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Escreva uma avaliaçãoAlthough the author is a little inspired by Gege in his way of doing things, the story is not bad.....................................................................
I've lost interest in the first five chapters. The synopsis didn't explain much to anything, so I went in blind to the story. The Kramer was good but the plot itself failed to capture me to give me motivation to continue reading.
Its was an amazing novel and a rlly good read it was a bit boring at first but as it progressed it turned out to be getting better and better as time went on to the point i am quite excited for the next chapter
I don’t get how the story can be so neglected yet so hype. i can’t give it a 5 stars because of how unstable the updates are but everything else is really good.
it's perfect I can feel this novel it's like watching an anime with just reading it overall I will give it 5 stars I hope you keep going
bro its the best jjk fanfic or one of the best ff in my opinion and has it end here or more ch will come cause I really want you to continue.Please continue I beg you.This ff is too good tbh
I really liked the story, I seriously recommend it, his technique is very interesting, how he uses it, his relationship with Maki and Mai, I like how he becomes stronger little by little, how he takes advantage of heavenly pacts and restrictions. the best jujutsu kaisen fanfic
it's a decent novel. still haven't read enough of it to give it a good feel but i read enough to like the concept and the quality of it. not the best but it's enough to make me want to continue reading it.
I’ve never written a review before so it might be bad but gotta say it’s the first story to warrant a review for me I’ve read some of the other reviews that say this story insists on keeping the MC weak but I say he’s kept at a good level though the whole story it makes sense not every sorcerer is Gojo or Yuji that learn insanely quick and the means in which he gets his powers are really well done especially since his mentality changes throughout the story it makes him feel like a character instead of a robotic power fantasy MC who is boring the recent chapters have also seen a major improvement in fight scenes the tension in fight scenes also makes it feel like JJK the writing is spectacular enough to keep me engaged even when things are slice of life the only minor gripe I have is the pace seems to change pretty rapidly throughout the whole story but that is definitely not enough to take away from the experience overall amazing story thanks for the read author and I look forward to more. 9/10
I didn't expect that, Maki, then you broke me. When Itadori wakes up he will be devastated and full of guilt. I hope Shoko can help Maki in some way, I think it's unfair for her to die like this.
Oke so i started reading this fic because the rating was high. The beginning looked promising with an mc that has character and a power with great potential. The author already said it would be a slower paced story but i didnt mind that since it was so promising. It first went downhill when the development of his power was weaker that i expected. After more than a decade the mc had become a bitter character and no longer interesting. The heartfelt emotions i felt during the first mission were now just the cliché fanfic plot points. Finally what made me lose hope completly was that the author didnt make any original arcs. He just follows the manga, sometimes just copying it. All in all it was a waist of time.
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My first jjk ffic and I really enjoyed it, I hope it gets better and better. love your fic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Bro, this story is really good, now I'm really curious to know how things will turn out from now on, I'm eagerly waiting for the next one. This meeting between Toji and Megumi was incredible, I imagine what his reaction will be like upon discovering that he is his father, it will be moments of many tears and reflection
this is really fun to read. This gives color to my very monotonous work days. thanks 👍 waiting for the next chapter
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well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.
The story is good so far, just that Mc needs to grow, and he does it. Most people don’t like when they need to lose something to gain something, but 5/5 for me, it's a realistic story, not some where he gets hurt one time and gets a power boost. This story is not for everyone, but I hope the author doesn’t drop it.
your jjk fanfic is amazing it feels like understand the characters emotions but don't at the same time hope you continue it I'm curious to know what happens in upcoming chaptes
Honestly a shame im just seeing this book now. one of the best jjk fanfics ive seen so far. Tis a shame it might be dropped. 😪 Great work though🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
Now that this novel has passed the 30 chapter mark I think It’s safe to review(for some reason the good jjk ff don’t get past chp 29) This novel so far is great it’s actually a jjk ff that in recent chps is starting delve into the world of jujutsu it’s a slow pace weak to strong the mc is likeable and has a really cool curse te chnique First of the updates are meh though it’s doesn’t really bother me since it’s the only good thing out here The story is good so far a good amount of original plots, except for the mc the other characters are awkward at first(to me) but they do improve over time Some with the writing quality it improves a lot later on So all in all I give this 4 stars since I’m a professional hater after all plus I don’t really know how to review sooo…
El protagonista no es de mí agrado, la forma de narrar del autor no me gusta, es muy larga e innecesaria ...............................................................
Although the author is a little inspired by Gege in his way of doing things, the story is not bad.....................................................................
I've lost interest in the first five chapters. The synopsis didn't explain much to anything, so I went in blind to the story. The Kramer was good but the plot itself failed to capture me to give me motivation to continue reading.
