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Ashu 19-year-old boy setting off on his journey to explore the world filled with horrifying and unsettling mysteries and enemies so powerful that will make you or force you to fall on your knees.
Defying the logic and sense of adventure waiting for his arrival.
With his future friends, he will discover unsettling mysteries and enemeis.
join in with his adventure
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This is definitely quality work, the scenes are very well described, although not my cup of tea when it comes to genres, it is definitely something anyone could enjoy, the grammar is nigh-perfect,
Few errors here and there but not so much to cause a problem in reading. Cherecter degine is good, well written. Do try to describe the scenry more clearly.
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Nice writing, funny mc, and characters, do have some grammatical errors but it is manageable. The author always updates the chapter and fix the error and make the story interesting. But do make the story a little faster. For reader's enjoyment. Overall this novel does have the potential to become one of the best
Nice work, this work has potential but some language errors you can work on it and do post chapter regularly otherwise it will be a waste of effort.
I really the way you write your synopsis and first chapter. I love transmigration stories the most and this book really made me happy.I hope everyone give it a chance👍👍👍
Keep it up, this novel is might become one of the decent webs novels if tried a little bit harder. The overall story is good and interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up- you have my support :)
Love your writing skills and how the first chapter was explained. This book is best... so I'm really recommending this book guys, you'd love it. Author you did a great job!
I like the idea the author has, and I could see the potential in this story. I'm interested on how the warriors fit in into all this since it looks to be only mages.
I really like the improvement on writing that you made. The characters shows more emotions and more about themselves, the formalities and how you describe them. The plot is getting more interesting.
Overall, fun and interesting read with good characters. The novels on a bright path and I look forward to what twists and new dynamics the authors going to bring.
I like the premise and the idea behind the story; however, I don't think this was executed in a way that shows its full potential. There is a lot of refinement needed which is very common in new authors, and a lot of grammatical errors that need to be fixed. The first impression is everything, I recommend at least fixing up your first few chapters to hook in the reader! I hope my review helped!
Good so far. Written interestingly well but English needed some improvement not so much. Love Lyla she looks cute and interesting but I'm waiting for Krishna vajra. I hope the author degin that character well.
Nice read so far, consistent update rate. good world-building and character development. there is room for vocabulary development so keep working hard. The story is interesting and worth a read.
The synopsis is very good and unique, the words are easy to understand too. Reincarnation, journey, magic are my favourite genre. Very Great author. I have add to my library too.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
Good novel , with good development so far. The grammar is a bit lacking but the author is doing his best , so I'm gonna leave this review here for other to check this novel out!
Good Novel i love isekai novels so keep writing because i love it. the only problem is the update rate, EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
The story is great, the look is also neet and world background kinda interesting and about errors, there are some errors but they are manageable and unnoticeable.
Love James I do fond some errors. MC is kind of...Well over-all story is kind good. Same gose for chercter digine. World buildings is good.
Great read. The MC is a scarred character and i always love those. The flow and feel of the book makes a nice read and it’s got some funny moments. I would 100% recommend this book if someone’s looking fir a good read. Great job, ashu009. 😁😁❤️
84. “I’m not exactly sure what happened. Sometimes I remember it one way, sometimes another. If I’m going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!” – The Joker 95. “The only sensible way to live is without rules.” – The Joker