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One of the problems with machine-assisted translation is that if you teach the machine a wrong translation, you're going to be stuck with it. At some point, the "translator" started using the name of a different character to refer to a spirit. Now every time that spirit is mentioned (which is often, as it travels with the MC), it's the wrong name. Every time. Every chapter. It has been mentioned in the comments and paragraphs repeatedly, and never fixed. This is an OK wish-fulfillment novel, but the translation is ruining what little good is in there. It's definitely not worth the money.
A trash novel without a translator. Only someone who use machine translations to shamlessly earn some money. No coherent sentences in the later chapters and many, many errors.
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this novel has a lot of pockets, and by pockets i mean plot holes. the mc is also reslly stupid, most of the characters in the novel are stupid actually
Best stroy Don't stop writing no matter what. There are always some peoplewho will say this novel is good or bad but belive me this is the best
I rarely give up on a story, no matter how bad it gets... But this went from 1/10 to -100/10 faster than truck-kun can destroy plots. Here is a decent suggestion, don't start on this, if you do, then have fun until you facepalm so hard you will need a forehead transplant.
Its actually a really goof story. Personal the flow of the story is good. But to prove it you can try to read the story yourself............
Good good good good good 👌👍👍👍👍👍. Should definitely try. Very good story, no very very very very very very very very very very very very very good!
Not my taste. The mc actions don't make sense to me. Just leaving a comment to mark that I read this novel............................................. . . . . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . .
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Great story, wish it updated more but still worth the waiting for the storyline itself. Would definitely recommend this story to others to read.
The only thing commendable about the Characters is the MC because he is maybe the most consistent one even if he throws away characters and allies like they’re wet tissues, so far Ernest popped back into the novel with a different background and a eighth of a brain left from her very first intro sequence, ping or ling whatever his name was from the water sages battle disappeared without word, same with Winnie but better-ish, he never settled his noble status for his family yet, so his family is probably out on the streets. Oh yeah he never got any type of achievement for becoming a body cultivator though it atleast hints that he’ll awaken the lightning attribute. anyway the story has a lot of Background errors that are fumbled arounds with and the same can be said for characters also basically the world setting is decent enough power scaling is off somewhat but whatever, if you care about MC development instead of everthing else then sure decent enough to be a “nothing better to do”read but not nearly enough effort was put into keeping details consistent for side characters and world development.
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feels like it was written by a grade schooler. definitely on the list of trash novels not worth wasting time on, but not the absolute worst on this platform plot is a mixture of contrived nonsense and cliches and illogical thought processes. feels like the love child of a bad fan-fic of some bad isekai novel met a bad cultivation novel, and then the scenes were chopped up and thrown together. i think the author had some scenes from other novels in mind and tried to recreate them into his poorly thought out story. not the worst on this platform, but it is on the list of trash i don't want to read. could have genuinely been written by a kid. if so, sorry for the scathing review, maybe come back to writing after you have more experience/graduate from grade-school? if you enjoy this novel: my condolences, the webnovel app must have taken it's toll on you. I feel your pain, there are many bad stories on here, but try to recover, maybe pick up a "professional" novel every now and then so as to dilute your sinking standards with something of quality?
THere are 2 wolfs tHat are within you And this novel invokes the sTronger one in you one hates the auther and the way he Writes the oTher loves cringe and can keep the other from stopping you from reading
At first it was good, but after finding the treasure it was ruined, there is no longer talk of many characters and even a character as simple as the snake.
Incredibly badly written, jumping around making no sense and just leaving stuff that can be simply explained out Author invalidates his own Power system pretty much immediately, I do like unbeatable MCs but this is just way too badly done
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Skip this terrible story. How was this even voted for? The grammar is barely passable. Overused concepts that are in almost every novel these days. From the first chapter I knew this was going to be garbage.
