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Mc is totally a idiot thinking about using guns or nukes in Naruto ,, it's totally demolished the concept of chakra and cold weapons .. Mc be like in chapter " can ninja outrun a bullet and ........bang dead"
Is this dropped? I've been waiting for the updates!! WHAT THE HECK happened? Where is my chapter? where is the part 2 ?? WHERE ARE YOU AUTHOR-SAN?
does anyone know a story where the mc is a shop/restaurant owner or something?? I really want to read these types of fanfics... I didn't read this fanfic (cause it's dropped )but I liked its idea...
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tout les person se parle a eux meme ils ont tous des problemes mentaux gaegoeageoegaokekogekogeekokoekogkogkeogkoegeakoekogaekogkokoaeokaekoaekogokgeç_çà_
Es un bien fanfic, tiene un gran potencial que el autor desarrolla. Es una temática casi distinta de las demás. Me gusta como el autor hace interactuar a los personajes.
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the sypnosis is a lie, i thought it will be a different fanfic but in the end it will always go to generic route. the sypnosis is a lie, i thought it will be a different fanfic but in the end it will always go to generic route.
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it reads like a Chinese novel (with better English) and the mc acts like a fķn idiot. the premise is good but the execution could be better.
boring for me. hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello
Who will be the love interest? Please let Tsunade be the love interest. Even if she is old, you can make her learn senjutsu, she will gain her vitality.(cuz she is a senju)
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I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works
ill be blunt uhh ill keep reading but you need to change the title, you spent 9 chapters on the story with barely any progression on the actual reason people come to this fanfic in the first place "weapon shop owner" i also noticed he can get points from I guess ill say quest, this immediately ruined an insane amount of things you could have done with the character and the shop but instead you went with the overproduced route that literary almost every single authors goes down. so make a choice man, stick with the shop or allow him to get points from other options. I'm pretty disappointed in the author considering I love shop fanfics cause its pretty rare for people to make them and I like the creativity on how they handle their situation cause most authors just make their fanfics pure combat and it is honestly getting stale. writing quality - 4 stability of updates - 4 story development (so far) - 1 star and by development I mean what the title and synopses says it will be character - 2 world - 3
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Dude this is great!!!💕💕💕 And its different from other fanfic's that i read currently...👍👍👍 I love how the MC is not so Op...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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This fanfic is going to be a hit. The MC is like Maki from Jujustu Kaisen, he doesn't have chakra but his physical abilities will become super human in the future.
ForgottenLife's new fanfic novel?? i think i need to see this.︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
Not gonna lie, I can feel that this ff of yours will be huge hit in the future. Although naruto ff(webnovel) are so many which I couldn't count with typical plot,this story brings a broad idea on naruto ff so keep going author.
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Who will be the love interest? Please let Tsunade be the love interest. Even if she is old, you can make her learn senjutsu, she will gain her vitality.(cuz she is a senju)
It’s a great story! The author said it will continue, hope it starts back up soon.
Mc is totally a idiot thinking about using guns or nukes in Naruto ,, it's totally demolished the concept of chakra and cold weapons .. Mc be like in chapter " can ninja outrun a bullet and ........bang dead"
Is this dropped? I've been waiting for the updates!! WHAT THE HECK happened? Where is my chapter? where is the part 2 ?? WHERE ARE YOU AUTHOR-SAN?
does anyone know a story where the mc is a shop/restaurant owner or something?? I really want to read these types of fanfics... I didn't read this fanfic (cause it's dropped )but I liked its idea...
Click bait fanfic liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar liar
tout les person se parle a eux meme ils ont tous des problemes mentaux gaegoeageoegaokekogekogeekokoekogkogkeogkoegeakoekogaekogkokoaeokaekoaekogokgeç_çà_
Es un bien fanfic, tiene un gran potencial que el autor desarrolla. Es una temática casi distinta de las demás. Me gusta como el autor hace interactuar a los personajes.
more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,
the sypnosis is a lie, i thought it will be a different fanfic but in the end it will always go to generic route. the sypnosis is a lie, i thought it will be a different fanfic but in the end it will always go to generic route.
Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic! Full Star for an Amazing FanFic!
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it reads like a Chinese novel (with better English) and the mc acts like a fķn idiot. the premise is good but the execution could be better.
boring for me. hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello
Who will be the love interest? Please let Tsunade be the love interest. Even if she is old, you can make her learn senjutsu, she will gain her vitality.(cuz she is a senju)
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I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works
ill be blunt uhh ill keep reading but you need to change the title, you spent 9 chapters on the story with barely any progression on the actual reason people come to this fanfic in the first place "weapon shop owner" i also noticed he can get points from I guess ill say quest, this immediately ruined an insane amount of things you could have done with the character and the shop but instead you went with the overproduced route that literary almost every single authors goes down. so make a choice man, stick with the shop or allow him to get points from other options. I'm pretty disappointed in the author considering I love shop fanfics cause its pretty rare for people to make them and I like the creativity on how they handle their situation cause most authors just make their fanfics pure combat and it is honestly getting stale. writing quality - 4 stability of updates - 4 story development (so far) - 1 star and by development I mean what the title and synopses says it will be character - 2 world - 3
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Dude this is great!!!💕💕💕 And its different from other fanfic's that i read currently...👍👍👍 I love how the MC is not so Op...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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This fanfic is going to be a hit. The MC is like Maki from Jujustu Kaisen, he doesn't have chakra but his physical abilities will become super human in the future.
ForgottenLife's new fanfic novel?? i think i need to see this.︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎
Not gonna lie, I can feel that this ff of yours will be huge hit in the future. Although naruto ff(webnovel) are so many which I couldn't count with typical plot,this story brings a broad idea on naruto ff so keep going author.
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Who will be the love interest? Please let Tsunade be the love interest. Even if she is old, you can make her learn senjutsu, she will gain her vitality.(cuz she is a senju)
It’s a great story! The author said it will continue, hope it starts back up soon.