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Fanfic ini bagus dan ceritanya juga tidak buruk...... Saya akan mendukung karya anda dan semoga alur ceritanya menjadi semakin menarik untuk kedepannya.... Selamat berkarya author-sama😅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
was it dropped or not after 4 months I hope not it's a good story ..........................................................................
Honestly, this story is really good...If you turn your brain off and ignore the various and frankly glaring holes in the story and common sense of normal people.
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I don't usually write review but i can't ignore this one. Like they say the story and interaction is good, but it goes down where he get out of the seal. Its like he's a pokemon trainer and the girls are pokemon he just charm them with his face and attitude then he throw the pokeball(proposal), then bam he gets the pokemon(girls). Plus he's too OP he is practicaly a god, he is even the strongest in the dxd after he goes to dimentional gap. Like the others said in review the only way to save this is he goes to higher world or he seals his power.
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To summarize the errors of this FanFic is to just say thay the Character Interactions are extremely subpar when it comes to the H@rem(Dunno if this is censored in WN) Building. Could still improve though...
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This novel that you have is great especially in the beginning, the only flaws are the fast pace of the novel. It all started going down after he was unsealed, it would have been better to unseal him 3 to 10 years before the plot. To one, clean up the underworld and have full control and two to save Neko clan and other future harem members with their family’s. Giving you time to build a relationship with them as well as train them to be stronger, so that they can solve their own problems and make there own decisions. The main problem is that after the unsealing he only had 3 beings that could match him ophis, great red, and trihexia. The only way to save this novel is to send him to a higher ranked world, i suggest Dbz at around perfect cell level without using concepts. You can even have a goal to conquer all the universes and be it’s supreme king. Do not put him in any cultivation world they are annoying and will most likely bring down the novel more.
Another SI story with nothing but cliche. Rating lied again, honestly as per usual as most harem si fics on this website. But sometimes something brilliant will appear leading me to have no choice but to travel this site. back to this fic, its bad. system to show how op mc, basically a lazy plot device for author to set how strong mc is at certain point of story. Romance is bs, everyone just hopped to his D. Dialogue is bs. Everyone is worshippinh the mc's "absolute power". 0/5 for me, the harem isnt even good, fights are painfully boring, converaation is as awkward as social outcast attempting to communicate with a braindead senile elderly. I even created a new reading list just to remind myself not to touch this fic considering how inanely cliche this story is
It's a good one if you can ignore some stuff that i'm too lazy to write down, I literaly cry at some parts where I can't handle the cringe. but this is good stuff, go read it
There are many things wrong in this novel. 1.The MC wants Rias and peerage as a harem member but not only is he older than Rias's father he is also her uncle which I find incredibley weird.. 2.He is King of the underworld and he dosen't act noble at all..like for example fighting Riser(who is just a weak arrogant young master) or going for almost every woman and flirting with them openly in front of other faction leaders.. 3.The characters are shallow and many girls fall for him just because of his handsome face and because he is a little concerned for them.. 4.The charracter interaction is really bad.
To be honest, the story was great until the war, I even liked the concept of him being sealed by Big G cuz he is too powerful. But after being released the story went down especially his first interaction with others was awful. As for harem, I believe it would have been better if mc went after women other than Rias, Sona, Akeno, Asia. Like mc could have been with Serafall, Gabriel, Suri, Sairaorg's mother
The romance is very bad i dont even understand why author put romance tag in it, because there is no romance his first women was just because the original lucifer said like “he grayfia marry this guy”. later this guy fights god gets sealed. Seal breaks around start cannon. one of the first things he does is asking almost every women in the room to become “his” women. next day or someting all the women he asks agrees to become his women and this is how he gets al his women. meeting-asking the be his women-accept. Its pretty boring until now he doesnt really develop someting with everyone except grayfia pre-cannon.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
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I've read a lot of fanfic, but there is no such thing. Just a top. Like for Lucifer+Gremory.++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Amazing.I need more.The quality is astounding and I very much hope for a update soon.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well, it’s my first review Good points: Anos Voldigod powers, you think it’s OP? Then what are you doing here? It’s dxd fanfic. Really good grammar and really easy to understand. Really good think about story Time of the story stars several decades before War, so this story isn’t a copy of millions of others dxd fan fictions. My personal plus about main weapon, but I don’t what to spoil it. Reaaly decent story
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An interesting story, im looking forward to it. Hopefully it isn't one of those that just end at 6 chapters. But anyway Good luck writing...
