30Opiniões
4.6
- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
Compartilhe seus pensamentos com outras pessoas
Escreva uma avaliação
Es una historia interesante y más si cumple con el cometido que se espera de estar basada en el desarrollo de un imperio y me gusta eso de que las relaciones no se fuercen sino que se construyan poco a poco así el mc que tiene una adecuada actitud como rey, lo único malo es la poca actualización que se hace
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Read up to 18chaps it's a good fic not like others where the character starts with some overpowered fruit and system .....................
The book is good it's just that talking at 15 months old is funny to read I have nothing against the author or the story but idunno 15 months old sounds strange so I find it funny(its in the synopsis) however good work author and hope you continue this
I don't know how to say it but he is not a king he is more like how to say pirate captain who have territory. the way he treats problem is kinda weird for king like he didn't have any trusted people, he always there solved all problems by himself. and I didn't like how he deals with Hancock he havehave/know her weakness but not exploit it and he seems OK how she treats him like garbage it's not like how king posed
I will stop here because I can see this is not for me. I come here expecting a kingdom building one piece fanfic but mc time is wasted in adventure and exploring and not growing his kingdom. really a king that dont rule his kingdom ? what a trash kingdom building fic. I love boa Hancock but how much mc is being a simp for her is ridiculous. he easily tell her one of the most profitable secrets of one piece(kill a devil fruit user nest to many fruits ) with a simple promise of her, he dont even know he real personality(she act like a submissive thot with luffy, it's extremely creepy. and she is more than 10 years older than him) so him expecting her to fallow in her promise is simple author forcing the plot
Revelar Spoiler
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
keep it going great book please don't drop its good make like 500 chapters that have 2000 words a page so good............. . . .............
make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife
Good novel .................................................................. ................................................................../kjdvvlvlbfdvbjljfj ...............................................................
Very good One Piece Novel! Hope Author pairs MC with Hancock.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Mediocre novel. Writing quality is subpar, characters lack depth (on "cardboard figure" level), the plot is generic and lacks creativity very much. Well, exept for "the devil fruit chooses it's master" trope, but that's not canon and pretty much cliché.
The book is good it's just that talking at 15 months old is funny to read I have nothing against the author or the story but idunno 15 months old sounds strange so I find it funny(its in the synopsis) however good work author and hope you continue this
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well... it is average. Of course better than all of those harem webnovels here, but still average......................................................
So far so good hope you continue the consistent uploads and I'm loving the development so far hope his subordinates and brothers don't fall behind when we get deeper into the story
good work!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hey author nice keep up the good work by the way i recommend you to see one piece character skill set in one piece pirate warrior like shanks, oden , etc its a great inspiration for skills you will not regret it just search on youtube
///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Enjoying it so far,something i have not seen before hope it has a lot more chaps. ..........................................................
Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ...............................................................
pretty good👍 not an expert in writing reviews. ...... keep up the good work author. will be supporting u
This seems like a solid fic. You don't waste time on explaining the whole pointless reincarnation aspect and immediately went through the plot while glossing over the background and history of where and when our mc is on the timeline which I greatly appreciate. Choice of devil fruit is unique and the setting of our mc being a ruler of a kingdom is something I haven't seen before in other fanfics which makes me very interested on where this could go. My only advice is that you don't spend too much time and overly focus on the early kingdom building stages and create other pov's from other people toward the influence from the kingdom. Also, creating an auxiliary chapter about the different OC's will very much help in following the story because it's kinda hard to keep up with all the new information. Thanks for the story and keep up the good work!
good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Mandatory shameless Author Review. This is obviously a One Piece fanfiction in which I'll try be doing some Kingdom Building shenanigans, hopefully I can deliver a satisfying story. To be clear somethings will probably be different from the true One Piece Universe, as either, A) I forget something, B) Wanna change it cause why not, or C) Oda hasn't really clarified yet so its up to my interpretation which may be wrong when it is clearly explained. Apart from that please do share your critiques and ideas about the novel in the comments or a review since frankly speaking I am FAR from a One Piece expert and will more likely then not end up getting stuff wrong. Rant over, now enjoy the novel.
