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So this story says completed but it doesn't really have an end it just kinda cuts off honestly the story itself isn't bad there's a lot of weird parts and the author does occasionally forget things that they've already said but it's fun to read
are there really no continuation of the story after reaching One piece? what is the original title of this fanfic? if i am not wrong this must have been a chinese fanfic right? but the translation quality is so GREAT this is the first chinese to english translation that is VERY readable . THANK YOU FOR THE RIDE. THIS IS QUITE A JOURNEY. WHOEVER YOU ARE THANK YOU. the only thing I hate about is Danzo's ending. But not that much hate. a little because I understood why author put Danzo's ending like that so that he wont be in the next journey. it is very understandable, although I was inching towards seeing Danzo completely broken and die without dignity but was quite disappointed to see danzo break out of character unlike his usual cowardly self in his last moment. sigh but overall the story is worth reading as I can see myself reading re-reading this fanfic several more times in the future as the dialogue/reaction is quite entertaining, quite stupid in its own way. but this system is quite bad as if putting our current world as almighty and I strongly do not agree that this world of ours is anything good. I hope the leviatan from the story would come to our world instead of naruto.
a very fun story with hilarious moments...but while this fanfic had the potential to be exceptional, it is marred by 2 points: 1) the MC is stupid, weak, unwilling, barely looking to improve ... 2) the quiz is what makes you stay because it's exceptional but the more you progress in the story the less it is present (the author writes more and more boring chapters as the fanfic progresses)
I just don't like it I like overpowered mc and Fanfic that focus on mc thus is super boring and it made me fall asleep so I would a 100% not read it ever again
It's a good fanfic if I'm going to compare it to another CN fanfic! I've read 5 novels like this and this is the only one with an Ending also this one has a happy ending but I still wish there's a continuation 😔😔
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the story was the best i read of multiverse travel but the cliff hanger kills me ima gonna wait for the part 2 the o.p and naruto merge good job tyvm for the novel also please make the update of marvel constant its good too waiting for the end of lokis request video is it gonna be cliffhanged or the end :)
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O começo eu achei muito bom e engraçado, o meio eu achei mais ou menos, já o final, eu achei ruim, o que aconteceu com o MC? ..................................................................
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all is good and all but the mc ks useless shouldn't made it if your not gonna show the mc, man chapter up 70 mc was only showed 2 times..............
huh it's pain to make this review I love the concept but it's really boring to read there no conflict heck there no main character in this fiction it's painfully bland without conflict for the whole story if there is the conflict doesn't have any impact at all it's have good update schedule but that is it
All characters except mc in this fan fiction were good but the mc is pathetic and he only gets his powers from the system he doesn't even work hard when he was weak i have this type of mc and the mc is not needed in this book and my brain hurts reading this and by the writing the review for exp
The Writing Quality — there's nothing out of the ordinary because it's a translation of an already existing Chinese FIC, and if you've improved it, that's fine. Stability of Update -- Story is finished. Story development—The story's development is poor. First, the MC is given a pointless system that grants other people OP stuff while giving him virtually nothing. Second, at the end of the story, he is handed two chakra fruits that would give him enough power to annihilate everyone, but he instead hides someplace in the ARK. Characters — All the characters' personalities changed, and certain things did not make sense, such as being able to resurrect every dead person. If you read near the end of the story, you might understand. World Background — Similar to Naruto's, although everyone is an Idiot to some level. Final observations — I would not really say it's great; the finish was disappointing; the beginning was nice, but it all started to go downhill afterwards. It's not entertaining; there's no storyline, plot, or anything; it's simply an Uhh type of FIC. I respect the person who edited it and the one who posted it here, but I don't believe it was worth it.
A one track pony main character, Akatsuki becoming the CCP and destroys everyone in the pursuit of peace obtained through war. Main character tries to act the 'I walk alone I'm so edgy and cool' guy, but the first few chapters in and he's like 'ohhhhh Konan-san step on me please' and gets attacked because he's acting suspicious and being a creep. Then he goes power mad, hope he dies soon.
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Writing Quality: There are some mistakes every chapters, though not enough to make the ff bad Updates: Everyday Story Development: Kakashi is well done, but I kept feeling like this is a wuxia novel for some chapters that makes it unenjoyable. Character Design: Kakashi is well done, though some stuff doesn't make sense and is nerfed for some reason (even if he was more powerful than his OC counterpart). World Background: Eh, the Shinobi world has the best start since the powers have to build up in some way or another.
looks great but I need the raw link, I want to read it, so please share its link. I have read 3 chapters and its looks best.................