Fanfic ini bagus dan ceritanya juga tidak buruk...... Saya akan mendukung karya anda dan semoga alur ceritanya menjadi semakin menarik untuk kedepannya.... Selamat berkarya author-sama😅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
was it dropped or not after 4 months I hope not it's a good story ..........................................................................
Honestly, this story is really good...If you turn your brain off and ignore the various and frankly glaring holes in the story and common sense of normal people.
Very good a bit different[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Revelar Spoiler I don't usually write review but i can't ignore this one. Like they say the story and interaction is good, but it goes down where he get out of the seal. Its like he's a pokemon trainer and the girls are pokemon he just charm them with his face and attitude then he throw the pokeball(proposal), then bam he gets the pokemon(girls). Plus he's too OP he is practicaly a god, he is even the strongest in the dxd after he goes to dimentional gap. Like the others said in review the only way to save this is he goes to higher world or he seals his power.
Revelar Spoiler To summarize the errors of this FanFic is to just say thay the Character Interactions are extremely subpar when it comes to the H@rem(Dunno if this is censored in WN) Building. Could still improve though...
not worth spending time, xianxia vibes.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
This novel that you have is great especially in the beginning, the only flaws are the fast pace of the novel. It all started going down after he was unsealed, it would have been better to unseal him 3 to 10 years before the plot. To one, clean up the underworld and have full control and two to save Neko clan and other future harem members with their family’s. Giving you time to build a relationship with them as well as train them to be stronger, so that they can solve their own problems and make there own decisions. The main problem is that after the unsealing he only had 3 beings that could match him ophis, great red, and trihexia. The only way to save this novel is to send him to a higher ranked world, i suggest Dbz at around perfect cell level without using concepts. You can even have a goal to conquer all the universes and be it’s supreme king. Do not put him in any cultivation world they are annoying and will most likely bring down the novel more.
Another SI story with nothing but cliche. Rating lied again, honestly as per usual as most harem si fics on this website. But sometimes something brilliant will appear leading me to have no choice but to travel this site. back to this fic, its bad. system to show how op mc, basically a lazy plot device for author to set how strong mc is at certain point of story. Romance is bs, everyone just hopped to his D. Dialogue is bs. Everyone is worshippinh the mc's "absolute power". 0/5 for me, the harem isnt even good, fights are painfully boring, converaation is as awkward as social outcast attempting to communicate with a braindead senile elderly. I even created a new reading list just to remind myself not to touch this fic considering how inanely cliche this story is
It's a good one if you can ignore some stuff that i'm too lazy to write down, I literaly cry at some parts where I can't handle the cringe. but this is good stuff, go read it
There are many things wrong in this novel. 1.The MC wants Rias and peerage as a harem member but not only is he older than Rias's father he is also her uncle which I find incredibley weird.. 2.He is King of the underworld and he dosen't act noble at all..like for example fighting Riser(who is just a weak arrogant young master) or going for almost every woman and flirting with them openly in front of other faction leaders.. 3.The characters are shallow and many girls fall for him just because of his handsome face and because he is a little concerned for them.. 4.The charracter interaction is really bad.
To be honest, the story was great until the war, I even liked the concept of him being sealed by Big G cuz he is too powerful. But after being released the story went down especially his first interaction with others was awful. As for harem, I believe it would have been better if mc went after women other than Rias, Sona, Akeno, Asia. Like mc could have been with Serafall, Gabriel, Suri, Sairaorg's mother
The romance is very bad i dont even understand why author put romance tag in it, because there is no romance his first women was just because the original lucifer said like “he grayfia marry this guy”. later this guy fights god gets sealed. Seal breaks around start cannon. one of the first things he does is asking almost every women in the room to become “his” women. next day or someting all the women he asks agrees to become his women and this is how he gets al his women. meeting-asking the be his women-accept. Its pretty boring until now he doesnt really develop someting with everyone except grayfia pre-cannon.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super
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I've read a lot of fanfic, but there is no such thing. Just a top. Like for Lucifer+Gremory.++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Amazing.I need more.The quality is astounding and I very much hope for a update soon.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well, it’s my first review Good points: Anos Voldigod powers, you think it’s OP? Then what are you doing here? It’s dxd fanfic. Really good grammar and really easy to understand. Really good think about story Time of the story stars several decades before War, so this story isn’t a copy of millions of others dxd fan fictions. My personal plus about main weapon, but I don’t what to spoil it. Reaaly decent story
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An interesting story, im looking forward to it. Hopefully it isn't one of those that just end at 6 chapters. But anyway Good luck writing...
Great storyline character development and character background