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Pretty meh overall, started out pretty good but my excitement fizzled out pretty soon. Also, there were some disappointing changes made. Not really my cup of tea, but maybe good for a time burner.
well,, writing is good, updates is good, background is good. summary.. if youre looking into generic SI shield hero fanfic with kingdom building, this one for you. but i youre looking for full adventurous fanfic with neutral or chaotic morality, dont pick this one.
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I haven't watch rising hero shield yet. So yeah I can't understand much of the background of it..... BUT IT'S GOOD STORY NOT SOME GENERIC OTAKU MC WITHOUT KNOWLEDGE OF HIS MAIN WORLD THIS HAS HE IS A LAWYER AT THAT AND GOOD LEADER.
The world is fleshed out, the characters are understandable, and the story is well paced. This book is really good and the only complaint I have is that our protagonists teammates, don't get enough screen time, and don't have any personality traits that aren't entirely two-dimensional ( like Rishia being the skilled, pretty girl ).
Revelar Spoiler
I absolutely loved the foreshadowing used on events in the book. As a reader of the light novel I love that we get to see more of the legendary bow Heroes adventures. I absolutely loved bow hero, he was my favorite cardinal hero, but I was dissapointed at the anime’s minimal coverage so I loved the new ideas
Sorry for the rather rushed pacing of these chapters so far, but I promise once we reach Glass' World (which I have already written) will have much better pacing! Thanks for reading!
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The story is very interesting! Please don't drop this! .............................................................................................
Keep up the good work!......................................................................................................................................
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Good world building, daily uploads, fast paced fun. A very different kind of story than than the canon Rising of the shield hero, but it still fits in the same world.
im enjoying the read. snddnnndndemmemme ee ddmdmrkrkrmrmrmrrmrrmmrmrmrrmrmmrmrkrkrkrkrkrkkrkrkkrkrkrkrkkrkkrkrkkrkrkrdkkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkkrkrkkrkr
just rating I'm a human not a bot ..........................................................................................................
Heh well you do a good job on this, and we've been talkin on Fanfiction so I know your a calm guy and pretty interested in my crazy train of a story but between us you do good building the world and characters which is great I'm better with focusing on the mc and trying to just keep him geared towards his role so he has to be a bit cheaty skill, party, and weapon wise as he's fighting heroes and villains they just get stronger thats known in this universe mainly for the heroes so keep up the good work, I'll be keepin up my crazy train in the meanwhile as you and a few frequent commentators enjoy it regardless of of the mc seems broken given that he's supposed to be to his job
I haven't read that much so far, but so far so good. I am pretty interested to know who the main love interest will be! Keep up the good work and don't drop this!
Love this story! Overall the plot is good and the story is enjoyable, and I also like Indigo, but the pacing is a bit too fast. Overall, I do like where this is going.
One of the best Rising of the Shield Hero fanfictions out there! If you're looking for a short but enjoyable read, without breaking the rules of canon and with the MC still doing his own things, this is the story for you! 10/10, must read.
Although this fanfic will have some romance, it will be later in the story. After September begins, I will upload twice a week instead of daily.
I have put a lot of effort into writing this story, and it is mainly based off the light novels, with a hint of the anime sprinkled in it as well. It will be formatted like a light novel, and I will write at least a hundred chapters.
So our MC is a Law student and cautious person at the start of the story but the author threw it on the ocean, it got the same plot like the OG there some different of course like the male filolial but, there is no Filo in Naofumi party maybe? I give it a chance if there are interesting things happened up to 20 chapters but there isn't and I am done with it. What I don't like is the non-existing character there is no screen time of the other characters we only have MC perspective, too much fast pace that u don't care about MC and its surroundings. U need to know first Shield Hero if u want to understand how to read this, Lastly how the MC became a robot that u control in RPG, always following orders and don't question that there is a suspicion going on to his surroundings. That's all my thoughts for this ff, no hard feeling for this author I have to be harsh because, how disappointed I am on this ff.
Revelar Spoiler u sir are a god almost as powerful as I ....................................................,.......................................... ....
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice.