Grammer needs improvement and mc needs more screen time. I like how the mc became angry at his uselessness in chp 146/147 so i hope he gets much stronger and get revenge. The story after chp 140 gets really confusing too so it would be great if u could not show many different scenes and delays that makes me forget what is happening and i’ll need to re-read to understand. (1 example is konan heard something important from mc at around chp 140 and she was thinking of reporting it to nagato. It was only mentioned around chp 180 again that konan was thinking of reporting to nagato but bc of upcoming war she did not. It took 40 chapters. 2nd is the war which was really confusing. You mixed the before start of the war with multiple exam space appearance.) It might honestly just be because of the bad grammer that’s affecting my understanding. In a nut shell, the story really has high potential and it would without a doubt be one of the best fanfics if the grammer is improved and mc has more screen time.
Im at chap 80 Well how do i say this…. The Mc is the most useless person in This ff (he was only mentioned 2 times till chap 80) The system is just trash for the mc the rewards he gets are so low that he could have trained faster. ( a little exaggerated XD) And also no real story building there were only 2 times where the chars were in the system und both took like 35 chapters. So Yea for me it was time waste but if you are searching for a something where the main theme are quizzes about the future and the reactions of the people then give it a fry One more thing there is no comedy
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compared to other fics in the site which I rated lower by the way, writing quality is good as in its very much readable compared to the other trash in the site where your brain cells will die one by one as you read on, stability of updates is very much stable , story development is 4 for me mainly because while the plot is progressing I feel like the MC isn't needed at all as in if you put the exam system in place and take away the mc nothing would change at all, character design is meh canon characters are canon looking and I still don't know how our mc looks like other than a generic canon fodder, world background is also 3 since the Author is just using already know details about the canon series its a good and fun read to pass the time but definitely not in the top tier stories for me
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I have read all of it and for me it's probably one of the worst story and character development I've ever saw in a fan-fic. The MC is useless, the system/exams rewards are useless to him. No development in his character. We barely see him and no real interaction with other people. We only see a chaotic story full of plot holes. The concept in itself is ok, but the way it's done is just plain trash. Even the rest of the story in the OP world (not present on WN) is stupid and we don't even see the so called MC during that last part...
Revelar Spoiler So this story says completed but it doesn't really have an end it just kinda cuts off honestly the story itself isn't bad there's a lot of weird parts and the author does occasionally forget things that they've already said but it's fun to read
are there really no continuation of the story after reaching One piece? what is the original title of this fanfic? if i am not wrong this must have been a chinese fanfic right? but the translation quality is so GREAT this is the first chinese to english translation that is VERY readable . THANK YOU FOR THE RIDE. THIS IS QUITE A JOURNEY. WHOEVER YOU ARE THANK YOU. the only thing I hate about is Danzo's ending. But not that much hate. a little because I understood why author put Danzo's ending like that so that he wont be in the next journey. it is very understandable, although I was inching towards seeing Danzo completely broken and die without dignity but was quite disappointed to see danzo break out of character unlike his usual cowardly self in his last moment. sigh but overall the story is worth reading as I can see myself reading re-reading this fanfic several more times in the future as the dialogue/reaction is quite entertaining, quite stupid in its own way. but this system is quite bad as if putting our current world as almighty and I strongly do not agree that this world of ours is anything good. I hope the leviatan from the story would come to our world instead of naruto.
a very fun story with hilarious moments...but while this fanfic had the potential to be exceptional, it is marred by 2 points: 1) the MC is stupid, weak, unwilling, barely looking to improve ... 2) the quiz is what makes you stay because it's exceptional but the more you progress in the story the less it is present (the author writes more and more boring chapters as the fanfic progresses)
I just don't like it I like overpowered mc and Fanfic that focus on mc thus is super boring and it made me fall asleep so I would a 100% not read it ever again
It's a good fanfic if I'm going to compare it to another CN fanfic! I've read 5 novels like this and this is the only one with an Ending also this one has a happy ending but I still wish there's a continuation 😔😔
TECHNO BLADE|• NEVER DIES!!! •|TECHNO BLADE|• NEVER DIES!!! •|TECHNO BLADE|• NEVER DIES!!! •|TECHNO BLADE|• NEVER DIES!!! •|TECHNO BLADE|• NEVER DIES!!! BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!!
nopeee idk if this story even have mc 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
the story was the best i read of multiverse travel but the cliff hanger kills me ima gonna wait for the part 2 the o.p and naruto merge good job tyvm for the novel also please make the update of marvel constant its good too waiting for the end of lokis request video is it gonna be cliffhanged or the end :)
Мда.... тут даже что-то писать не хочу. .............................................................................. .............................................................................. ............................был большой потенциал но он был упущен......................................... ..............................................................................
where is mc mf author. . .. .. .... .. .. . ... .. .. .,. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. ... .. .. . .. .. .. ... ..