Le royaume du tigre ou Tigra kingdom est prometteur, la familles royale manque un peu de charisme mais peu aller. Il y a aussi le zoan mythique du MC principal qui peut devenir très OP sinon que sont existence peut assiter à (peut être déclaré une guerre envers les autres pays) j'ai hâte de voir la rêverie si l'auteur l'ajoute 👍
Es una historia interesante y más si cumple con el cometido que se espera de estar basada en el desarrollo de un imperio y me gusta eso de que las relaciones no se fuercen sino que se construyan poco a poco así el mc que tiene una adecuada actitud como rey, lo único malo es la poca actualización que se hace
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Read up to 18chaps it's a good fic not like others where the character starts with some overpowered fruit and system .....................
The book is good it's just that talking at 15 months old is funny to read I have nothing against the author or the story but idunno 15 months old sounds strange so I find it funny(its in the synopsis) however good work author and hope you continue this
I don't know how to say it but he is not a king he is more like how to say pirate captain who have territory. the way he treats problem is kinda weird for king like he didn't have any trusted people, he always there solved all problems by himself. and I didn't like how he deals with Hancock he havehave/know her weakness but not exploit it and he seems OK how she treats him like garbage it's not like how king posed
I will stop here because I can see this is not for me. I come here expecting a kingdom building one piece fanfic but mc time is wasted in adventure and exploring and not growing his kingdom. really a king that dont rule his kingdom ? what a trash kingdom building fic. I love boa Hancock but how much mc is being a simp for her is ridiculous. he easily tell her one of the most profitable secrets of one piece(kill a devil fruit user nest to many fruits ) with a simple promise of her, he dont even know he real personality(she act like a submissive thot with luffy, it's extremely creepy. and she is more than 10 years older than him) so him expecting her to fallow in her promise is simple author forcing the plot
Revelar Spoiler 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
keep it going great book please don't drop its good make like 500 chapters that have 2000 words a page so good............. . . .............
make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife make vivi your wife
Good novel .................................................................. ................................................................../kjdvvlvlbfdvbjljfj ...............................................................
Very good One Piece Novel! Hope Author pairs MC with Hancock.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
Mediocre novel. Writing quality is subpar, characters lack depth (on "cardboard figure" level), the plot is generic and lacks creativity very much. Well, exept for "the devil fruit chooses it's master" trope, but that's not canon and pretty much cliché.
The book is good it's just that talking at 15 months old is funny to read I have nothing against the author or the story but idunno 15 months old sounds strange so I find it funny(its in the synopsis) however good work author and hope you continue this
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well... it is average. Of course better than all of those harem webnovels here, but still average......................................................
So far so good hope you continue the consistent uploads and I'm loving the development so far hope his subordinates and brothers don't fall behind when we get deeper into the story
good work!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hey author nice keep up the good work by the way i recommend you to see one piece character skill set in one piece pirate warrior like shanks, oden , etc its a great inspiration for skills you will not regret it just search on youtube
///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Enjoying it so far,something i have not seen before hope it has a lot more chaps. ..........................................................
Good novel .................................................................. .................................................................. ...............................................................
pretty good👍 not an expert in writing reviews. ...... keep up the good work author. will be supporting u
This seems like a solid fic. You don't waste time on explaining the whole pointless reincarnation aspect and immediately went through the plot while glossing over the background and history of where and when our mc is on the timeline which I greatly appreciate. Choice of devil fruit is unique and the setting of our mc being a ruler of a kingdom is something I haven't seen before in other fanfics which makes me very interested on where this could go. My only advice is that you don't spend too much time and overly focus on the early kingdom building stages and create other pov's from other people toward the influence from the kingdom. Also, creating an auxiliary chapter about the different OC's will very much help in following the story because it's kinda hard to keep up with all the new information. Thanks for the story and keep up the good work!
good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Mandatory shameless Author Review. This is obviously a One Piece fanfiction in which I'll try be doing some Kingdom Building shenanigans, hopefully I can deliver a satisfying story. To be clear somethings will probably be different from the true One Piece Universe, as either, A) I forget something, B) Wanna change it cause why not, or C) Oda hasn't really clarified yet so its up to my interpretation which may be wrong when it is clearly explained. Apart from that please do share your critiques and ideas about the novel in the comments or a review since frankly speaking I am FAR from a One Piece expert and will more likely then not end up getting stuff wrong. Rant over, now enjoy the novel.
Le royaume du tigre ou Tigra kingdom est prometteur, la familles royale manque un peu de charisme mais peu aller. Il y a aussi le zoan mythique du MC principal qui peut devenir très OP sinon que sont existence peut assiter à (peut être déclaré une guerre envers les autres pays) j'ai hâte de voir la rêverie si l'auteur l'ajoute 👍