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well... pratically a mess you cant mix naruto bleach highschool dxd and arifureta and basically trow chacters left and right and hope for the best the best way to explain this novel is to compare it to a very bad made chimera that need to be burned
One of my favourite naruto fanfic. It's just i'm sad because they remove chapter 19
It's a piece of rubbish, full of nonsense and Chinese...................................... .............................................................. .......
Loved this story. The translation is bad and in need of and editing ASAP, but it is still understandable and fun. Just one question to the translator, what happened to chapter 19 good damn it???
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The story is good but when there as a chapter that don’t existe the 19 well you know there is a problème because we don’t now why is not there so for me better to just quit that continues and don’t now
Forced interactions and cringe dialogues hurt my soul but when I think that this novel is like a fever dream I feel better and thinks that it's hella good.
a história não é ruim, só é mau escrita e cheia de furos de roteiro ,a história se perde em vários ocasiões, de ser por inexperiência do outro, pois o conceito por trás da narrativa é interessante, nas mãos de um autor qualificado poderia ser uma grande obra, mas por conta desses pontos só fica como média pra baixo.
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القصة جميلة شكرن لك لقد قرائتها من البدايه إلى النهاية القصة رائعة و تطور الحبكة جيد من البداية إلى النهاية لاكن هناك تفاصيل ناقصه في القصة من النظام إلى حياة فين ولم تكمل تفاصيل زواج فين في القصة لاكن بشكل عام لك جزيل الشكر والتقدير والاحترام المتبادل مني على هذه القصة الجميلة
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Good novel, passed the point in a few moments. But it has some good ideas, and some good plots.
Whole story all together is a good read.since i always look for Naruto fanfics, my review may be biased a bit. since finding good fics for Naruto franchisee is rare.Nerfing the character for character growth and making story interesting was good attempt story wise. but made the story bit frustrating since i like OP MCs, But attepmpt was good .
I really enjoy it and I hope to read other work from the author at the latter date
the story was pretty good👍, and the merging of the different worlds was also done very well, the ending was a bit cliche but overall a good read
Please use grammerly or something. Your English is literally unbearable please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
This is so trashy bruh, I just could not handle anymore of the MC’s BS like bruh all of this makes no sense . This is big trash like ultra mega trash in fact Just to prove how trash this fic is l present to you its physical embo diment:
While reading this i started to hate the name finn Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count
Everything you need to know about this story: 1. The name of the hero... A setting in which everyone has Japanese names. Finn... Anderson... Words are superfluous here. 2. In each new sentence and/or paragraph, the name of the hero. It's like I didn't understand his name the first time. 3. Another slave of the system.
The only reason for the two two stars i gave is that the "story" is finished and its a fanfic so he had a Background BUT this "story" is horrible it begin like almost every fanfic and a few nivels mc died meets rob Reincarnation after that the story goes from 0 to 100 in a few sentences which DONT make any sense dont read sry for the bad english
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I was looking for a good naruto fanfic to resd when I found this and started reading. I would like to thank the author for being one of the few to actually finish the story. Thank you.
A good (great 😁😁😁😁 :)) fanfic just can't be described in words. A well-written fit plot and even combined 3 different ones such as Level Up Alone, Narutoi DxD Demons High School. I respect you author.
I love this series like adding more harem members in chapter gaps not too frequently and adding more worlds and new girls like rias and tio . I hope you continue I had a stone so i gave it to this story I am also new to this website
well... pratically a mess you cant mix naruto bleach highschool dxd and arifureta and basically trow chacters left and right and hope for the best the best way to explain this novel is to compare it to a very bad made chimera that need to be burned
One of my favourite naruto fanfic. It's just i'm sad because they remove chapter 19
It's a piece of rubbish, full of nonsense and Chinese...................................... .............................................................. .......
Loved this story. The translation is bad and in need of and editing ASAP, but it is still understandable and fun. Just one question to the translator, what happened to chapter 19 good damn it???
Very little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little haremVery little harem
The story is good but when there as a chapter that don’t existe the 19 well you know there is a problème because we don’t now why is not there so for me better to just quit that continues and don’t now
Forced interactions and cringe dialogues hurt my soul but when I think that this novel is like a fever dream I feel better and thinks that it's hella good.
a história não é ruim, só é mau escrita e cheia de furos de roteiro ,a história se perde em vários ocasiões, de ser por inexperiência do outro, pois o conceito por trás da narrativa é interessante, nas mãos de um autor qualificado poderia ser uma grande obra, mas por conta desses pontos só fica como média pra baixo.
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القصة جميلة شكرن لك لقد قرائتها من البدايه إلى النهاية القصة رائعة و تطور الحبكة جيد من البداية إلى النهاية لاكن هناك تفاصيل ناقصه في القصة من النظام إلى حياة فين ولم تكمل تفاصيل زواج فين في القصة لاكن بشكل عام لك جزيل الشكر والتقدير والاحترام المتبادل مني على هذه القصة الجميلة
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Good novel, passed the point in a few moments. But it has some good ideas, and some good plots.
Whole story all together is a good read.since i always look for Naruto fanfics, my review may be biased a bit. since finding good fics for Naruto franchisee is rare.Nerfing the character for character growth and making story interesting was good attempt story wise. but made the story bit frustrating since i like OP MCs, But attepmpt was good .
I really enjoy it and I hope to read other work from the author at the latter date
the story was pretty good👍, and the merging of the different worlds was also done very well, the ending was a bit cliche but overall a good read
Please use grammerly or something. Your English is literally unbearable please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
This is so trashy bruh, I just could not handle anymore of the MC’s BS like bruh all of this makes no sense . This is big trash like ultra mega trash in fact Just to prove how trash this fic is l present to you its physical embo diment:
While reading this i started to hate the name finn Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count
Everything you need to know about this story: 1. The name of the hero... A setting in which everyone has Japanese names. Finn... Anderson... Words are superfluous here. 2. In each new sentence and/or paragraph, the name of the hero. It's like I didn't understand his name the first time. 3. Another slave of the system.
The only reason for the two two stars i gave is that the "story" is finished and its a fanfic so he had a Background BUT this "story" is horrible it begin like almost every fanfic and a few nivels mc died meets rob Reincarnation after that the story goes from 0 to 100 in a few sentences which DONT make any sense dont read sry for the bad english
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I was looking for a good naruto fanfic to resd when I found this and started reading. I would like to thank the author for being one of the few to actually finish the story. Thank you.
A good (great 😁😁😁😁 :)) fanfic just can't be described in words. A well-written fit plot and even combined 3 different ones such as Level Up Alone, Narutoi DxD Demons High School. I respect you author.
I love this series like adding more harem members in chapter gaps not too frequently and adding more worlds and new girls like rias and tio . I hope you continue I had a stone so i gave it to this story I am also new to this website