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I really wanted to like this story, but it is so hard to read. The tenses change constantly and the sentences don't make any sense. The dialogue is somehow both cringe and nonsensical. At times, the story becomes weirdly self-aware. Terrible grammar aside, the main character is not smart. The world itself is generic, too.
this is a good story but not my cup of tea though... and there's some I'm confused though, I saw story the same as this though it is in indonesian language and even f I can't read it I can see some clues here and there...
I've got to say even though I haven't read all of it I love the dark backstory, not to say that I love what happens in said backstory but, it really gives depth to story and a reason for the characters mistrust. I hope to be able to write this good one day. Keep up the good work!
STORY IS GOOD BUT IT IS NEEDLESSLY ANGSTY...................................................................................................
Very nice novel, I loved reading it entirely. except for grammer mistakes, i couldnt anything faulty about this novel. I felt this novel fit my taste almost perfectly. I wish more chapters and nothing else. Thanks!
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MC is dumb… like 0 Iq. Overall, it is your generic new world based off a game scenario, so that is cool and all. However, without the main character having a brain and being weak af, it’s a hard read.
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Love it. The story really shines through after 30 chapeters, love the mc. She is dumb and has poeple who help her through out her story. Strong but not op and given her intelligence and the storys “side focus” on character interactions creates fun interaction. I have found my self having a stupid grin on my self through out half of thr story. i would highly recomend if you seek a story which you can lay back and chuckel to yourself. Ps: review was written 65 Chapters in
Kinda anxious for the kickstart, but so far everything is great. i love the mc OPness btw[img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far, its going well, I like that characters problems and the setup of her new body with implementation of new memories. It's great knowing that her new life has a backstory instead of just being dropped into another world
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I am liking it so far... I would feel blessed if I was in this guy's position literally... I am a male but.... if I somehow got transferred permanently as a fox girl I would be in very grateful because firstly. it's my favorite species and way better than humans... and I also never wanted to be a boy I found this out after I reached the peak of my teen years... I have always wanted to be a girl after the age of 16 but I think I am bi but it's hard saying... I like females sexually but not men, but I want to be a female so it's kind of confusing me...
I really wanted to like this story, but it is so hard to read. The tenses change constantly and the sentences don't make any sense. The dialogue is somehow both cringe and nonsensical. At times, the story becomes weirdly self-aware. Terrible grammar aside, the main character is not smart. The world itself is generic, too.
this is a good story but not my cup of tea though... and there's some I'm confused though, I saw story the same as this though it is in indonesian language and even f I can't read it I can see some clues here and there...
I've got to say even though I haven't read all of it I love the dark backstory, not to say that I love what happens in said backstory but, it really gives depth to story and a reason for the characters mistrust. I hope to be able to write this good one day. Keep up the good work!
STORY IS GOOD BUT IT IS NEEDLESSLY ANGSTY...................................................................................................
Very nice novel, I loved reading it entirely. except for grammer mistakes, i couldnt anything faulty about this novel. I felt this novel fit my taste almost perfectly. I wish more chapters and nothing else. Thanks!
very good story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
MC is dumb… like 0 Iq. Overall, it is your generic new world based off a game scenario, so that is cool and all. However, without the main character having a brain and being weak af, it’s a hard read.
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Love it. The story really shines through after 30 chapeters, love the mc. She is dumb and has poeple who help her through out her story. Strong but not op and given her intelligence and the storys “side focus” on character interactions creates fun interaction. I have found my self having a stupid grin on my self through out half of thr story. i would highly recomend if you seek a story which you can lay back and chuckel to yourself. Ps: review was written 65 Chapters in
Kinda anxious for the kickstart, but so far everything is great. i love the mc OPness btw[img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So far, its going well, I like that characters problems and the setup of her new body with implementation of new memories. It's great knowing that her new life has a backstory instead of just being dropped into another world
Revelar Spoiler
I am liking it so far... I would feel blessed if I was in this guy's position literally... I am a male but.... if I somehow got transferred permanently as a fox girl I would be in very grateful because firstly. it's my favorite species and way better than humans... and I also never wanted to be a boy I found this out after I reached the peak of my teen years... I have always wanted to be a girl after the age of 16 but I think I am bi but it's hard saying... I like females sexually but not men, but I want to be a female so it's kind of confusing me...