19Opiniões
4.66
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
Compartilhe seus pensamentos com outras pessoas
Escreva uma avaliação
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
exp..........................................................................................................................................
exp..........................................................................................................................................
I don't write reviews but I felt I need to. So far this has been one of my favorite One Piece ff. I haven't laughed as hard as I did for this one for an other One Piece ff. I hope the author doesn't drop.
I mus say one thing about this novel, it'S WONDERFUL, like it's pure and wonderful comedy and has a good start, then the interpretation of the Rocks pirate with the protagonist is like so funny I almost died without breath left. Continue like tyhis author, if u increase the update speed you will have high success.
I usually don't review, but I think this is a must on this one. Listen, it's good, but only for a laugh or a chuckle or two. Not that it's bad, it's just that it's a crack fic. It started good, with plot, with objectives, relative descriptions, etc. All marks of a good fan fiction, HOWEVER, it devolved instantly in a crack fic. I believe the author didn't know how to keep working on his plot or something, but it degenerated so much, I don't think it's worth it unless you want a little chuckle and that's it.
[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................
pokračuj !!!!!!!!!!! Je to zábavné [img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace]
Ummm, hey author i decided to give you 5 star cause you seem to be a nice guy lol, the concept is intersting but it would become a common concept in the future, and for the mc technique i really2 recommend you to see shanks full move set in one piece warrior 3 and 4 ( its a game) just search it on youtube, you can also see another character technique set in that game when the anime didnt show it much like shanks, oden, kaido, etc as a inspiration for other character tecnique (not just mc)
Realy funny I'm loving it man, keep going hahahah ahah. Has a good laugh hahahah Wordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordowrdowoerodkwuiwjdhdhdd....
This definitely needs some editing... I recommend using Grammarly or something. The dialog between people seems kind of awkward, but the story is good. Just need some improvement in the grammar department, but otherwise a good ff.
interesting story 👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍
Yo i sincerely hope you start updating this too itss really good 👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
exp..........................................................................................................................................
exp..........................................................................................................................................
I don't write reviews but I felt I need to. So far this has been one of my favorite One Piece ff. I haven't laughed as hard as I did for this one for an other One Piece ff. I hope the author doesn't drop.
I mus say one thing about this novel, it'S WONDERFUL, like it's pure and wonderful comedy and has a good start, then the interpretation of the Rocks pirate with the protagonist is like so funny I almost died without breath left. Continue like tyhis author, if u increase the update speed you will have high success.
I usually don't review, but I think this is a must on this one. Listen, it's good, but only for a laugh or a chuckle or two. Not that it's bad, it's just that it's a crack fic. It started good, with plot, with objectives, relative descriptions, etc. All marks of a good fan fiction, HOWEVER, it devolved instantly in a crack fic. I believe the author didn't know how to keep working on his plot or something, but it degenerated so much, I don't think it's worth it unless you want a little chuckle and that's it.
[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................
pokračuj !!!!!!!!!!! Je to zábavné [img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace][img = aktualizace]
Ummm, hey author i decided to give you 5 star cause you seem to be a nice guy lol, the concept is intersting but it would become a common concept in the future, and for the mc technique i really2 recommend you to see shanks full move set in one piece warrior 3 and 4 ( its a game) just search it on youtube, you can also see another character technique set in that game when the anime didnt show it much like shanks, oden, kaido, etc as a inspiration for other character tecnique (not just mc)
Realy funny I'm loving it man, keep going hahahah ahah. Has a good laugh hahahah Wordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordowrdowoerodkwuiwjdhdhdd....
This definitely needs some editing... I recommend using Grammarly or something. The dialog between people seems kind of awkward, but the story is good. Just need some improvement in the grammar department, but otherwise a good ff.
interesting story 👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍
Yo i sincerely hope you start updating this too itss really good 👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻👆🏻