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The story is fantastic and Unique. The author kind of make the Mc transmigrated in a unique way to Kagami Junichiro from denpa kyoushi or otaku teacher. It is the only one so far who use this concept... provably. The only weakness? upsat is only 4 times a week. As a reader we always need moar!!! LOL
As usual, this is just the author 5 Star review. I realized that my fanfic description before was very uninteresting and probably very hard to understand. Hence, I have changed it to attract more reader by making it more interesting. Btw, you can comment below for any technologies you want to add. PS: Can anyone guess what is the last technology in the description and which anime has that technology?
Writing quality: 3/5 Story development: 2/5 Character design: 0/5 World background: 0/5 MC simp, beta, boring. Story confusing, bad and boring spelling.
This ff is one of the best ff that I have ever read! the mc is not dense and is intelligent. Through adding so many characters might cause future plot problems but until now, everything is perfect. Almost none grammatical mistakes, story development is also good, character of mc is pretty natural as a chinnibyo scientist. Updating stability is not much good but the quality make up for it. World background is pretty messed up as there are several anime mixed up and I think that it might cause future problems but it also opens many future route. The story is funny and interesting and I can say that you will definitely fall in love with this work! Thanks for the blessings! Hope you can also introduce more anime as long as it doesn't mess with the future plots. I have great expectations! 😊😃😻
Woohoo! another multiverse fanfic! or not... It is more like a single world with a combination of multiple anime world. The Author probably wants to follow akikan (if you know that dimensional chat group) step in converting chinese novel system to its anime counter part. Akikan= chat group system (anime ver) This author= Technology system (anime ver.) Though, the most important part is NO HAREM NO HAREM NO HAREM! Important things need to be said three times! Or that is what the author promise for now, not sure if the author change his mind.
I hope this isn't another trash harem, if it's a harem please write 'harem' in the tag or description. I hope this isn't another trash harem, if it's a harem please write 'harem' in the tag or description
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Well, Since I have a gap year before my university year, I decide to write again! This fanfic can be said to be a semi slice of life and also sciences fiction where I will try to explains many unscientific technologies in anime using all the sciences I have learn, while some most comes from a high school knowledge, I will also add some exoteric knowledge you all never heard about. In a way, it can be said to be similar to many Chinese got technology system, create a business and make china number one in lots of novel. Though mine will focus on anime technology and will not be nationalist like them. After all, I am not a Japanese, chinese or even someone from western country. So the mc will create his own organisation/country later on. PS: Btw, I feel that the prologue is too cringe but are too lazy to change it. Actually, I already create a paragraph explaining how the isekai machine works through sonoluminecense phenomenon, Frey effect and even electromagnetic resonance. Though I don't want to potrays the mc to be too smart before the story even began... Anyway, you can give me suggestion on that and even what technology I should put inside the fanfic later on. While some key technology for story progression will not change, I will try to put in some misc technology in between. Another PS: Update might not be regular since I hide my hobby of writing fanfic from my parents. With my parents constant observation and order to learn through online course, independent studies and so on... I am not even sure how I can put my time on writing besides secretly stealing some of those time to write this.
WOW! This Author just create a mix between those technology invention novel (like scholar advance technological system) and slice of life anime. not sure what it will become in the future! Keep up the good work Author!
The story is fantastic and Unique. The author kind of make the Mc transmigrated in a unique way to Kagami Junichiro from denpa kyoushi or otaku teacher. It is the only one so far who use this concept... provably. The only weakness? upsat is only 4 times a week. As a reader we always need moar!!! LOL
As usual, this is just the author 5 Star review. I realized that my fanfic description before was very uninteresting and probably very hard to understand. Hence, I have changed it to attract more reader by making it more interesting. Btw, you can comment below for any technologies you want to add. PS: Can anyone guess what is the last technology in the description and which anime has that technology?
Writing quality: 3/5 Story development: 2/5 Character design: 0/5 World background: 0/5 MC simp, beta, boring. Story confusing, bad and boring spelling.
This ff is one of the best ff that I have ever read! the mc is not dense and is intelligent. Through adding so many characters might cause future plot problems but until now, everything is perfect. Almost none grammatical mistakes, story development is also good, character of mc is pretty natural as a chinnibyo scientist. Updating stability is not much good but the quality make up for it. World background is pretty messed up as there are several anime mixed up and I think that it might cause future problems but it also opens many future route. The story is funny and interesting and I can say that you will definitely fall in love with this work! Thanks for the blessings! Hope you can also introduce more anime as long as it doesn't mess with the future plots. I have great expectations! 😊😃😻
Woohoo! another multiverse fanfic! or not... It is more like a single world with a combination of multiple anime world. The Author probably wants to follow akikan (if you know that dimensional chat group) step in converting chinese novel system to its anime counter part. Akikan= chat group system (anime ver) This author= Technology system (anime ver.) Though, the most important part is NO HAREM NO HAREM NO HAREM! Important things need to be said three times! Or that is what the author promise for now, not sure if the author change his mind.
I hope this isn't another trash harem, if it's a harem please write 'harem' in the tag or description. I hope this isn't another trash harem, if it's a harem please write 'harem' in the tag or description
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Well, Since I have a gap year before my university year, I decide to write again! This fanfic can be said to be a semi slice of life and also sciences fiction where I will try to explains many unscientific technologies in anime using all the sciences I have learn, while some most comes from a high school knowledge, I will also add some exoteric knowledge you all never heard about. In a way, it can be said to be similar to many Chinese got technology system, create a business and make china number one in lots of novel. Though mine will focus on anime technology and will not be nationalist like them. After all, I am not a Japanese, chinese or even someone from western country. So the mc will create his own organisation/country later on. PS: Btw, I feel that the prologue is too cringe but are too lazy to change it. Actually, I already create a paragraph explaining how the isekai machine works through sonoluminecense phenomenon, Frey effect and even electromagnetic resonance. Though I don't want to potrays the mc to be too smart before the story even began... Anyway, you can give me suggestion on that and even what technology I should put inside the fanfic later on. While some key technology for story progression will not change, I will try to put in some misc technology in between. Another PS: Update might not be regular since I hide my hobby of writing fanfic from my parents. With my parents constant observation and order to learn through online course, independent studies and so on... I am not even sure how I can put my time on writing besides secretly stealing some of those time to write this.
WOW! This Author just create a mix between those technology invention novel (like scholar advance technological system) and slice of life anime. not sure what it will become in the future! Keep up the good work Author!