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LV 10

just reading a few chapters made me want to leave this review.. everything about this novel is below average, all we're given of our MC is a name... no description so no real character design, terrible grammar like "am aint"... and the story does little to progress over several chapters.. i wanted to like this novel, i really did but the glaring faults it has makes it hard to read...

2yr 20

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LV 4

Jeffson

Author here. 18 chapters at the time of writing this. Yeah, I know I shamelessly gave myself a five-star, just had to do that. From the title and synopsis of this novel, you should have known what it would be about. Apart from that, other events would take part in the future. I just hope you'll support me if you enjoy reading, shower me with your votes, your comments, reviews, and so on. Ain't getting much of that right now, but I hope to get more supports as I drop more chapters. Ask me questions if you have any. Author out.

2yr 13

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LV 3

Gabichu_Yeah

NTR ALERT: Review number 10 to make known to the future victims of this novel the horror of this novel, in chapter 17 the MC voluntarily gives his wife to another man, also known as ntr, you are alerted .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr 12

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LV 14

Kw0z

There is NTR in chapter 17 -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Cuck

2yr 10

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LV 3

SupremeOne

After reading the last chapter of the novel, I was a little disappointed in some things. To explain, first of all, the main character acts like an idiot in the first 30 episodes and doesn't use his mind. The reason why I say idiot is that although the main character has been addicted to gambling since the age of 15, he does not show any tricks or cunning. The funny thing is, he remembers that after 30 episodes he didn't have the most basic thing to live on, and that's money. Then the first thing it does is ask the system for money and it's really frustrating. Anyway, I can say that he started to get a little smarter since the 30th episode. Although the main character's only problem is that he can solve things the easy way, he is someone who chooses the hard way. However, after 30 episodes, he starts to improve himself. At least he's showing some will. Also, there are not many details about the world the main character goes through. It is commonly referred to as world 2. However, it is not known whether there are any changes or differences. I think it would be better if some details about it were shared. Other than that, I think the writing quality is pretty good. The story goes very smoothly. Author, I hope you can make the main character a little more clever and cunning. The main character doesn't have any abilities or traits, but seems to be able to evolve.

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2yr 7

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LV 3

hermanht

Go to chapter 17 and read the comments there if you want a good review lol—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————- ———-

2yr 6

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LV 4

Broly_s

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2yr 3

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LV 1

leoreview1

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2yr 2

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LV 11

Isekaiwriter

I'm enjoying the story so far (chapter 4) I'll keep reading in my spare time. If your wondering if you should read this, just give it a chance. It seems like the authors going to paint a decent story right off the bat. Character personalities are pretty good.