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Hello, it's the author again. This time, I'm going to post a lengthy review that Webnovel has blocked. Despite the fact that I had already asked the WN about it, they advised me to simply wait until this review was published. However, after three months, I discovered that this review was still blocked, and I couldn't even find it in my notification history. (So, the screenshot below was taken three months ago.)
Hello, it's the author again! First, I want to say, thanks for your support! Here, I just want to say something about this story. Some of you might wonder why the MC is more like an "observer" who is just watching curiously? Yes, that's because I purposefully made the MC more of an "observer" in the first few chapters, especially in the beginning arc, because he only wanted to live "leisurely" in this life and didn't want to get involved with anything else. But later, there would be an arc that would make him change his mind and become more involved in everything. From that point forward, he would be our primary focus.
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First of all I think the world building is quite interesting! The whole thing about involving old features (like an education on an academy and room mates) with new ones (like this whole technological advances) and the fact that there are dangers out there, with monsters and all, is awesome! I like how you write, it's easy to keep up with the story!! Also, I enjoyed how you represented the MC: apathic and maybe "lazy", perhaps with more mature traits! Just as he lived other lives before! Well done!
I was amazed at your writing style . It's really easy and catchy not to mention that story is good . Highly recommended . Everyone give it a try you will not regret reading
just.... i like this story'..... .. ................. ........ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi, nice writing I love it, can't wait for the continuation of the story. Cheers, I'm waiting for your best work. Don't take too long to UPP the newest chapter
Karena bahasa inggrisku dalam writing pas ngepas Jadi tolong maafkan aku pakai bahasa Ceritanya udah mengalir banget kak Pingin baca kelanjutannya
Wow,i love this....... I love the character and the storyline....... Give me more chapter please........................................ .......
This novel is interesting. I like the way the author describes school. Kyle's character builds off to a great start. The characteristic of the author's writing which is very crisp and dynamic makes me feel at home reading. Cheers, Author.
Hello, Author! . An Excellent storyline, Author. Give me more chapters, please? . So why don't you update the next chapter? I can't hardly wait to read more and more 💜💜
It's one unique story, enjoyed reading and seeing the journey of Kyle and his group of friends. The unity, cooperation and the mix of magic, just wowed me. Looking forward to more from you.
The writing quality of the book was amazingly understandable, Every scene and every emotion of the protagonist is easy to read. The synopsis itself is gripping so is the novel. [img=recommend]
This review is part of a review swap. I'm not sure what to make of it, six chapters in. The premise of the protagonist having lived in this same place in the past is neat, but it has very little to do with the story so far and seems inconsistent. In the first chapter, he seems surprised by the existence of cars compared to the carriages in his previous life... but then another character being his childhood friend lets her predict one of his attacks, which implies he's been here for long enough that he should know what cars are. We've received a ton of character names and little more than fight scenes and unattributed dialogue between the cast. The fights themselves aren't very mechanic-heavy, being about as detailed as "He coated his blade with shadow magic! She dodged!" The premise is great, and it seems like eventually the characters will have some fun interpersonal relationships, but so far, the protagonist is doing little more than watching curiously as other people talk about the school and fight.
Waow, good and amazing plot. every chapter is cool and please enthusiastic about publishing, Ka Aida! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Best story with a twisted plot. I love this kind of different untypical story so the readers will get the point of the story. Keep up your good work, author 👍🏽♥️🥰
very good story i like it. The characters are cool too. moreover the plot entered my mind. This is highly recommended ,🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
This story is very interesting. The fantasy element is certainly an attraction in itself. I highly recommend this book. really makes me curious about the story... 🤩🤩🤩
good and amazing plot, understandable and easy to understand but keeps on making me curious[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Really a good story with a good starting which got me hooked. I am sure that this story has the potential to grow. I love the story and the main character! Good luck <3
Okay so I am here for a review, Firstly, I want to appreciate the creativity and insights of Author. Thank you for sharing this book with us. Secondly, The sroty line and plot is so good that I got bit lost in reading (Which is a positive sign) Really amazing read. KEEP UP THE WORK!!
I like the way you put kyle here. but it seems his identity it's foggy to me, but it's hilarious, the cover tell that kyle was a noble jerk? And it's good tho but you need improvement in kyle's identity
For one I got myself immersed reading this because of its sharpened and bold writing. The author have an ear for style. It just flow so smoothly. Your editor did a great job. You two need a pat on the back from an ancient fox for making a good story in this platform.
it is different from things I usually read, but once I started, I was sucked in to the story so deeply I had a hard time to stop reading, so I could write this review. I think this book can be best discribed in one word; amazing!
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
Fantasy stories by investigating the academy are indeed interesting. Moreover, Kyle's identity still I doubt whether he is really an ordinary person? This story has the potential to be known by the readers! So, cheer up!❣️
good story, and I like this story... recomendeddd [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
pretty good so far, there still a few mistake but it doesn't really bothering me, keep up the spirit author 👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Interesting story, looking forwars to read more. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi, Author here! I'm back again after a long busy life for almost 3 years. Please give me a lots of your love and support! (~￣³￣)~ Thank you! Have a good time~~~ (๑˙❥˙๑)
Hello, it's the author again. This time, I'm going to post a lengthy review that Webnovel has blocked. Despite the fact that I had already asked the WN about it, they advised me to simply wait until this review was published. However, after three months, I discovered that this review was still blocked, and I couldn't even find it in my notification history. (So, the screenshot below was taken three months ago.)
