descriptions and everything are on point. D story is not too fast paced so in all... Nice.
Simply love the start and the story's pacing. Lovely start, great characters. I particularly love Li Fengjin already... Such a naughty playboy.. . Good one, want more author.
Okay, update stability check ✅ Story development check ✅ Character design check ✅ Writing quality check ✅ nice for a newbie author. World background check ✅ I know its the start and I believe author would do more of description on the settings where the characters are to give us a more vivid imagination .
For the author's first book, I must say great job there. D storyline is fluid, smooth and nice to follow through. May seem cliche but I believe the outlines and plots would give it a touch of a tremendous difference. Great character and story development.
Nice start. Stupid father. He definitely doesn't love his daughter. How dare he throw her out! Can't wait to see how she makes him pay.. .same for that naughty ex of hers.
Splendid novel. Particularly love the synopsis. For one to go through so much in life, having ur world turn upside down os pretty sad. Love this kinds of female leads that rise up. Kudos for your writing style author. Good one.
First of all, the synopsis of this novel is amazing! I can’t help but feel for the FL, who’s already had to deal with so much, but I digress. For a writer’s first book, this is quite well-written. Looking forward to see what happens next!
wow, what a way to start a synopsis.. I am already emotional. The characters are beautifully design. the spacing and paragraphs are impressive, I like the FL already, hope she get through it and revenge😒😒 keep on with the good work , Author.
The Story is captivating! This author was able to catch the reader's interest with the amazing start. The synopsis itself told us how exciting this story will be. Good job author for this book. All the best!
I don’t understand where such positive reviews come from, but the book is not logical, the conflict is out of nowhere, the heroine is stupid, no, this is not from weak to strong, she is just stupid with the intelligence of a child, the rest of the characters are the same. The funny thing is that even in the initial chapters, she is not allowed to meet her mother, who is sick, and then it turns out that she has a powerful grandfather 🤦🏻♂️
goodness this is too dragging.. a very insignificant group conversation can last up to 2 chapters.. this novel is full of useless interactions and convo that it drags the story slow. i am now in chapter 50 and the only significant decelopment after the one night stand is bai renxiang finding out she's pregnant.. dont tell me another 50 chapters to go before she could give birth.. haha
currently in chapter 30.. if not beacuse the story has potential, i would have dropped it this early . i can tolerate the grammatical errors, but not the overly detailed and cheesy conversatios that are dragging the flow of the story. . its like you are listening verbatim to the actual conversations of people that even nuances are included . so annoying. .
Mmm. I could only read up to 150. There are so many writing mistakes, and now that it is complete, I hope the author will go over it and fix all the mistakes. To me, it's quite unrealistic? like the son will demolish the living room, throw her work papers, run out of the apartment, and he'll pout, and she'll forgive him like that. As a parent, that scenario is a fantasy. The neighbors mom still calls her grown child hunny cakes, etc. I understand great parent child relationships, but to me, all the relationships were too much. It's kind of like a simpleton? a novel you wouldn't expect any drama just family stuff.
Revelar Spoiler the book is an interesting story, just a few typing errors. overall I enjoy the story
this novel is really nice !!! such a heartwarming story with beautiful characters !! renxiang and fenjin are soooo cute and not to miss the star xiaojin always taking my heart away ...wanna c how the story goes ahead ....
I really liked the synopsis of this novel but I honestly could only read up to chapter 5, because there were too many word errors and word placement errors. if the writing errors get better as the chapters progress that is my loss. I just can't get past chapter 5, sorry.
the story is so amazing and awesome❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Great Story formation... I really like the way every character seems important....Especially the dialogues and imagery make the scenes play in my mind...There is no one who does not have his/her ideal type...
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I LOVE!!! This book. The start was captivating and that stupid father of hers. Sadly she did not have support and was step up twice. Gosh! But I love her rise author and I love the cute little son of hers. Thanks author for this good work.[img=update][img=recommend]
Wow!!! The synopsis sent me right into the book without even thinking twice. What a nice way to peak the interests of your readers! The story so far is an amazing one. I just had to stop at a certain chapter to give my review and ratings. It's a 5-star from me for such a good job on your first book. Each chapter leaves you wanting more, an evidence that you did a great job👍👍👍👍
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]sypnosis is good definetely going to read this novel.
My new Passion of reading started during lockdown in 2019 and now I look for it interesting novel and also have craze to read more chapters hence pls keep updating more chapters to keep us glued
This is quite good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]Sypnopsis is looking good i will definetely give it a try after my exams for sure
So far is gooddd😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Can I know how .any chapter for this book ?
can this be good...this must be good......i think its good......... ok....ill add this to myblibrary.......basing on the synopsis.......this is goos..
I love love this!!! The characters, the positive vibe is just freaking awesome. I love that it isn't overloaded with scheme after scheme (Don't get me wrong who doesn't like schemes that leads to juicy face slapping 🤭, I just find it refreshing that its happening too much here. The bond that the characters have with their respective families is awesome, cute and HILARIOUS 🤣🤣
Love the work dear author. It's a fantastic story, though the progression is slow but I love how well it's going. The character development is steady.
Dear author.. just one review to make this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Love the author's name. D storyline alone is already, wow... And l let's not forget sad. Reading in, I must say, the descriptions and everything are on point. D story is not too fast paced so in all... Nice.
Simply love the start and the story's pacing. Lovely start, great characters. I particularly love Li Fengjin already... Such a naughty playboy.. . Good one, want more author.
Okay, update stability check ✅ Story development check ✅ Character design check ✅ Writing quality check ✅ nice for a newbie author. World background check ✅ I know its the start and I believe author would do more of description on the settings where the characters are to give us a more vivid imagination .
For the author's first book, I must say great job there. D storyline is fluid, smooth and nice to follow through. May seem cliche but I believe the outlines and plots would give it a touch of a tremendous difference. Great character and story development.
Nice start. Stupid father. He definitely doesn't love his daughter. How dare he throw her out! Can't wait to see how she makes him pay.. .same for that naughty ex of hers.
Splendid novel. Particularly love the synopsis. For one to go through so much in life, having ur world turn upside down os pretty sad. Love this kinds of female leads that rise up. Kudos for your writing style author. Good one.
First of all, the synopsis of this novel is amazing! I can’t help but feel for the FL, who’s already had to deal with so much, but I digress. For a writer’s first book, this is quite well-written. Looking forward to see what happens next!