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This "translated" novel is a perfect example for terrible and incomprehensible work of a so called "translation team". It is entirely machine translated, without any form of proofreading or editing after the translation. this way you have only "one sentence paragraphs" throughout the chapters. It is easy to determine that they just translate a sentence after sentence on hope that at least a little bit is understandable. Don't get me wrong, the story itself might be interesting to read, but not for money with this kind of translation quality.
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I'm not sure what everyone else is seeing but as far as I have read the writing skips and sometimes makes no sense the plot is washed up and a dime a dozen on here I love the story but it is mediocre at best needs to be cleaned up a lot or get a proper translator I will still read it but its not what I wanna see on the free read section I swear they put the worst books on here to add to free read
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I don't even know wth I'm reading. Hogwarts? What? This is just some random CN garbage mixed with some western magic, it makes no sense whatsoever.
Dropped for many reasons but i will only name a few. World building is non-existent, besides the kingdom he’s residing in, no other information is given. the author forgets the tiers of the very very few spells the mc knows, literally 3 spells. Author should not have even put tiers to mages because since the start of the novel although he’s a tier 1 mage, he can somehow have enough mana to cast a tier 10 spell “although it sucks his mana dry” so he can just kill anyone now and nothing is an issue. He progresses too fast, he doesn’t even have to learn anything which was initially the only requirement needed. He just sees a demonstration an can instantly level it up. No one finds it strange that he can somehow cast tier 5+ magic even though he was a tier 3 mage after a “month” (but if you read the novel only a few days has passed) just because he “practiced very hard for 3 years not being able to cast a tier 1 fireball. no plot what so ever, just random 3 chapter events. A few times throughout character names change randomly which you could completely forget about because besides their class and tier there is no other information besides he’s intimidating or she’s a goddess. Overall, extremely low quality for a OP MC novel which are easier to write given the plot armor. Wouldn’t even recommend it for a passing-time novel.
One of the problems with machine-assisted translation is that if you teach the machine a wrong translation, you're going to be stuck with it. At some point, the "translator" started using the name of a different character to refer to a spirit. Now every time that spirit is mentioned (which is often, as it travels with the MC), it's the wrong name. Every time. Every chapter. It has been mentioned in the comments and paragraphs repeatedly, and never fixed. This is an OK wish-fulfillment novel, but the translation is ruining what little good is in there. It's definitely not worth the money.
A trash novel without a translator. Only someone who use machine translations to shamlessly earn some money. No coherent sentences in the later chapters and many, many errors.
Valla çok saçma gelişme yonti yok iksirle gelisiyon zengin olan gelirisirken fakir yerinde sayar mantığı yapmislar bana saçma geldi bide heyecan yoksunu bı seri olmuş dün duz
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this novel has a lot of pockets, and by pockets i mean plot holes. the mc is also reslly stupid, most of the characters in the novel are stupid actually
Best stroy Don't stop writing no matter what. There are always some peoplewho will say this novel is good or bad but belive me this is the best
I rarely give up on a story, no matter how bad it gets... But this went from 1/10 to -100/10 faster than truck-kun can destroy plots. Here is a decent suggestion, don't start on this, if you do, then have fun until you facepalm so hard you will need a forehead transplant.
Its actually a really goof story. Personal the flow of the story is good. But to prove it you can try to read the story yourself............
Good good good good good 👌👍👍👍👍👍. Should definitely try. Very good story, no very very very very very very very very very very very very very good!
Not my taste. The mc actions don't make sense to me. Just leaving a comment to mark that I read this novel............................................. . . . . . . .. .. . . . . .. . . . .
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Great story, wish it updated more but still worth the waiting for the storyline itself. Would definitely recommend this story to others to read.
The only thing commendable about the Characters is the MC because he is maybe the most consistent one even if he throws away characters and allies like they’re wet tissues, so far Ernest popped back into the novel with a different background and a eighth of a brain left from her very first intro sequence, ping or ling whatever his name was from the water sages battle disappeared without word, same with Winnie but better-ish, he never settled his noble status for his family yet, so his family is probably out on the streets. Oh yeah he never got any type of achievement for becoming a body cultivator though it atleast hints that he’ll awaken the lightning attribute. anyway the story has a lot of Background errors that are fumbled arounds with and the same can be said for characters also basically the world setting is decent enough power scaling is off somewhat but whatever, if you care about MC development instead of everthing else then sure decent enough to be a “nothing better to do”read but not nearly enough effort was put into keeping details consistent for side characters and world development.