Its was an amazing novel and a rlly good read it was a bit boring at first but as it progressed it turned out to be getting better and better as time went on to the point i am quite excited for the next chapter
I don’t get how the story can be so neglected yet so hype. i can’t give it a 5 stars because of how unstable the updates are but everything else is really good.
it's perfect I can feel this novel it's like watching an anime with just reading it overall I will give it 5 stars I hope you keep going
bro its the best jjk fanfic or one of the best ff in my opinion and has it end here or more ch will come cause I really want you to continue.Please continue I beg you.This ff is too good tbh
I really liked the story, I seriously recommend it, his technique is very interesting, how he uses it, his relationship with Maki and Mai, I like how he becomes stronger little by little, how he takes advantage of heavenly pacts and restrictions. the best jujutsu kaisen fanfic
it's a decent novel. still haven't read enough of it to give it a good feel but i read enough to like the concept and the quality of it. not the best but it's enough to make me want to continue reading it.
I’ve never written a review before so it might be bad but gotta say it’s the first story to warrant a review for me I’ve read some of the other reviews that say this story insists on keeping the MC weak but I say he’s kept at a good level though the whole story it makes sense not every sorcerer is Gojo or Yuji that learn insanely quick and the means in which he gets his powers are really well done especially since his mentality changes throughout the story it makes him feel like a character instead of a robotic power fantasy MC who is boring the recent chapters have also seen a major improvement in fight scenes the tension in fight scenes also makes it feel like JJK the writing is spectacular enough to keep me engaged even when things are slice of life the only minor gripe I have is the pace seems to change pretty rapidly throughout the whole story but that is definitely not enough to take away from the experience overall amazing story thanks for the read author and I look forward to more. 9/10
I didn't expect that, Maki, then you broke me. When Itadori wakes up he will be devastated and full of guilt. I hope Shoko can help Maki in some way, I think it's unfair for her to die like this.
Oke so i started reading this fic because the rating was high. The beginning looked promising with an mc that has character and a power with great potential. The author already said it would be a slower paced story but i didnt mind that since it was so promising. It first went downhill when the development of his power was weaker that i expected. After more than a decade the mc had become a bitter character and no longer interesting. The heartfelt emotions i felt during the first mission were now just the cliché fanfic plot points. Finally what made me lose hope completly was that the author didnt make any original arcs. He just follows the manga, sometimes just copying it. All in all it was a waist of time.
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My first jjk ffic and I really enjoyed it, I hope it gets better and better. love your fic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Bro, this story is really good, now I'm really curious to know how things will turn out from now on, I'm eagerly waiting for the next one. This meeting between Toji and Megumi was incredible, I imagine what his reaction will be like upon discovering that he is his father, it will be moments of many tears and reflection
this is really fun to read. This gives color to my very monotonous work days. thanks 👍 waiting for the next chapter
the best fan fic of jjk. ..,..................................................................,................................................................,................................................................,..............................................................
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well to tell the truth, the idea of the story, the plot and eapecially the mc ability are amazing. But what made me give low rating to the story is mc pathetic development and his uncreative way of using his power. we have seen the mc only blaming himslef for his weaknesses over and over. he never traied for searching for a new way of applying his ability, learning new things that can support his team. thr mc fpr example have the power to control others, why he didn't use for weak cursed spirits and used them for gathering information for example. why he didn't use his abilities to force a packts against cursed spirits to gain their energy when he defeat them for example? you give your mc a very powerful ability, but you nerfed to a degree that made it useless, by doing so you nerfed your mc. I believe that this story has potential but it need more work.
The story is good so far, just that Mc needs to grow, and he does it. Most people don’t like when they need to lose something to gain something, but 5/5 for me, it's a realistic story, not some where he gets hurt one time and gets a power boost. This story is not for everyone, but I hope the author doesn’t drop it.
your jjk fanfic is amazing it feels like understand the characters emotions but don't at the same time hope you continue it I'm curious to know what happens in upcoming chaptes
Honestly a shame im just seeing this book now. one of the best jjk fanfics ive seen so far. Tis a shame it might be dropped. 😪 Great work though🙌🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾
Now that this novel has passed the 30 chapter mark I think It’s safe to review(for some reason the good jjk ff don’t get past chp 29) This novel so far is great it’s actually a jjk ff that in recent chps is starting delve into the world of jujutsu it’s a slow pace weak to strong the mc is likeable and has a really cool curse te chnique First of the updates are meh though it’s doesn’t really bother me since it’s the only good thing out here The story is good so far a good amount of original plots, except for the mc the other characters are awkward at first(to me) but they do improve over time Some with the writing quality it improves a lot later on So all in all I give this 4 stars since I’m a professional hater after all plus I don’t really know how to review sooo…
El protagonista no es de mí agrado, la forma de narrar del autor no me gusta, es muy larga e innecesaria ...............................................................