O começo eu achei muito bom e engraçado, o meio eu achei mais ou menos, já o final, eu achei ruim, o que aconteceu com o MC? ..................................................................
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Revelar Spoiler all is good and all but the mc ks useless shouldn't made it if your not gonna show the mc, man chapter up 70 mc was only showed 2 times..............
huh it's pain to make this review I love the concept but it's really boring to read there no conflict heck there no main character in this fiction it's painfully bland without conflict for the whole story if there is the conflict doesn't have any impact at all it's have good update schedule but that is it
All characters except mc in this fan fiction were good but the mc is pathetic and he only gets his powers from the system he doesn't even work hard when he was weak i have this type of mc and the mc is not needed in this book and my brain hurts reading this and by the writing the review for exp
The Writing Quality — there's nothing out of the ordinary because it's a translation of an already existing Chinese FIC, and if you've improved it, that's fine. Stability of Update -- Story is finished. Story development—The story's development is poor. First, the MC is given a pointless system that grants other people OP stuff while giving him virtually nothing. Second, at the end of the story, he is handed two chakra fruits that would give him enough power to annihilate everyone, but he instead hides someplace in the ARK. Characters — All the characters' personalities changed, and certain things did not make sense, such as being able to resurrect every dead person. If you read near the end of the story, you might understand. World Background — Similar to Naruto's, although everyone is an Idiot to some level. Final observations — I would not really say it's great; the finish was disappointing; the beginning was nice, but it all started to go downhill afterwards. It's not entertaining; there's no storyline, plot, or anything; it's simply an Uhh type of FIC. I respect the person who edited it and the one who posted it here, but I don't believe it was worth it.
A one track pony main character, Akatsuki becoming the CCP and destroys everyone in the pursuit of peace obtained through war. Main character tries to act the 'I walk alone I'm so edgy and cool' guy, but the first few chapters in and he's like 'ohhhhh Konan-san step on me please' and gets attacked because he's acting suspicious and being a creep. Then he goes power mad, hope he dies soon.
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Revelar Spoiler Writing Quality: There are some mistakes every chapters, though not enough to make the ff bad Updates: Everyday Story Development: Kakashi is well done, but I kept feeling like this is a wuxia novel for some chapters that makes it unenjoyable. Character Design: Kakashi is well done, though some stuff doesn't make sense and is nerfed for some reason (even if he was more powerful than his OC counterpart). World Background: Eh, the Shinobi world has the best start since the powers have to build up in some way or another.
looks great but I need the raw link, I want to read it, so please share its link. I have read 3 chapters and its looks best.................
Grammer needs improvement and mc needs more screen time. I like how the mc became angry at his uselessness in chp 146/147 so i hope he gets much stronger and get revenge. The story after chp 140 gets really confusing too so it would be great if u could not show many different scenes and delays that makes me forget what is happening and i’ll need to re-read to understand. (1 example is konan heard something important from mc at around chp 140 and she was thinking of reporting it to nagato. It was only mentioned around chp 180 again that konan was thinking of reporting to nagato but bc of upcoming war she did not. It took 40 chapters. 2nd is the war which was really confusing. You mixed the before start of the war with multiple exam space appearance.) It might honestly just be because of the bad grammer that’s affecting my understanding. In a nut shell, the story really has high potential and it would without a doubt be one of the best fanfics if the grammer is improved and mc has more screen time.
Im at chap 80 Well how do i say this…. The Mc is the most useless person in This ff (he was only mentioned 2 times till chap 80) The system is just trash for the mc the rewards he gets are so low that he could have trained faster. ( a little exaggerated XD) And also no real story building there were only 2 times where the chars were in the system und both took like 35 chapters. So Yea for me it was time waste but if you are searching for a something where the main theme are quizzes about the future and the reactions of the people then give it a fry One more thing there is no comedy
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compared to other fics in the site which I rated lower by the way, writing quality is good as in its very much readable compared to the other trash in the site where your brain cells will die one by one as you read on, stability of updates is very much stable , story development is 4 for me mainly because while the plot is progressing I feel like the MC isn't needed at all as in if you put the exam system in place and take away the mc nothing would change at all, character design is meh canon characters are canon looking and I still don't know how our mc looks like other than a generic canon fodder, world background is also 3 since the Author is just using already know details about the canon series its a good and fun read to pass the time but definitely not in the top tier stories for me
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I have read all of it and for me it's probably one of the worst story and character development I've ever saw in a fan-fic. The MC is useless, the system/exams rewards are useless to him. No development in his character. We barely see him and no real interaction with other people. We only see a chaotic story full of plot holes. The concept in itself is ok, but the way it's done is just plain trash. Even the rest of the story in the OP world (not present on WN) is stupid and we don't even see the so called MC during that last part...
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