Hello, it's the author again! First, I want to say, thanks for your support! Here, I just want to say something about this story. Some of you might wonder why the MC is more like an "observer" who is just watching curiously? Yes, that's because I purposefully made the MC more of an "observer" in the first few chapters, especially in the beginning arc, because he only wanted to live "leisurely" in this life and didn't want to get involved with anything else. But later, there would be an arc that would make him change his mind and become more involved in everything. From that point forward, he would be our primary focus.
Revelar Spoiler First of all I think the world building is quite interesting! The whole thing about involving old features (like an education on an academy and room mates) with new ones (like this whole technological advances) and the fact that there are dangers out there, with monsters and all, is awesome! I like how you write, it's easy to keep up with the story!! Also, I enjoyed how you represented the MC: apathic and maybe "lazy", perhaps with more mature traits! Just as he lived other lives before! Well done!
I was amazed at your writing style . It's really easy and catchy not to mention that story is good . Highly recommended . Everyone give it a try you will not regret reading
just.... i like this story'..... .. ................. ........ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi, nice writing I love it, can't wait for the continuation of the story. Cheers, I'm waiting for your best work. Don't take too long to UPP the newest chapter
Karena bahasa inggrisku dalam writing pas ngepas Jadi tolong maafkan aku pakai bahasa Ceritanya udah mengalir banget kak Pingin baca kelanjutannya
Wow,i love this....... I love the character and the storyline....... Give me more chapter please........................................ .......
This novel is interesting. I like the way the author describes school. Kyle's character builds off to a great start. The characteristic of the author's writing which is very crisp and dynamic makes me feel at home reading. Cheers, Author.
Hello, Author! . An Excellent storyline, Author. Give me more chapters, please? . So why don't you update the next chapter? I can't hardly wait to read more and more 💜💜
It's one unique story, enjoyed reading and seeing the journey of Kyle and his group of friends. The unity, cooperation and the mix of magic, just wowed me. Looking forward to more from you.
The writing quality of the book was amazingly understandable, Every scene and every emotion of the protagonist is easy to read. The synopsis itself is gripping so is the novel. [img=recommend]
This review is part of a review swap. I'm not sure what to make of it, six chapters in. The premise of the protagonist having lived in this same place in the past is neat, but it has very little to do with the story so far and seems inconsistent. In the first chapter, he seems surprised by the existence of cars compared to the carriages in his previous life... but then another character being his childhood friend lets her predict one of his attacks, which implies he's been here for long enough that he should know what cars are. We've received a ton of character names and little more than fight scenes and unattributed dialogue between the cast. The fights themselves aren't very mechanic-heavy, being about as detailed as "He coated his blade with shadow magic! She dodged!" The premise is great, and it seems like eventually the characters will have some fun interpersonal relationships, but so far, the protagonist is doing little more than watching curiously as other people talk about the school and fight.
Waow, good and amazing plot. every chapter is cool and please enthusiastic about publishing, Ka Aida! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Best story with a twisted plot. I love this kind of different untypical story so the readers will get the point of the story. Keep up your good work, author 👍🏽♥️🥰
very good story i like it. The characters are cool too. moreover the plot entered my mind. This is highly recommended ,🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
This story is very interesting. The fantasy element is certainly an attraction in itself. I highly recommend this book. really makes me curious about the story... 🤩🤩🤩
good and amazing plot, understandable and easy to understand but keeps on making me curious[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Really a good story with a good starting which got me hooked. I am sure that this story has the potential to grow. I love the story and the main character! Good luck <3
Okay so I am here for a review, Firstly, I want to appreciate the creativity and insights of Author. Thank you for sharing this book with us. Secondly, The sroty line and plot is so good that I got bit lost in reading (Which is a positive sign) Really amazing read. KEEP UP THE WORK!!
I like the way you put kyle here. but it seems his identity it's foggy to me, but it's hilarious, the cover tell that kyle was a noble jerk? And it's good tho but you need improvement in kyle's identity
For one I got myself immersed reading this because of its sharpened and bold writing. The author have an ear for style. It just flow so smoothly. Your editor did a great job. You two need a pat on the back from an ancient fox for making a good story in this platform.
it is different from things I usually read, but once I started, I was sucked in to the story so deeply I had a hard time to stop reading, so I could write this review. I think this book can be best discribed in one word; amazing!
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
Fantasy stories by investigating the academy are indeed interesting. Moreover, Kyle's identity still I doubt whether he is really an ordinary person? This story has the potential to be known by the readers! So, cheer up!❣️
good story, and I like this story... recomendeddd [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
pretty good so far, there still a few mistake but it doesn't really bothering me, keep up the spirit author 👍👍👍👍👍👍🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Interesting story, looking forwars to read more. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi, Author here! I'm back again after a long busy life for almost 3 years. Please give me a lots of your love and support! (~￣³￣)~ Thank you! Have a good time~~~ (๑˙❥˙๑)