Pretty meh overall, started out pretty good but my excitement fizzled out pretty soon. Also, there were some disappointing changes made. Not really my cup of tea, but maybe good for a time burner.
well,, writing is good, updates is good, background is good. summary.. if youre looking into generic SI shield hero fanfic with kingdom building, this one for you. but i youre looking for full adventurous fanfic with neutral or chaotic morality, dont pick this one.
adaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I haven't watch rising hero shield yet. So yeah I can't understand much of the background of it..... BUT IT'S GOOD STORY NOT SOME GENERIC OTAKU MC WITHOUT KNOWLEDGE OF HIS MAIN WORLD THIS HAS HE IS A LAWYER AT THAT AND GOOD LEADER.
The world is fleshed out, the characters are understandable, and the story is well paced. This book is really good and the only complaint I have is that our protagonists teammates, don't get enough screen time, and don't have any personality traits that aren't entirely two-dimensional ( like Rishia being the skilled, pretty girl ).
Revelar Spoiler I absolutely loved the foreshadowing used on events in the book. As a reader of the light novel I love that we get to see more of the legendary bow Heroes adventures. I absolutely loved bow hero, he was my favorite cardinal hero, but I was dissapointed at the anime’s minimal coverage so I loved the new ideas
Sorry for the rather rushed pacing of these chapters so far, but I promise once we reach Glass' World (which I have already written) will have much better pacing! Thanks for reading!
Idvsodjdihdshsgisjhhbsknbhsibveuibvuidjjgusu8gvhiggigvsuisvsuhscsush ud9lhjsbbuiejbjfighsvbskhvskygsbjejvsjshhsihhsugsvhshsbjdvdjdbvdisbdbsjhsvsjshshsbdv
The story is very interesting! Please don't drop this! .............................................................................................
Keep up the good work!......................................................................................................................................
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Good world building, daily uploads, fast paced fun. A very different kind of story than than the canon Rising of the shield hero, but it still fits in the same world.
im enjoying the read. snddnnndndemmemme ee ddmdmrkrkrmrmrmrrmrrmmrmrmrrmrmmrmrkrkrkrkrkrkkrkrkkrkrkrkrkkrkkrkrkkrkrkrdkkrkrkrkrkrkrkrkkrkrkkrkr
just rating I'm a human not a bot ..........................................................................................................
Heh well you do a good job on this, and we've been talkin on Fanfiction so I know your a calm guy and pretty interested in my crazy train of a story but between us you do good building the world and characters which is great I'm better with focusing on the mc and trying to just keep him geared towards his role so he has to be a bit cheaty skill, party, and weapon wise as he's fighting heroes and villains they just get stronger thats known in this universe mainly for the heroes so keep up the good work, I'll be keepin up my crazy train in the meanwhile as you and a few frequent commentators enjoy it regardless of of the mc seems broken given that he's supposed to be to his job
I haven't read that much so far, but so far so good. I am pretty interested to know who the main love interest will be! Keep up the good work and don't drop this!
Love this story! Overall the plot is good and the story is enjoyable, and I also like Indigo, but the pacing is a bit too fast. Overall, I do like where this is going.
One of the best Rising of the Shield Hero fanfictions out there! If you're looking for a short but enjoyable read, without breaking the rules of canon and with the MC still doing his own things, this is the story for you! 10/10, must read.
Although this fanfic will have some romance, it will be later in the story. After September begins, I will upload twice a week instead of daily.
I have put a lot of effort into writing this story, and it is mainly based off the light novels, with a hint of the anime sprinkled in it as well. It will be formatted like a light novel, and I will write at least a hundred chapters.
So our MC is a Law student and cautious person at the start of the story but the author threw it on the ocean, it got the same plot like the OG there some different of course like the male filolial but, there is no Filo in Naofumi party maybe? I give it a chance if there are interesting things happened up to 20 chapters but there isn't and I am done with it. What I don't like is the non-existing character there is no screen time of the other characters we only have MC perspective, too much fast pace that u don't care about MC and its surroundings. U need to know first Shield Hero if u want to understand how to read this, Lastly how the MC became a robot that u control in RPG, always following orders and don't question that there is a suspicion going on to his surroundings. That's all my thoughts for this ff, no hard feeling for this author I have to be harsh because, how disappointed I am on this ff.
Revelar Spoiler