Wait, I can Warp reality?

LV 13

kickyx

For a novel based off of reality, the people inside it and the logic used are far from being real. First of all, his family somehow doesn't become shocked at the changes in the world and instead think its the MC doing it because he told them he would do that if he had powers. Now, lets think about this a bit more. There are 8 billion people in the world and they believed only the mc had the idea to change the "texture pack" of the world? Secondly, Reality Manipulation is NOT omnipotence or anywhere near it my guy. Losing your track of thought for a moment whilst utilizing the power would render the result you desired completely different than what actually happened. Thirdly, Reality Manipulation does not protect his body in any way shape or form, he would die 1 million times before he was even able to witness the universe be created, as that would mean he made it so he could either breathe in space, which is impossible because there is no oxygen in spacee, or wouldn't need oxygen. Suddenly being switched from an oxygen-based lifeform into one that isnt would destroy his body before he could even think of healing himself. Finally, before anyone comes at me and says its based off fiction and all that bs, the author chose to use our world, which means the MC and the characters would have to follow the rules of our world, unless the MC changed them of course. But, this would make the world not be ours and make the synopsis redundant. Overall, 2 stars, writing quality brings up the novel by 1 star.

LV 1

GoodDreamsWillEnd

I haven't found any grammar problems nor have I had any trouble reading. the story, so far, is creative and changing things up a little. the only warning I can give is that the story is not meant to make sense in some moments which might throw off some. I also wish to see more updates since I would like to see where this ends. I can definitely see this becoming a good story if the quality keeps improving like in the recent chapters.

LV 3

Netnert

Its good. Author if you read this please update it more. minimum characters. minimum characters. minimum characters. minimum characters.

LV 4

Buns1423

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É bom, mas dá para melhorar como colocar uma história de onde veio seus poderes e se possível atualizar mais esa fanfic porquê é necessário