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NOICE! I just gave this 5 stars because I just did it randomly. Anyways, the OP Shota MC is pretty laid back and just having fun while just being OP. Meaning that this is quite noice. (I'm a bit bad at reviewing since this is one of the first times I did my review)
It's pretty good. Powers are OP but MC doesn't use them much for no other reason than because he wants to have fun and not instantly steamroll the competition. At least, that's what I got from him... Writing quality is good, grammar is pretty decent, not much to complain about. Updates are here and there, not daily or anything, but it's alright. Story pacing is also alright in my opinion, there's not much you can consider "filler" Character design... well, it's average. You can guess who is going to act which way after reading about them for a while. World background is just Fate, it doesnt explain things too much, but it's understandable if you have a decent understanding on the Nasuverse
I'm really liking this book, I hope you don't stop writing it hahaha I love fate stories. I think the most cool this about this is the plot so far.
One of the thing i dislike about the novel is the main character's parents yes you heard me right his parents. It's not like i hate them or anything i just don't like them and them being one of the focal points in the early parts of the novel made me not enjoy this novel even more cause I'm here on to read the novel on the basis that MC is insanely OP and has little to no weaknesses while following on his journey collecting a harem not trying to manage a his family and taking care of them and being a tutor.
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The rewrite is more epic then what you first wrote it looks like a proper novel now TBH really enjoying it and great depth to the Mc which isn't usually there.
Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе.Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе.Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе. Шикарное произведение. Надеюсь автор не забросит его.
this is nice, the updates take a long time to come but otherwise very nice ..................................................................................................................................
HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good.
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Good is this book that has been read! Many happiness has been made! I'm not good with words? Thousand words is picture. I leave picture. Yes 😁 !
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I don’t read/watch any fate/series but this is one i enjoyed. If someone did continue this story, let me know.
NOICE! I just gave this 5 stars because I just did it randomly. Anyways, the OP Shota MC is pretty laid back and just having fun while just being OP. Meaning that this is quite noice. (I'm a bit bad at reviewing since this is one of the first times I did my review)
It's pretty good. Powers are OP but MC doesn't use them much for no other reason than because he wants to have fun and not instantly steamroll the competition. At least, that's what I got from him... Writing quality is good, grammar is pretty decent, not much to complain about. Updates are here and there, not daily or anything, but it's alright. Story pacing is also alright in my opinion, there's not much you can consider "filler" Character design... well, it's average. You can guess who is going to act which way after reading about them for a while. World background is just Fate, it doesnt explain things too much, but it's understandable if you have a decent understanding on the Nasuverse
I'm really liking this book, I hope you don't stop writing it hahaha I love fate stories. I think the most cool this about this is the plot so far.
One of the thing i dislike about the novel is the main character's parents yes you heard me right his parents. It's not like i hate them or anything i just don't like them and them being one of the focal points in the early parts of the novel made me not enjoy this novel even more cause I'm here on to read the novel on the basis that MC is insanely OP and has little to no weaknesses while following on his journey collecting a harem not trying to manage a his family and taking care of them and being a tutor.
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The rewrite is more epic then what you first wrote it looks like a proper novel now TBH really enjoying it and great depth to the Mc which isn't usually there.
Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе.Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе.Не улыбася мне, не улыбайся мне. От этой миленькой улыбки мне не по себе. Шикарное произведение. Надеюсь автор не забросит его.
this is nice, the updates take a long time to come but otherwise very nice ..................................................................................................................................
HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good. HAREM = Good.
I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works
Fu-fuhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahaha
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Good is this book that has been read! Many happiness has been made! I'm not good with words? Thousand words is picture. I leave picture. Yes 😁 !
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I don’t read/watch any fate/series but this is one i enjoyed. If someone did continue this story, let me know.