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The story should have started with the MC as a child growing through the Warring States Era and leading up to them sealing him. The grammar is terrible and the plot is just not well-written. Most of the chapters in the novel are about Shiro fighting Konoha for one night after the massacre. The whole story is just written terribly with no real thought or effort put into writing it.
Чувак всё круто продолжай в том же духе. Вот только вопрос тансейган будешь использовать и сделай не большой романтический сюжет между Широ и Кагуей.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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good story, although this waif was fun while it lasted __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't start over, this book/Fan-fic is amazing and nothing needs to be changed! We all love it and hope you keep updating and adding chapters. Please don't stop, it's my favorite book/Fan-fic on here.
awesome story ....................................................................................................................................
Although it doesn't show the story of how he got so ppwerful but this story is perfect even without knowing his step to become stronger. KEEP OT UP
Love it can't wait for more............................................................................................................................
I haven't read it yet but it sounds amazing and I hope it not dropped and will be completed good luck with the translation and with the popularity of it
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This original novel is call "I, The Uchiha Ancestor, destroy Konoha at the start" for people that want to read the mlt translation. You Welcome.
question for athour plz scroll down to see is this novel dropped plz say no and if it isn't dropped where are the chapteres?
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Hola la historia es muy buena una de las mejor y no siguen a naruto pero tiene su propio estilo la recomiendo mucho gracias por tu trabajo en esta gran novela
Amazing story so far love the mc. Villain mc is always the best please keep updating the story. Also really enjoy the fight scenes so far really enjoyable!
I really enjoyed reading this despite the slight grammer problems but it was more than enough. I hope you can update more and i hope Mc can get kaguya as his wife. Good luck!
I liked. ................................................................................................................................................
Just the synopsis alone I will give this novel a 4 ⭐...and if only if this novel is continue then will I give a 5 ⭐ rating..................
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This book is really interesting. I luv the idea of this book, bcoz even in other Fanfics where there is a less heroic Mc, they only ever think about changes. So this is a refreshing change for me
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How the character is really strong. It's easy to see that he doesn't exterminate his enemies just for plot content. It's so much repeated fighting with enemies that he doesn't kill that it just makes me angry.
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Author-san, when will you update again?: (Me and other readers really liked this story, even before the rewrite. So please keep writing it[img=recommend]
The story should have started with the MC as a child growing through the Warring States Era and leading up to them sealing him. The grammar is terrible and the plot is just not well-written. Most of the chapters in the novel are about Shiro fighting Konoha for one night after the massacre. The whole story is just written terribly with no real thought or effort put into writing it.
Чувак всё круто продолжай в том же духе. Вот только вопрос тансейган будешь использовать и сделай не большой романтический сюжет между Широ и Кагуей.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Subarashi.... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"...
good story, although this waif was fun while it lasted __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't start over, this book/Fan-fic is amazing and nothing needs to be changed! We all love it and hope you keep updating and adding chapters. Please don't stop, it's my favorite book/Fan-fic on here.
awesome story ....................................................................................................................................
Although it doesn't show the story of how he got so ppwerful but this story is perfect even without knowing his step to become stronger. KEEP OT UP
Love it can't wait for more............................................................................................................................
I haven't read it yet but it sounds amazing and I hope it not dropped and will be completed good luck with the translation and with the popularity of it
This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read. This what I want to read.
This original novel is call "I, The Uchiha Ancestor, destroy Konoha at the start" for people that want to read the mlt translation. You Welcome.
question for athour plz scroll down to see is this novel dropped plz say no and if it isn't dropped where are the chapteres?
IT IS GREAT|||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Hola la historia es muy buena una de las mejor y no siguen a naruto pero tiene su propio estilo la recomiendo mucho gracias por tu trabajo en esta gran novela
Amazing story so far love the mc. Villain mc is always the best please keep updating the story. Also really enjoy the fight scenes so far really enjoyable!
I really enjoyed reading this despite the slight grammer problems but it was more than enough. I hope you can update more and i hope Mc can get kaguya as his wife. Good luck!
I liked. ................................................................................................................................................
Just the synopsis alone I will give this novel a 4 ⭐...and if only if this novel is continue then will I give a 5 ⭐ rating..................
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Good fanfiction,plese no stop continued for forever please................alalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalal
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To balance the five, 5 star ratings from the same person. upupsusypsypzypzypsypzyzpyzplzhlhzphluxpulxp7e 7pe please 7p ep7 e7pe ep7 pe7 p7e p7 ep 7epp77pep7e p7 7p s7pp7sp7 ep77 ep7pe
This book is really interesting. I luv the idea of this book, bcoz even in other Fanfics where there is a less heroic Mc, they only ever think about changes. So this is a refreshing change for me
Awesome story ……………………………………………………. ……………………………………………………. ……………………………………………………. ……………………………………………………. ……………………………………………………. …………………………………………………….
How the character is really strong. It's easy to see that he doesn't exterminate his enemies just for plot content. It's so much repeated fighting with enemies that he doesn't kill that it just makes me angry.
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Author-san, when will you update again?: (Me and other readers really liked this story, even before the rewrite. So please keep writing it[img=recommend]