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I think that the Grammar needs more improvement, and the story feels like it's rushed you should explain the story a bit more.
Long time no see Author-san. I noticed that you come back to writing again after atleast a year gone without single news back then. I'm happy that you back and sad because you're not informing us on the past book for your come back. I hope you will continue to writing for long time before you gone again. Welcome back to fantasy land, Author-san
Hmm needs improvement on grammars also story too rushed, if the story is fully explained in more properly I would have been more immerse with the story.
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This is a good fanfic, it's a pity that the author didn't update the new chapter for a month. Hey Author if you are reading this comment please update new chapter.
Where are you author-san 🤔🤔🤔 When will be the next chapter release 😂 I need MOOAARRRRR 🐮🐮🐮 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Words cannot describe how happy I was when I found a honkai fanfic, there are definitely others somewhere but this was the first I found one. It's very interesting so far and long chapters are always a plus. Aside from some spelling and grammar errors, it's great.
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I'm really interested in how Rena will solve their problems. Despite not claiming Kaslana she got every Kaslana trait (The cooking part isn't verified yet). She still has a male mind so she will definitely be gay(Like every character) her partner is yet to be determined..
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so this is rewrite fanfic I guess so it still good to be honest keep a good work Author 😉.Take care yourself and I'm want reading this fanfic until the story end so please don't drop.
Okay i guess i am the first reviewer after the novel change place. The first thing i just want to say is Good Job on the Novel but i need more!!!!
I think that the Grammar needs more improvement, and the story feels like it's rushed you should explain the story a bit more.
Long time no see Author-san. I noticed that you come back to writing again after atleast a year gone without single news back then. I'm happy that you back and sad because you're not informing us on the past book for your come back. I hope you will continue to writing for long time before you gone again. Welcome back to fantasy land, Author-san
Hmm needs improvement on grammars also story too rushed, if the story is fully explained in more properly I would have been more immerse with the story.
good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when good fanfic but update when
This is a good fanfic, it's a pity that the author didn't update the new chapter for a month. Hey Author if you are reading this comment please update new chapter.
Where are you author-san 🤔🤔🤔 When will be the next chapter release 😂 I need MOOAARRRRR 🐮🐮🐮 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Words cannot describe how happy I was when I found a honkai fanfic, there are definitely others somewhere but this was the first I found one. It's very interesting so far and long chapters are always a plus. Aside from some spelling and grammar errors, it's great.
Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai Mei-senpai
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I'm really interested in how Rena will solve their problems. Despite not claiming Kaslana she got every Kaslana trait (The cooking part isn't verified yet). She still has a male mind so she will definitely be gay(Like every character) her partner is yet to be determined..
Revelar Spoiler so this is rewrite fanfic I guess so it still good to be honest keep a good work Author 😉.Take care yourself and I'm want reading this fanfic until the story end so please don't drop.
Okay i guess i am the first reviewer after the novel change place. The first thing i just want to say is Good Job on the Novel but i need more!!!!
sooo I'm guessing this has been dropped?