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just wanted to know if this author is going to use Patreon for this story and what it would be under if they do.
This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.
I like the title and I think that this novel will be a great very incredible read. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
what can i say? we know what we came to read and we get it. putting that aside the world that is being built has my interest as well for its uniqueness.
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Chapter 200 is so good 😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩😊😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩
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This is a mess of unexpected things turning into a good story. I can't say that it's random, as there's some mystery to that. It's obviously a harem of moster girls. It's unique to me though, so it seems fresh. If you want, or expect, naughtiness, it has it. Enough that it makes me cross my legs tightly at times...for more than a chapter at a time. It's got crude guy (MC) humor that's actually something that gets me to laughing pretty hard & at other times I want to flip tables. I can't help but like this story. It's a pretty well thought out has direction. Editing can be a little rough at times. The author cares about the story and wants to share it with others. Thank you for sharing.
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it would be amazing if this was made into a comic. I have difficulty imagining the story because of the wnglish grammar. but it would be better if he had someone experienced edit it
Okay. So far the story has been awesome but i just finished reading chapter 108 and was thrown for a loop. Either there are missing chapters or they are out of order. Can someone please tell me the correct order to read or can author please fix it? Cause it goes from waking up in one chapter to fighting an ogre in the next. Other than this small hiccup, it has been a great novel.
monster girl = yes By the way author do you have a discord? ....................................... ........................................
was pretty good, but then changed to locked chapters, we dont get many free passes, even with membership, its cheaper to just look on other sites
It would be nice if you could go through and make sure that all the chapters are in the right order, Please.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's kinda like Monster Musume(?), but more mature and solve certain issue with interspecies relationship. It's quite enjoyable and wholesome at point. There are some nice fan services involved, what more do you want? Read it and enjoy.
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decent story but the chapters are published out of order a few times making it uninteresting to read. so don't bother trying to open it.....
Hello Please, do you have a discord server or contact? I would like to discuss with you if possible . Also I like your story. Good job 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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the story is very nice with an innovative and interesting idea, I really like that there is finally a story where there are other races, the only thing is that everyone has a system, mc has a good and coherent character, the dialogues they are good, this is more of a soft read there is not a lot of action
Havent read it Yet but is there lemons? Fndkamkwn on cnemnxkss xbxks zzjnsz kz a snx z sma s zn ks z xnsnwksjzbsmakKzbs smakxbe s Ms s M
the story is great with minor grammatical mistakes,tho it will greatly promote your novel if u can add the tag,i will give more elaborate review after that.
Over all writing quality is good with very few grammar errors. Story development is pretty good. You can't really predict what will happen next so far and it is enjoyable to read. Character development is also really good they each have unique personalities and some even have different ones so to speak depending on various situations. Update stability was good it's been 3days since the last update so I don't know if he is taking a break or what. world background is pretty dam good so far all things considered for how few chapters there are and how he has not even fully explored the island yet!
just wanted to know if this author is going to use Patreon for this story and what it would be under if they do.
This is the first novel I have decided to review, and I wish that I could rate it 5 stars. It is a great read and I have enjoyed it. Unfortunately, chapter 108 is the last chapter that is placed in order. What is supposed to be chapter 109 is only on Patreon. You won't find that out until after you have paid the money to reach chapter 109, when there is a very noticable chapter skip. If this issue gets resolved, I hope I am allowed to change this review to 5 stars. If not for this single major issue, the story would deserve 5 stars. Any other issues I have had are insignificant compared to the quality of this book. I hope this issue gets resolved so I can continue reading this story. More information can be found in my comment on chapter 108 for those who have already paid to get that far.
I like the title and I think that this novel will be a great very incredible read. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
what can i say? we know what we came to read and we get it. putting that aside the world that is being built has my interest as well for its uniqueness.
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Chapter 200 is so good 😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩😊😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩😊🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😊🤩
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Revelar Spoiler This is a mess of unexpected things turning into a good story. I can't say that it's random, as there's some mystery to that. It's obviously a harem of moster girls. It's unique to me though, so it seems fresh. If you want, or expect, naughtiness, it has it. Enough that it makes me cross my legs tightly at times...for more than a chapter at a time. It's got crude guy (MC) humor that's actually something that gets me to laughing pretty hard & at other times I want to flip tables. I can't help but like this story. It's a pretty well thought out has direction. Editing can be a little rough at times. The author cares about the story and wants to share it with others. Thank you for sharing.
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it would be amazing if this was made into a comic. I have difficulty imagining the story because of the wnglish grammar. but it would be better if he had someone experienced edit it
Okay. So far the story has been awesome but i just finished reading chapter 108 and was thrown for a loop. Either there are missing chapters or they are out of order. Can someone please tell me the correct order to read or can author please fix it? Cause it goes from waking up in one chapter to fighting an ogre in the next. Other than this small hiccup, it has been a great novel.
monster girl = yes By the way author do you have a discord? ....................................... ........................................
was pretty good, but then changed to locked chapters, we dont get many free passes, even with membership, its cheaper to just look on other sites
It would be nice if you could go through and make sure that all the chapters are in the right order, Please.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's kinda like Monster Musume(?), but more mature and solve certain issue with interspecies relationship. It's quite enjoyable and wholesome at point. There are some nice fan services involved, what more do you want? Read it and enjoy.
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decent story but the chapters are published out of order a few times making it uninteresting to read. so don't bother trying to open it.....
Hello Please, do you have a discord server or contact? I would like to discuss with you if possible . Also I like your story. Good job 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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the story is very nice with an innovative and interesting idea, I really like that there is finally a story where there are other races, the only thing is that everyone has a system, mc has a good and coherent character, the dialogues they are good, this is more of a soft read there is not a lot of action
Havent read it Yet but is there lemons? Fndkamkwn on cnemnxkss xbxks zzjnsz kz a snx z sma s zn ks z xnsnwksjzbsmakKzbs smakxbe s Ms s M
the story is great with minor grammatical mistakes,tho it will greatly promote your novel if u can add the tag,i will give more elaborate review after that.
Over all writing quality is good with very few grammar errors. Story development is pretty good. You can't really predict what will happen next so far and it is enjoyable to read. Character development is also really good they each have unique personalities and some even have different ones so to speak depending on various situations. Update stability was good it's been 3days since the last update so I don't know if he is taking a break or what. world background is pretty dam good so far all things considered for how few chapters there are and how he has not even fully explored the island yet!
Does it have harem and lemon in this novel