Lixo Completo!!!!!!!!! Protagonista Inútil!!!!!! Enredo Bosta!!!!!!!!!!!!! E sem nenhuma criatividade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
feels like it was written by a grade schooler. definitely on the list of trash novels not worth wasting time on, but not the absolute worst on this platform plot is a mixture of contrived nonsense and cliches and illogical thought processes. feels like the love child of a bad fan-fic of some bad isekai novel met a bad cultivation novel, and then the scenes were chopped up and thrown together. i think the author had some scenes from other novels in mind and tried to recreate them into his poorly thought out story. not the worst on this platform, but it is on the list of trash i don't want to read. could have genuinely been written by a kid. if so, sorry for the scathing review, maybe come back to writing after you have more experience/graduate from grade-school? if you enjoy this novel: my condolences, the webnovel app must have taken it's toll on you. I feel your pain, there are many bad stories on here, but try to recover, maybe pick up a "professional" novel every now and then so as to dilute your sinking standards with something of quality?
THere are 2 wolfs tHat are within you And this novel invokes the sTronger one in you one hates the auther and the way he Writes the oTher loves cringe and can keep the other from stopping you from reading
At first it was good, but after finding the treasure it was ruined, there is no longer talk of many characters and even a character as simple as the snake.
Incredibly badly written, jumping around making no sense and just leaving stuff that can be simply explained out Author invalidates his own Power system pretty much immediately, I do like unbeatable MCs but this is just way too badly done
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Skip this terrible story. How was this even voted for? The grammar is barely passable. Overused concepts that are in almost every novel these days. From the first chapter I knew this was going to be garbage.
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This "translated" novel is a perfect example for terrible and incomprehensible work of a so called "translation team". It is entirely machine translated, without any form of proofreading or editing after the translation. this way you have only "one sentence paragraphs" throughout the chapters. It is easy to determine that they just translate a sentence after sentence on hope that at least a little bit is understandable. Don't get me wrong, the story itself might be interesting to read, but not for money with this kind of translation quality.
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I'm not sure what everyone else is seeing but as far as I have read the writing skips and sometimes makes no sense the plot is washed up and a dime a dozen on here I love the story but it is mediocre at best needs to be cleaned up a lot or get a proper translator I will still read it but its not what I wanna see on the free read section I swear they put the worst books on here to add to free read
Keep it up and improving and find new plots rather than cliche............................................••• :} ) :!₹3!:!:!:₹:’!:!:₹:!:!:&
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I don't even know wth I'm reading. Hogwarts? What? This is just some random CN garbage mixed with some western magic, it makes no sense whatsoever.
Dropped for many reasons but i will only name a few. World building is non-existent, besides the kingdom he’s residing in, no other information is given. the author forgets the tiers of the very very few spells the mc knows, literally 3 spells. Author should not have even put tiers to mages because since the start of the novel although he’s a tier 1 mage, he can somehow have enough mana to cast a tier 10 spell “although it sucks his mana dry” so he can just kill anyone now and nothing is an issue. He progresses too fast, he doesn’t even have to learn anything which was initially the only requirement needed. He just sees a demonstration an can instantly level it up. No one finds it strange that he can somehow cast tier 5+ magic even though he was a tier 3 mage after a “month” (but if you read the novel only a few days has passed) just because he “practiced very hard for 3 years not being able to cast a tier 1 fireball. no plot what so ever, just random 3 chapter events. A few times throughout character names change randomly which you could completely forget about because besides their class and tier there is no other information besides he’s intimidating or she’s a goddess. Overall, extremely low quality for a OP MC novel which are easier to write given the plot armor. Wouldn’t even recommend it for a passing-time novel.